National Creation: the Secret of Creation

Is this world government too strong? It's enough that everyone is equal in the college entrance examination, but even high school students must use school resources for their development? Apart from anything else, if the random resource cards could be replaced with selected cards of the same level, it would be a great advantage for qualified students. The gap between strong and weak in this world is obvious, right? Could it be that there is an absolute overlord at the top of the government who makes everyone below me equal?

The protagonist is a virgin! He only gets beaten passively and gets sulky, which is very unpleasant to see! And there are women all around, and they are giving all kinds of resources. I am speechless. As the legitimate son of a big family, my life is not as good as that of a commoner. Just because I want to show that I am the protagonist, I am surrounded by a halo of ridicule?

It feels like an old-fashioned plot. There are all beautiful women around, and there is no male partner. The men are all mentally retarded and sarcastic. It is now 2022, and I don't like to watch this kind of character relationship.

In fact, everyone comes here for the mystery. Do you think it's appropriate for you to have 15 chapters of daily life?

A question comes to mind, how should the protagonist explain the origin of the mysterious god to the public? This deceitful god should be the only character of the protagonist! I hope the author will give a reasonable setting later

The protagonist's family is a waste, right? They always brag and brag

This book is about mysteries, but mysteries don't account for much of the book's content. Most of it is about other family members. If the title is not about mysteries, I don't want to subscribe anymore🤔🤔🤔🤔

Mushroom goddess statue in the draft stream (if it wasn't impossible to pass the review, I really want to draw that one) I probably had a great inspiration. I saw such a thing, I can't suffer alone, fishing with passion in the middle of the night

It's funny if there are immortals in the family members, it insults the name of immortals

The only thing I can't stand is those who dare to threaten the children of a big family. I can't accept this. And can't I hit someone first every time? What's wrong with being a villain? It's uncomfortable to watch.

It's very watery, and a few chapters are like repeating popular science about the power of the main world.

I feel like the name and tags of this book are not set up well, and people who want to read it can't find this book.

The more you write, the more outrageous it gets. The protagonist is still a demigod, right? These believers are already true gods. What does a demigod mean in front of the true God? What about onions? Where does the confidence come from? Even if it is created by the system, it must be linked to the protagonist's level. According to what the author writes, it is estimated that when the protagonist becomes a true god, will his followers of the Creepy God become transcendents beyond the long river of time? You can get out of the bookshelf now.

I think the writing is more in line with my taste, so I support it (I don't have to be precise)

The first book was very well written, "The Pose of God", but it's a pity that it didn't hold up. It should be polished, write more details, flesh out the content, and water down some plots. This can also free up some time to adjust and plan future plots. Outline writing is not advisable. A lot of content only contains the skeleton. The outline is spectacular. There is little flesh and blood. What a good theme and concept. It's a pity that my cultural level is not good. Otherwise, if I pick up this subject and imitate it and write a novel, maybe it will become popular.

Wuhu, after two third places, I finally got first place

The author is still writing about the Ke series. In fact, I think the best description of Dumbledore in the 7 billion copies of the author's book is. I have read a lot of HP novels. The author's description of Deng Xiaoping is in the top three for me.

No one is normal. Many of the plots have no beginning or end. They just stop there. When I feel better, I forcefully suppress it. Afterwards, I don't even know what the meaning of the plot is.

Well, first of all, I would like to encourage you. I am not a loser, nor am I mocking traffic. The creativity is good. But, does the author have no outline? Write whatever you think, it's totally wrong. As mentioned earlier, God's Domain is unstable and cards cannot be used indiscriminately, so support from home is useless. But after passing the exam, there were a lot of cards, and I didn't see any signs that your divine realm was broken?

It's so funny that the Dragon Clan fan's invincible combat power is broken. Where did Chu Zihang get the next generation combat power? Just rely on his violent blood to beat Xia Mi? , Lu Mingfei is S-level and has a dragon-bone body that is already emperor-level. Instead of beating Chu and Caesar violently, they were in a stalemate? How did you write it? Are the dragon clan's combat capabilities so rubbish? All of their humanoids have keels per person, okay? The third generation can be compared to S level to the lower limit of the emperor level. The next generation are all at the level of Uesugoshi. The three of Chu Zihang were beaten by Yuan Zhisheng alone. He only had the combat power of the third generation of humanoids. The third generation of dragon body beat him so hard that he can't even figure out his combat power.

Asking for refinement😆

The operation is as fierce as a tiger, and the author is a high school student.

In my eyes, those novels about mass migration are all divas.

I feel that the author is a bit impatient, and each book he writes is not as good as the other. The first two books are very good, but in this one, the main line feels vague, and I don't know what to write. It is better to calm down and think about what I want to write, but at the same time, I have to make some compromises with the current environment of online articles, and I still need to write an outline.

If I remember correctly, my god system seems to require faith to anchor its own humanity or divinity.

Not to mention this month, not even the next month.

The author developed the plot and kept laying the groundwork. As a result, the plot was difficult to produce and I was speechless.

The other party wants to destroy the protagonist, but the protagonist keeps asking why every day? Poisonous! If you don't know, you don't know. I don't think about how to kill him. I just ask why every day😣