The Ancient God of the Deep Sea Will Never Die on Land

It's well written, with a few flaws, but nothing serious. It is indeed courageous to be willing to write original works when fantasy has become so desolate. It can be seen that the author wants to work hard on writing, but his experience and writing skills are still weak. If he optimizes the plot logic, he may be able to go further. Come on, don't give up halfway.

Good luck, I've invested, and I'm waiting for the author to put it on the shelves. Shouldn't he be a eunuch?

Are you here? Why don't you leave until you get your master's degree? 👍

In the past, the sea people prayed to the protagonist to submerge the entire land. Now it is said that it is too far away from the main body and cannot be thrown through, so it is very weak. So can the protagonist's power reach land? Could it be that the idea of ​​going to land is just an insignificant thought, and therefore not very powerful?

Writing fantasy is a dead end (😡)

Brothers, you can't read books during the new book period. All the results depend on pursuing reading. I have never been on the APP. I just want to rush once and turn to the last page of the new chapter as much as possible, so that it can be counted as pursuing reading. Kowtow to the big guys. (Bang bang bang bang)

How do I put it? When I read around chapter 40, I originally thought he was a behind-the-scenes pusher. Later in the story, I thought he might be an invincible traveler in the human world. However, the more I read, the more I thought it was all kinds of conspiracy theories~

I thought it was a superior God, but it turned out to be a nanny. The gap is too big to accept, but you can still watch it

I thought it was an invincible style, but it was actually a funny style.

And salted fish is really not a good character... Why do you need to advertise yourself as a salted fish? It's just self-deprecating. Will squandering one's already doubtful abilities like it doesn't matter really make readers feel happy or sympathetic?

😰After watching this protagonist for a while, I felt that he was both very strong and very weak, a contradictory feeling.

Multiple female protagonists 🤔 What does a big salted fish want a female protagonist for?

If it were pure swords and magic, serial potions would be fine. In a world with cannons, ocean civilization really couldn't defeat land civilization. The power of a bomb dropped in water is several times that on land, and there is no way to avoid it. Kraken? Internal organs shattered in minutes

I thought the plot would be about a big octopus head smashing the shrimps in front of them, but... Well... You can watch it too

A very well written novel. I hope the ancient gods in this novel can refer to the practices of Yin Shen, the protagonist of "I Am God"

It's a bit confusing, but everything else is very good, but the strength of the protagonist is an issue. Although the author used his own logic to explain it in the comment area, a mystery is a mystery. This kind of thing should be shown in the novel why and how, rather than the author explaining it in the comment area. And since the main issue in the review is this, it means that the author's treatment here must be something that readers don't understand.

So far, I think it's pretty good I'd like to tell the author a little bit about it. The protagonist is set to be a god of underwater creatures But most similar novels fail to describe the character and daily life of the "god" well. Either the b character is not good enough or the writing is like myselfyy The readers will have a strong sense of separation So can it be set to have a dual personality because of the belief in undersea creatures? Switching between two personalities, one is the "god" in the eyes of undersea creatures The other is the protagonist's self-contained humanity Would it be difficult to write like that and make us look more reasonable? (This is only a personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it. Whether the author adopts it or not does not prevent me from continuing to read)

This novel him. . Do you need to polish it a little bit? I feel like you didn't write the feeling you wanted to give us. . But it's much better than Xiaobaiwen, come on!

The big one splits into the small one, and the small one goes out with Silly Baitian, dialogue and plot etc. The idea is good, but the author's writing skills still need to be sharpened.

I didn't understand until the end →_→

Bone King Style is all about fighting wits and courage with the air.

Do all the gods in sequence 16 originate from the protagonist? Looking at the title of the protagonist, the Source of All Laws, which was first mentioned when building the Kingdom of God, and then Luca 12, the god of DNA, is this god also in this tree of soul system?

This kind of setting has become popular in several books in recent years. The typical one is the chat group of Naiqi, the less typical 98%, and Mu Susu, which is relatively niche but has a lot of die-hard fans. Take a look at the results of their second book.