From Island Lord to King of the Pirates

I'm a little convinced by this author, and the writing style is pretty good, but how can I put it this way? I'm a bit stubborn. A wave of suspected conspiracy theories about Devil Fruit abilities has directly driven away all readers who want to read One Piece fanfics. Do you think your grades are too good?

In the world of pirates, questioning the power of fruit is poisonous!

As an heir, after taking the throne, you actually bowed to the people and begged for the people's support. You are not in modern times, let alone gaining votes in Japan. You are in the background of the feudal monarchy. It feels so rubbish. Do you understand the power of royal power! When you write like this, it feels like you, the island owner, can't get it without begging! Isn't this just to discourage readers?

In a world where everyone can practice cultivation and where force is supreme, where is the declaration of human rights? Discussing human rights is a joke. If you don't accept it, argue

I have always felt that the highlight of pirates is the Devil Fruit.

I feel that the author's writing style is not suitable for writing a pirate novel. It is too slow and takes several chapters to cover trivial matters. Nowadays, I don't see how much patience there is in pirate fan fiction. I might as well write a fairy tale, at least the results will definitely be better than those of pirates.

The writing is okay, but the Devil Fruit conspiracy theory kills me directly. Basically no one will read it later. I suggest changing it to Devil Fruit conspiracy theory. I am worried that Devil Fruit is related to some powerful pirates, so I don't dare to let myself and my friends eat it.

It's a very good subject matter, but a system must be imposed. The author doubts whether there is a conspiracy in the fruit. Why not consider whether the system also has some conspiracy, or is it that the system gives too much and is too easy. Others have worked hard for a long time to achieve it. With the system, it is available all at once. Is it really reasonable?

Ever since I read Jia Qianqian's shit-poetry masterpiece, I think the average author from Qidian is a master

I haven't read it yet, but I saw Zhou Yu,,, Wang * Sun Quan * Hai Author, are you serious?