From Island Lord to King of the Pirates

I have to admit I admire this author; the writing is decent, but how should I put it? They seem a bit stubborn. A wave of seemingly conspiracy theories about Devil Fruit abilities drove away all the readers who wanted to read One Piece fanfiction. Did they think their success was too great?

In the world of One Piece, questioning Devil Fruit abilities is a terrible thing!

As an heir who ascends the throne, you actually bow to the people to beg for their support? This isn't modern times, nor is it Japan seeking votes; this is a feudal imperial era. It feels rubbish! Do you even understand the power of royalty? The way you write it makes it seem like you, the island lord, only got your position through begging! Isn't this just discouraging readers?

In a world where everyone can cultivate and strength reigns supreme, where is the declaration of human rights? Discussing human rights is a joke; if you disagree, bring it on.

I've always felt that the main appeal of One Piece is the Devil Fruits.

I feel the author's writing style isn't suited for One Piece fanfiction; it's too slow-paced, and they spend several chapters on trivial matters. These days, who has that much patience for One Piece fanfiction? They might as well write a cultivation novel; at least that would be more successful.

The writing was alright, but the Devil Fruit conspiracy theory killed the whole thing; practically no one read it after that. I suggest changing the Devil Fruit conspiracy theory to something like, "They're worried about Devil Fruits being connected to some powerful pirates, so they don't dare let themselves or their friends eat them."

It's a great subject matter, but they had to force a system into it. The author suspects there might be a conspiracy behind the fruit, but why not consider whether the system itself might also have a conspiracy? Or is it that the system gives too much too easily, something that others have worked hard to achieve for a long time, but the system gives it all to them instantly? Is that really reasonable?

Ever since reading Jia Qianqian's awful poetry masterpiece, I think all authors on Qidian are at the level of top-tier writers.

I haven't read the rest yet, but I've gotten to Zhou Yu... Wang * Sun Quan * Hai... Author, are you serious?