Dragon Clan: Thought so Far

The current progress is chapter 370. Like water, maybe the author himself didn't realize it, but that's how it manifests. It can be explained in three or five sentences, but it is said over and over again. The most typical combat power, in order to highlight the strength, must be compared with another character, compared with the past, and back and forth, which is a good method of hydrology. In addition, the side descriptions are excessive, the writing is cumbersome, and the conciseness is insufficient. Overall a worthwhile read, but still a long way from the best. (Shai Zai smokes and drinks, which is not in line with the character, regardless of whether he is reborn or not)

The best book of all the Dragon Clan fics I have read, it accommodates all my fantasies. After reading Dragon Five, I always felt that the senior brother should be Susie's, Xia Mi and Mingfei got together, and after reading Dragon Five, I felt that Zero should also have a place in Mingfei's heart, just like Watu Kyoryu in Dragon Five The note to Lu Mingfei said, "The only thing in the world that cannot be let down is the country, and the woman who has always been with you." Whether it was a misunderstanding or a misunderstanding, at that moment I remembered that Ling had always been with Lu Mingfei. Although she didn't have many scenes in the first few movies, she was always there. I personally also prefer this kind of silent waiting emotion. There are very few or almost no fans who write about Lu Zero, and in terms of the author's writing style, Lu Zero is absolutely awesome, the car door is welded shut and the car is going at full speed, the icy princess's fall and so on, ugh, so the author hastily put "Zero's Winter Strategy" on the agenda.

As far as I can see (I probably subscribed to a few chapters), overall it's pretty good, but the portrayal of the senior brother and the boss is a bit off, and Lu Mingfei also has a few minor flaws, but the flaws are not hidden, it's pretty good for a fanfic, good luck to the author

Okay, okay, keep up the good work, I like harem girls

Don't tell me about a single heroine, or you'll be criticized by book reviewers in the book review section. I saw the end of my freedom, and I mentioned Eri Yi as long as it was an emotional scene. Brother, you are feeling guilty. You only have love for women, right? You can't have feelings for your daughter and your sister, right? You traveled back from the future, and suddenly you love Eri Yi the most? ? ? ? Why don't I see you expressing your love for Eri after her death? Guilt, guilt, guilt is not love. If you say you like Eri, forget it. After all, Lu Hui is indeed good, but you insist on emphasizing Eri as long as it is a relationship scene. If you want to have a single heroine, Eri, just say so. Don't speculate in stocks until the end and disgust the readers.

Let's take a look at the author's great work😍

This is probably the Dragon Clan novel that best suits my taste. It avoids any subtle points. I have never understood why Dragon Clan fans like to recommend Kainuo. Even if Jiangnan's Lu Mingfei is a dog licker, it is better than these cuckold slave protagonists.

Who doesn't look forward to a world like this for senior sisters

At present, it seems that Senior Sister Huiliyi Xiaolongnu should all be female protagonists. If there is no turning point, I will be really sad. Last time I read a fanfic with Xiami having all kinds of ambiguities, and it turned out that Chu Xia was in the end. I was really torn.

Alas, I said in the first few chapters that this emotional line is weird, but after following the update and looking at it again, the relationship is really awkward. Maybe it's because the author's writing skills are very good, and the chapter about Sang Zhi Wei Luo is so well written that now everyone is a fan of Lu Xia, and to be honest, in the original work, Concubine Ming doesn't like Hui Liyi, but many Lu Mingfei in the reboot say that Hui Liyi is his lover from the beginning, and he must marry her one day, which is very strange, save first She is the first thing, feelings are allowed to develop, and the active party should not be Lu Mingfei, because it is awkward to fall in love with regrets, and Nono is in the second week, I have a hunch that Eli Yi must be in the second week as well. If Lu Mingfei takes her to visit the Disney Haunted Mansion again, she will definitely say that she has been there before. I don't know who originated this classic routine, but I saw it in the reboot book. But what attracted me to that book was that Chu Xia was not Lu Hui. The most attractive thing about this book for me is Nono in the second episode and Xia Mi who is dependent on Ming Fei. Lu Mingfei to Xia Mi now is what Nono was to Lu Mingfei back then. I don't want Lu Mingfei to have regrets in this restart just to make up for the regrets of the last time. (Pictures of many female protagonists)

Contestant No. 1 Zero, Lu Ling, let's not say more, little Renata and Zero Contestant No. 2 Su Xiaoqiang, Little Devil's unofficial choice of Lao Lu as the marriage partner of ordinary people Contestant No. 3 Mai Shutoku, the only kissing scene in the original Lu Mingfei The target, Lu Mingfei, was the recipient of the first kiss No. 4 Su Enxi, and the other two in the nanny group are included. It seems inappropriate to omit the accounting girl, but it seems that she can only be regarded as a dowry girl 🤭

A multiple-choice question about whether or not Xia Mi should be saved can be done for more than ten chapters. I think it's time for you to go to Liangshan.

To be precise, it is Lu Mingfei who came back from the future. After experiencing the regrets of the original version, he returned to the Lu Mingfei before he entered school. That's Ninba. It feels like the curse of Jiangnan. The fan authors want to write out Lu Mingfei's original feelings, so no matter how strong and powerful Lu Mingfei has been when he comes back from that world, he still struggles with relationships. Wenqing is melancholy and cowardly, making people want to get into the book and give him a slap in the face to tell him that everything has started over, and you have the ability to change everything. But it can't be done, so I can only watch him, on the one hand, determined to save everything, but on the other hand, he is still cowardly like a wild dog with a broken spine in the wine cellar, hesitant and timid in front of feelings, afraid to reach out and unable to see the reality clearly, like some fans who are afraid that their every move will change the so-called protagonist of the world line. Of course, this is not so much a common problem in novels, but rather that Lu Mingfei is like this. It just looks like the original Lu Mingfei who grew up but made no progress in Long Sili Jiangnan's novel. Perhaps the author's version of him needs time to grow and change, but it's hard to bear that after experiencing so much, a person has made no progress except for his strength. I used to stop after catching up on the latest chapter, but now I've come back to watch it after seeing the end. Lu Mingfei at the beginning was really too twisted and cowardly. It made people feel uncomfortable in their chests, as if an unknown fire was born out of thin air.

Lu Xia locked up, Lu Mingfei and the female version of Lu Mingfei's love thinking station 🤓

I've read about two-thirds of it. To sum up, the author's writing style is really good. It almost gave me the impression that it was a replica of Jiangnan. Overall, it is very good among Dragon Clan fans. However, there are some minor flaws in the plot. In the early stage, he vowed to be the enemy of the whole world for Xiami, but when Xiami was in danger, Hesitating and still being a coward, even if Nono and Fingel hadn't helped make the decision, he wouldn't have necessarily gone back to rescue him. Then when it came to Japan, I felt that apart from messing around with the sperm, it had almost no effect in Japan. He was played by all kinds of calculations and didn't know where to turn. In the end, if it hadn't been for the birth of Herzog, who would have done it? He almost became the White King, and in the end, he gave Xiami a life, and then came up with the "Resurrection My Love" routine, and there was an obvious situation of suppressing the combat power. He immediately fought Norton with four times of bloodshed, and Norton took away Constantine's power and power, but he was beaten later. Erzog's Kagemusha still needs a lot of work. Kagemusha has the strength to unify Japan long ago. Even when fighting many supporting characters, everyone can feel the danger. In short, the writing is very good, but the plot design is not exciting enough. If you don't pursue the high level of excitement, it is indeed a very good dragon fandom.

The rest of Chapter 28 feels pretty good, but the combat power setting is really a mess. Lu Mingfei, who had awakened his bloodline and keel with combat experience, was almost exhausted in the close combat with Caesar Chu Zihang on the Free Day? You don't have such a strong fighting force, do you?

If you want to read the story from 134 Angers to 144 Odin, don't read it, just skip to story 145.

I like Xia Mi and Chu Zihang, but I don't like Chu Xia CP. Chu Xia CP is even harder to beat than Lu Hui CP. The boy who killed his own girl with his own hands, the red-haired girl who was killed by the villain because of her cowardly escape. The latter did not know the red-haired girl's final tragedy, and after finding out it was too late, the former took the initiative to choose the death ending for the girl. They either actively or passively choose to give up girls. Why do most readers call the latter a waste but call the former a male god?

No wonder so many fans don't write about Lu Nuo. I finally discovered the reason. I really don't have a good impression of Luo Nuo.

There are so many disgusting plots. MD is still such a coward after a new life. If you can't bear the responsibility, don't mess with it.

Dear author, as a dragon fan, I hope you can understand one thing. If someone comments: Your writing has a bit of Jiangnan flavor, no doubt, the other person is praising you. If someone comments: Your writing is very Jiangnan style, there is no doubt that the other person is scolding you! Jiang Nan's writing style has always been touching, but the development of the protagonist's emotional line has always been very twisted. On the contrary, many supporting characters have been made lifelike. It can be seen in works from Dragon Clan to Shanghai Fortress and even earlier. It may be the shadow brought by the senior sister. Pure love or harem doesn't matter, I just hope to see Lu Mingfei persevere, make choices, and grow. Don't be like the original work where you flinch at every critical decision, feel sorry for yourself afterwards, and then euphemistically call it loneliness and a weak child. For this kind of protagonist, I just want to borrow a classic line from Westward Journey: He looks like a dog!

I like Xiami better than Nono. I haven't liked Nono very much since the original work. She is more like the fantasy written by Jiang Nan. She has always been full of a strong sense of separation. I never understood that Lu Mingfei would like her so much. Maybe this is Jiang Nan's clown mentality that cannot be said clearly, but everyone knows it.

Did Nuonuo really have a miscarriage? Is Xia Mi back? Damn, I don't dare to read any further. I just want to see a perfect happy ending when I read fan fiction. Your half-torture but not cruel attitude makes people afraid to read further. Someone please give me some spoilers.

I don't understand, Nuonuo is a scumbag, but there are still people who like her. Could this be to persuade prostitutes to become good people?

I've finished watching it. It's really good. I'm going to join the Lunuo Party. I can't get enough of watching the Nuonuo extras.

Senior sister is beautiful

The struggle in the first half is quite uncomfortable. It's almost the end of the world and I'm still thinking about this. If you can crush the Black King, you will be the new Black King. You can't do whatever you want. If you can't crush the Black King, it will be the end of the world. Changing your destiny is just a joke. You should read the next book. This is the one I have read. Even if you write Nono to death, I will treat you as the new Jiangnan at most. Nono is so insecure and insecure about maternal love, I can't bear to lose his own child.

When I read Chapter 143 again, I remembered why I gave up 😅 and felt uncomfortable not giving the readers some personal goods.

Nono

Among the Dragon Clan fanfics with multiple female protagonists, this one is my favorite, but there are still some poisonous points in the later stage. In addition to the author's private Chinese plot part which is very messy, the biggest sticking point is when Lu Mingfei is asked to make a choice about Xiami Lu Mingfei can be confused about whether to have a harem, or what to choose. In such a name, he would save Xiami, but he would not hesitate whether to save Xiami or not. Some people say that this is almost like not being reborn, but in fact, Lu Mingfei, who has not been reborn, will not be entangled. He will block the gun for Caesar and make enemies of the world for Chu Zihang. Back to Hongjing, Lu Mingfei never knew that Eryi was going to die, and Lu Mingfei thought she was safe! If only he knew that if he didn't work hard for Eli Yi, he would die. Lu Mingfei had that realization when he hugged the little monster.