Mysterious Comic Life Simulator

I haven't read the book yet, but I have read the recommended ones. I only read the title and introduction for the time being. I have to mention that although it is a collision between the Marvel worldview and the Cthulhu worldview, the Marvel worldview and the Cthulhu worldview do not conflict. As we all know, Marvel editors are a group of Cthulhu fanatics. Marvel itself has a lot of Cthulhu elements. Marvel has published separate comics for the ancient gods of the Cthulhu family, and it is not an isolated universe, but a world As you can see, the Marvel Universe already has a bunch of Cthulhu bosses such as Beholders, and they are the ones who stand at the top of the Marvel Universe. Not only in the comics, I remember that Beholders appear in the plot of the new series of movies. In other words, both the comic universe and the movie universe contain Cthulhu fans. Ordinary people on earth may not be aware of it. The Ancient One is very clear about the Cthulhu system, and there is no problem of not knowing the Cthulhu taboos. You add a Grammatical worldview, but the original Marvel universe includes a Grammatical worldview. How does the author plan to deal with this conflict?

According to your settings, is Ancient One being chased by hounds or chasing hounds?

As for the reason why the author stopped updating, first of all, the author needs to be patient. I am only 22 years old and don't know much about the truth. But if there is no academic qualifications and path in real life, then writing novels may be a good way. But apart from those who are truly talented, most of the remaining good authors rely on accumulation. Everything needs time to settle, and I think the author's writing should not only consider the integration of themes, but also enrich the plot. The weird description of Cthulhu is very important, but what is the protagonist like, and whether the plot is ups and downs enough, I think it is the key point of your mix. The writing style is very important, but it cannot only be the writing style. I read 50 chapters of the last book, but I actually don't know what the protagonist is like. It's just the author digging holes or thinking about it that makes me jump. The description of the battle is also too rough. We are writing online articles, not novels. You need not to make it so difficult for readers to understand (that's what I should say). First of all, you have to consider finishing a book (without affecting real life), secondly, you have to consider having fun (it's a comic and Cthulhu, the protagonist wants to be the mastermind or hero behind the scenes), and the third important thing is persistence. I have seen many talented newcomers die from too many eunuchs.

Too many inappropriate bad jokes mixed in, affecting the perception

At first glance, you are a Marvel novice with this setting. Whether it is a movie or a comic, Marvel has a background of Cthulhu, so there is no need to mix it up.

There are some problems with your article! The first thing is unclear. For example, when the infected body and Spider-Man were fighting at the school at the beginning, the spider was throwing a javelin on the roof one moment, and the infected body's hand could hit him the next moment? ? Whether Spider-Man jumped down or the infected body flew up, you didn't even tell. And what about the two infected police officers? Where have you been? Is it life or death? I didn't mention it, there are many such situations in the text. The second point is even worse. The author likes to make bad jokes! I can't understand these jokes, and it feels really bad to read them. Which famous author do you think makes jokes all day long?

He was a student at the police academy in time travel, but became a coward after time travel? He was actually bullied on campus, which was a big deal. Where did the grappling and fighting skills learned in the police academy go? Before time travel, as a police academy student preparing to become a police officer, you didn't have the habit of exercising?

In fact, Doctor Strange 2 is likely to have a villain with a graphic style, or a beholder who is very powerful in the comics.

I haven't read it yet, but many fan works suffer from the neglect of characterization. Just because it's fan fiction, there's no characterization at all. Hope this book doesn't.

I feel that there is something wrong with the author's writing. The descriptive text is too wordy and fails to convey the plot clearly to the readers. It makes people feel more and more confused the more they read.

All the main characters who appear have bad mouths! Almost all exported as dirty

Very nice. . Why isn't it popular? .

I hope the protagonist doesn't become a so-called superhero

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The detective part should be placed before or after the battle instead of in the middle. Running to explore the plot in the middle of the battle will only create a sense of fragmentation in the plot. There are also excessive chatterboxes and jokes. Imagine what it would be like to have Deadpool as the protagonist of a horror and supernatural game? And author, do you still remember the autistic character of the protagonist at the beginning?

The Court of the Five Gods is watching from the sky. Where do you get the guts from?

I read the introduction and asked, has the author read the Book of Darkness series? This big event caused by Sithorn is obviously a representative of the Marvel Comics series. You don't need to combine it. The Latitude Demon Gods (editors) have spent more time playing than you.

The eunuch then goes on to open a new book and then the eunuch?

This book is going to be hundreds of thousands of words long, just a eunuch?

Tell a joke. The evil god was hit by a boat and killed.

Sure enough, it's daily poisoning. It's really poisonous.

The Legend of Jupiter... Once you have seen it, you will know that this routine has been used by others for a long time. The so-called superhero abilities there are, to put it bluntly, deliberately given by the old gods.

In the first ten chapters, a monster is writing about his inner activities before he is dead. I am speechless. He only picked the wrong name but not the wrong nickname. The daily poison is indeed poisonous.

Is there a novel about survival in the Cthulhu apocalypse, a novel in which the protagonist has no system or cheats, and the protagonist plays a cat and mouse game with Cthulhu's creatures, hiding and hiding. Humans have no ability to resist and can only hide. There are no extraordinary abilities on the human side.

The writing is very good, but I just can't stand it. I don't know why.

This book should be considered the best one about Cthulhu among American comics.

I think this book is great. It fills a gap in online literature. Why do you say that? Think about all the glib books you have read, either human beings do not have strong power and can only passively endure everything; or the power system is a ritual type, full of bloody and terrifying worm tentacles, a mysterious master type, which takes place in a different world in the Victorian era and shows the ability of strong mental pollution. As for this book, up to now, with the developed social background of the fantasy genre, coupled with the simple and upright power design, there may be a modern perspective on the study of fantasy dreams in the future, which is very special. It's different from the ordinary Kevin that is full of scary elements that I'm tired of seeing. I hope the author will keep it.

What does this say? It's a mess, with a lot of nonsense. It's all the protagonist talking to himself, and the background of the story is not clearly explained.

The pace is too slow. A little weirdo wrote more than ten chapters. I really can't stand it. Even a free author can't be that good, right? Poor grades are not unreasonable.

It feels good, but it doesn't work. There's something wrong with the writing. It's confusing. I haven't understood what's going on. It's over here, and it's over without even understanding the plot.