Traveling Between the Earth and the Stars, I Started to Evolve from the Full Level of Chinese Martial Arts

It looks pretty good. The only criticism is the strength system. How many kilograms are there at the first level and how many kilograms are at the second level? This is too silly and sweet. It can be called brainless. The first level also has the body's limit-breaking transformation, with characteristics such as tooth replacement, and the second, third, fourth, and fifth levels? ? ? ? ?                         There is also a common phenomenon in most novels, the lack of thinking, description, and character description, which looks more distorted, like a two-dimensional plane, without a three-dimensional sense of immersion

After reading the opening chapter, I thought this book could confer the title of God, but the rest of the writing is exactly the same as Xiaobai's article 😂

To be honest, after reading the first fifty chapters, I really felt a little frustrated. When the protagonist was in the first level, the senior brother offered him a salary of 300,000? There are less than ten strong men in the whole country! Afterwards, he was targeted throughout the whole process with the Bagua Sect and didn't return it, so he still followed people's orders until the end? Shake m?

Well written. One of the best new books recently. The recommended books on Qidian are becoming less and less popular.

This book is good overall, but it is difficult for the protagonist to achieve success in martial arts. People who practice martial arts are brave, fierce, and competitive people, just like Huo Yuanjia. How can a protagonist be so secretive and timid that he can achieve anything? However, the author sets the protagonist to be the best in martial arts, which makes people feel very stiff when reading it, and it feels like he is forcibly writing a scholar into a common man.

The entire earth star is in danger, and there is still internal strife. The protagonist is still acting like a pig and eating a tiger, pretending to be a slap in the face, haha ​​tui has withdrawn

I saw many book friends saying that the protagonist was a failure, and I felt the same way. At the same time, I also think the plot design is also very immature. I won't say much about the first few dozen chapters. The author keeps suppressing the protagonist, which makes people feel frustrated. Finally, there is a national martial arts competition, which gives readers expectations. What is the result? Good guy, he retired again! The plot you designed before made the protagonist unable to stand upright. If you do this, it will only make people feel that the protagonist has a serious brain disease. Or are you saying that you think there are too many readers and you need to filter them? I was ready to leave when I saw this. No matter how wonderful your subsequent writing is, I won't continue reading. Because there are too many Qidian books, if this one doesn't work, I'll change it to another one. If it doesn't work, I can still watch videos and play games to pass the time. When you write a book, you should at least design a storyline with some delicacy. It doesn't mean that the writing is mindless, but there should be some interesting points. Just like the plot where Qiao Feng forced his way into Juxian Village, it released a wave of readers' frustrations about Qiao Feng's experience. Wouldn't that be nice?

Everything was fine before, but Chapter 59 looked uncomfortable: the protagonist has agreed to be a candidate, which means he has obeyed the country's arrangements. The country wants to test the protagonist's skills, but also pretends to be the person who attacked and killed the protagonist. I really don't understand. Just try the protagonist's skills directly. The protagonist is not hiding that he doesn't want to contribute to the country. He is so alienated from others. After all, if something like this happens in the future, do you really dare to fight back and fight with your life? It was pretty good before, so when I read Chapter 59, I felt like I was eating cake all the time and suddenly scooping up shit. This is probably the feeling.

After reading Chapter 40, I knew that I had traveled through a world and that I would be very strong when practicing martial arts. He didn't work hard to practice martial arts for a while and then went to teach others. His father also traveled through time and didn't forget to urge marriage. He didn't feel nervous at all. He knew that he was very strong but let some little people bother him. The country was so strong and he didn't notice it. Logically speaking, it would only be known if something like this happened. After killing the lion, a first-order appeared, so he didn't pay attention to the protagonist.

The pacing is poor, the hierarchy is unclear, and the world view is unclear. The beginning is quite amazing, the description of the fight is too vague, and the plot advancement is abrupt. The most important thing is that there is no psychological description of the characters, which makes it more intellectually depressing. The biggest problem is that the world view is vague, the levels are unclear, and the psychological description is poor. The whole process is written like a robot. More jokes and more interesting scenes can improve a lot of points.

I keep pretending to be stupid and slap you in the face. I really can't stand it anymore. Let me complain.

The plot of the first 39 chapters wears off half of the mood while reading it, and the next twenty or thirty chapters are immediately worn out. Are the first 39 chapters hidden just because you can't see the more exciting moments later? With the setting of pig's feet, shouldn't the previous plot develop naturally? Why would there be a plot where the strength is exposed and then the pig's feet are hidden, which is not to my liking.

I originally planned to add it to my reading list. Look at the back. It's simply a forced arrogance. Compared with this giant star, the earth is not even a moon. There are 10 billion people in such a big place. How many people can fit on this giant star? Yes~ Just beat him for future consideration, fearing that the people on earth will multiply and there will be 1,000 billion people. Then there are dungeons on your giant planet. Oh, and your various high-tech... What about the background setting? This planet's star field can only be entered but not exited. Doesn't it all depend on how the author sets it? In addition, you said it yourself, the earth once entered this star field 100,000 years ago. That shows that the author has considered that this star field can be entered and exited. Then why does it become inaccessible again in the novel? Isn't it true that the technology of these aliens is so high, many times higher than that of the earth, but they don't even have this level of technology? They all have space to store devices, but don't have any scientific ideas? I don't believe it. In this way, there are bugs everywhere. Let's see how the author rounds things up later. It just depends on the author's imagination. It cannot be said that the author's pattern is small. I can only say... It's hard to say.

What I want to read is to open up wasteland, instead of grinding away in the underground all the time. It is a book with great potential. I hope it will not be a failure because the branch plot is too delayed.

This novel reminded me of a dream in which the entire solar system was grabbed by an invisible force and the sun extinguished several planets and turned into cosmic dust. The earth was divided into several pieces of land and thrown into the center of the Virgo Super Galaxy Cluster. There was an extremely powerful civilization that cultivated immortals. The planet was an unknown number of times larger than the solar system, and countless stars revolved around it. , Every earthling has a system interface and a countdown prompt in his mind to save the galaxy before the countdown ends. In just one month, 99% of the people on earth died, and those who survived had basically cultivated to the foundation building stage, and some even reached the Golden Elixir Nascent Soul. Just when we were gathering to create a ferocious beast lord who was half a god, bad news came. A leader in the United States betrayed humanity, and a supreme elder from a top sect destroyed the entire galaxy with just one blow. Countdown in my mind, several large scarlet characters appeared [Game Over]. Even more than a month later, this dream is still fresh in my memory. I wonder if I have really traveled through time🤣

A good novel, you have to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger. This is a routine from ten years ago.

The rush to get married really raised my blood pressure. You're not getting married, right? It's not your fault to find an ancestor to come back, right? It doesn't cost your money to find a money-worshiping girl, right? I want to give birth to my son by myself. Isn't it better to be a bachelor for the rest of your life than to find an ancestor to come back and serve you?

The protagonist has just reached level 4, but everyone else has reached level 5. I don't understand.

I read the comments and they all praise it, but I don't feel that good about it. Maybe I'm not used to this rhythm. In the beginning, the male protagonist is described as a peerless genius, then he goes on a blind date to become a military attache as a coach, and then he pretends to be in love and pretends to be cool. What does this have to do with your main plot? You mentioned at the beginning that after time-traveling spiritual energy is revived, it will be no different than if you have not time-traveled. I flipped back to the next chapter and found that you were like this for chapter 75. You don't get down to business until the second volume. If you want to set the stage, I feel that your 75 chapters are really long, and the writing is average and the plot is average. It's the kind of movie where you can't find any major faults, it's not toxic, it just looks boring and boring. I just want to make a complaint. If you want to read Aura Resurrection and Survive in Another World, you can skip it and read it directly from the second volume. That's what I'm going to do.

It's destined to be fruitless, and you put this woman in the position of the heroine. If you don't want to write an emotional drama, you don't have to write it. The male protagonist can be alone until death, but it has to be very ambiguous, like a friend who is more than a lover, and the male protagonist hints, and the female protagonist doesn't respond.

Based on the average normal adult man on earth: Level 1: Evolution begins, strength is 100-1000 kilograms, lifespan is about 100; Second level: Strength 1000-5000 kilograms, life span 500 (on earth); Level 3: Strength 5,000-30,000 kilograms, lifespan 1,000 (on earth); Level 4: Strength 30,000-300,000 kilograms, lifespan (Earth 2000, Superstar 500); Level 5: Strength 300,000-3 million kilograms, lifespan (Earth 4,000, Superstar 1,000); An ordinary green-faced man is one foot tall, has a strength of 400,000 kilograms, and has a lifespan of 500 (because of his huge size); Level 6: Strength 3 million to 30 million pounds, lifespan (Earth 8000, Superstar 2000); The green-faced man is a Qingque-level master with a strength of 4 million jins and a lifespan of 800; The green-faced man is a Yuangang-level master with a strength of 10 million catties and a lifespan of 1,000; An ordinary Chiyan person has a strength of 2 million catties and a lifespan of 800; Erjiao bloodline, strength of 6 million kilograms, life span of 1,200; Triangular bloodline, strength of 10 million kilograms, life span of 2,000; Level 7: Basic strength 30 million - 1.2 Billion kilograms, lifespan (Earth 30,000, Superstar 20,000); Green-faced Man Gold Level: Initial strength is 100 million kilograms and life span is 5,000; Intermediate strength 400 million kilograms, life span 10,000; High-level strength: 1.6 Billion kilograms, lifespan: 15,000; The ultimate strength is 4 billion kilograms and the life span is 20,000; The state of Chi Yanren becoming a god: Initial strength is 50 million kilograms, life span is 10,000; Intermediate strength: 200 million kilograms, lifespan: 15,000; High-level strength: 800 million kilograms, lifespan: 20,000; Eighth level:………… (Powers are all basic powers. Martial arts, combat skills, supernatural powers, secret techniques, etc. Can all be increased and exploded. The potentials are also different and can be expanded. In addition, lifespan is just a parameter, there are differences, so don't take it seriously)

The writing gets worse and worse, and there is no logic. Even if there is a super god of science and technology who leads a team to beat the seven super gods of other people from the sea tribe, they will surround you and beat you to death, just like the super gods of other races are useless. No matter how bad a person's intelligence is, he is already at the level of a god! How can he be so different! ! !

To be honest, it was good in the past. But after arriving in the Imperial Realm, I was a little bit reluctant to accept bloodline. But many authors who write novels with core themes such as bloodline are not very popular. It may also be that we don't like the word bloodline.

The Dino civilization has 11 god-levels, so why should we go to great lengths to explode the stars? Wouldn't it be better to go directly to occupy the Earth Star? Being able to explode the star means that you already know the location of the earth star. This is a planet, and the value of ruling a planet is greater than destruction.

This book gives me the feeling that it is a formula

Dino's technology is so advanced, and if the earth star suddenly passes near the giant star, wouldn't it be an immediate disaster? This is a bug

Finished? ? ? I just finished watching it yesterday and it will be finished today. I should have known better than to watch it.

I have a colleague named Wang Benben who likes fishing. After reading the first chapter, I suspect that the protagonist is him. Is it too late for me to join him now? 😃

Why can't I send it? This chapter says

Author, I admire your courage in bringing your own country into it. When you write it, you have to figure out how to end it. Angry youths like you like to read it, but others don't dare to read it.