Magical Girls Just Want to Get Off Work

When I first read it, I thought it was a copycat of the one after get off work, but after reading it, I found it surprisingly good. Although the plots are somewhat similar, there are still differences. This one is more refreshing. Which one is better to be different from? The characters in that book are very delicate and the inner description is very good. In this book, you can describe the battle scenes more gorgeously.

I won't go into details about the advantages for fear of spoilers, but let's talk about the disadvantages: 1. The author seems to want to express a lot of things every time he encounters a turning point, but he feels that the writing is not strong enough, so the writing feels very rushed and messy, and the general spread makes the time between each turning point quite short, lacking the process of restoring calm after the plot twists. 2. It is not substantial enough. The focus of the novel is to write about a person well and lacks in-depth character description. Every time the author narrates the character from a third-person perspective, which makes people feel weird. 3. Play jokes in moderation, and talk less about the author's "big principles" and express them more through plots. Finally, I would like to make a suggestion. The author should focus more on the characters and smooth out the plot with appropriate ups and downs. There is no need to always be the Riddler.

It's all finished here, the little blue guy next door is still dusting

There are a lot of magic uncle novels recently

As I watched, I suddenly thought that the protagonist destroyed the transformer, and then one day during a crisis, the transformer appeared inexplicably in an unexpected situation. The protagonist was involved in various disturbances. The plot was a bit familiar. Here comes a dark heroine holding the contaminated original transformer. 6. Isn't this Tiga? Thanks for my brain circuit, interpreting the magical girl from another version.

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Why don't you try to have a collaboration with that book after getting off work and becoming a magical girl? A brother and a father, let's get together! 🐶🐶🐶

Reading the two books together, I thought that if for some reason, Delphinium and Cang Yan were forced to stick in front of the juniors, the scene would make me laugh to death.

There has been a sharp increase in male mothers recently. What is the situation? There are fathers who turned into magical girls, and husbands who turned into magical girls and got caught by villains and got pregnant. Now there is a brother who turned into a magical girl. Next time, there will be a male mother who doesn't have a son, a boy, or a grandfather. Happy

I just don't quite understand why in your book and the one about the daughter next door, you don't accept the power of the magical girl at the beginning? Obviously the initial transformation was for the purpose of saving. Even if she becomes a girl, she still has to protect and fight (like the twin-tailed warrior). This is where transsexual heroines shine. After many battles, painful events, and physical and mental exhaustion, I want to retire. I can understand, but you should not resist the power itself. After all, the original transformation is for salvation.

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I feel that the elements of this article include: Kemp Method, Shoujo Revue, Madoka Magica, Magical Girl Nanoha, Battle Princess Zessori, Strike Witches Is there anything else I haven't noticed x

Ai ran for a while, and Zuo Yue's A of Clubs went berserk like this?

Is it possible for the protagonist to always become a loli magical girl but never turn back into a man? How exciting would it be?

High emotional intelligence: You can also write about daily and past events in the future. Low emotional intelligence: It's unfinished, and there are a lot of holes left unfilled.

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The author actually stole a group photo of magical girls of four colors among the readers. Laughing to death.

Damn it, is it over? I thought I was a eunuch. It was so fast.

I feel that the interpersonal relationship is a bit crude, there is no daily plot, most of the characters have no memory points, the battles are too frequent and a bit boring, and the flaws in the identity reveal are too obvious, which is a pity.

My memory of the book is a little confusing. Is this the Madoka-like book?

Magical girls are not magical lolita

Lao🧂The update will end at the right place in October, and this one will be finished in August

It suddenly occurred to me that there was a red butterfly in the novel "Black Tide 2: Doomsday Dawn" that I was about to write.

It's almost a million words, come on.