Ordinary Mortals Cultivating Immortals

Very well written, good luck to the author! While retaining modern thoughts, personal interests, and the characteristics of the mortal world of immortality, it can also find a unique way to unfold the story in an orderly manner without being complicated. Under the collision of ideas, it seeks common ground while reserving differences, and brings liveliness and brightness to the originally dark forest world.

It's well written. I came here to replenish my full subscription. I read it during the limited exemption period. When I saw Feiyan in the first few chapters, I thought I was going to engage in technology, so I wanted to quit. It turns out that the puppetry and weapon refining skills are actually a trap. Fortunately, I have the patience to read on. Let me talk about the rest of my views on the protagonist. The protagonist is a pure idealist and is incompatible with the dark world of immortal cultivation. However, it is undeniable that this kind of personal charm is indeed extremely powerful. If you put it in Water Margin, there will definitely be a lot of subordinates who will worship you! The other thing is about the protagonist's golden finger. He has a strong talent for creating weapons and has an insight beyond ordinary people. I wonder how many Dayan gods he can support?

This novel can be regarded as a spin-off to the story about mortals cultivating immortality and passing on to the immortal world, and the angle of entry is novel. In order to achieve a happy ending, the three corpses of the protagonist clean up all the people who influenced the protagonist before he became enlightened. Finally, he meets a genius psychotic cultivator, which subverts the protagonist's life values. Finally, he transcends the plan and design of heaven. Everything is unknown.

After reading the author's nonsense, it is impossible for a mortal to fight against an immortal cultivator! Only in a world where cultivation is impossible will someone develop mortal technology. Why? Because the development of science and technology will inevitably compete with immortal cultivators for resources, how can mortals compete with immortal cultivators for resources? In the mortal world, mortals can also cultivate immortality, but they must first practice physical training. If they are successful in physical training, they can create artificial spiritual roots. Mortals who have the ability also go to practice physical training. Only mediocre people can be mortals. In the mortal world, first, there are no smart people to develop science and technology. They all go to practice immortality and physical training. Second, mortals do not deserve energy at all. Mortals are not qualified to compete with immortal cultivators for energy. Without energy, it is impossible to develop science and technology. Energy is scarce in the mortal world, and mortals are not qualified to possess the most powerful energy source in the mortal world - aura!

After reading Chapter 4, I was really speechless when the protagonist's mentality exploded. Is she really just a beautiful girl in a peaceful era? Even in modern times, there are constant frauds and crimes, not to mention the world of immortals where strength is paramount and the jungle is the strongest. Han Li's character is the most suitable for this world and can best protect his own life. The weaker he is, the more cautious and cunning he has to be. If the protagonist was a woman through time travel, maybe I would not feel poisonous in this paragraph. I have seen many authors who like kind protagonists to go to the dark world and be beaten up. I am very unhappy. Maybe I am not a good person. I don't want to be beaten, I don't want to live, I like salted fish, I hate getting into trouble, I want to live.

What this author wrote, the so-called "technology" developed by mortal organizations, has completely deviated from the setting and world view of the mortal world. Although the technology that the protagonist has been talking about seems to be based on modern physical and technological thinking, the protagonist himself is driven by spiritual energy and spiritual stones, refined by spiritual power, and transmitted by spiritual patterns. Isn't this still the technology of cultivating immortals? Excuse me, is there a wire inside your Feiyan or something? Is there a drop of oil? How is this different from a large puppet? Doesn't the puppet have bearings? Oh, if you can sit on a human body and transform, you think cultivating immortals in the mortal world is not called technology, right? In terms of science and technology, Dayan Shenjun, the number one mortal scientist, crushes the protagonist who knows how many times! The released Nascent Soul puppet can hold back the Nascent Soul stage of the same level with just a few spirit stones. In terms of energy conversion efficiency, instantaneous output power, defense shock absorption function and real-time intelligent control system, the Ark Reactor and Iron Man suit are not worthy of it. If this kind of immortality-cultivating technology were made larger and one person could sit in it, it would allow the foundation-building monks to instantly kill most of the golden elixirs. Why isn't the spirit world promoting it vigorously when surrounded by enemies? Because the resource consumption is huge! How can a mortal find spiritual energy minerals without spiritual energy perception? It requires at least tens of thousands of coolies to open it. What non-state organization can afford this cost? How can mineral mining block spiritual energy from being discovered by monks? Once it is prescribed, how do you know what its properties are and what field it is used in? Only foundation building or earth fire has the ability to refine spiritual materials. How do mortals melt spiritual materials? If you throw it into a volcano, how can you separate the spiritual material from the magma without invisible spiritual power? What kind of machine must be made of mortal materials to cut the spiritual ore? So I'm stuck on the first step! Extraordinary weapons cannot be developed, and ordinary iron weapons can only deal with low-level monks, so the author directly arranged for me to think about it. Is it possible for mortals to come up with extraordinary technology in a hundred years?

This protagonist is a typical stupid young man. After traveling for so long, he still hasn't changed his mind. Still working on the Victory? Gundam. Is this what should happen in the world of immortality? Some of your qualifications are not cultivated properly and you have to tinker with those things all day long. From my point of view, if he didn't have a good master, he wouldn't be able to survive in this cruel world.

How should I put it? The main character is too funny. It's a drama. It's really a drama. He even lifts the Feiyan number like it's stuck in his throat.

As an immortal cultivator, the protagonist masters power and requires other powerful people not to use their own power and dreams of equality for everyone. Can the protagonist first cultivate at his own expense and spend the longevity gained from cultivating immortality? There are two reasons why cultivators become immortal cultivators in the underworld. First, the desire for immortality is fundamental. Second, the lack of resources brought about by the desire for immortality leads to various fights. The protagonist has good talents, is expected to live forever, is valued within the sect, and has no shortage of resources. Then I felt that there was something wrong with other immortal cultivators, fighting to the death for resources, and that there was something wrong with the world. Ah, this is the immortal version of why not eat minced meat.

How do you, the author, with a character like yours, finish reading the original novel by Mortal? The conflict between the world view, values ​​​​and ordinary people written about is too great. The characters of the protagonist and Han Li are completely in conflict with each other. I really don't believe you, the author, can see into a mortal...

It's really good. This is the best book for Mortal Fans. It's not far or close to Han Li. It doesn't say that it relies on Han Li all the time, and it doesn't think about taking advantage of the old devil all the time. It's pretty good, okay? For those of you who say it's not good-looking, have you compared it with other fans? You still like short stories, come on, author! 🙂🙂🙂

Who are the heroines? Han Laomo is obsessed with flirting with Tao Guan and doesn't care about marrying him, so the protagonist should accept it for him.

It seems that the author has not carefully read the biography of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, right? I'm afraid you don't know what Han Li's nickname is. Old Demon Han, nicknamed Han Paopao, is a human-shaped group that destroys engines. He is a real lone star of evil spirits. Dare the protagonist go to him to form a team? Isn't it too long-lived?

One thing to say is that the protagonist's character is not suitable for cultivating immortals. I don't like it. I don't hate Gundam originally. Even though he appeared in the fairy tale and his style is a bit more strange, but when the protagonist really messed with him, I kind of dislike Gundam. Two of the three sentences are inseparable from Gundam. I think it's too much to flatter myself.

Immortal cultivators are the result of mortals cultivating immortals and developing scientific worldviews. It is just because of the existence of spiritual energy and does not follow the physical science route of the realistic worldview. Why do you think that the technology developed by mortals is scientific, but immortal cultivators are not scientific? Is it true that every immortal cultivator is irreversible? The protagonist (well, the author) overemphasizes science, but does not understand science. Science is the summary and utilization of the laws of things and phenomena. The biggest feature is repeatability. The author believes that it is scientific for mortals to drill wood to make fire, but it is not scientific for cultivators to use their consciousness to drive spiritual energy to ignite fire. Moreover, the protagonist is still cultivating immortality. This is the same as standing in a flower garden and saying that the beautiful country should unify the world, so many people complain

It all relies on peers to support me. This is the best book about mortals. Except for me in Mortal Scientific Cultivation, no one can beat me.

Stop fighting among yourself. This story about the internal fighting within the Hidden Moon Sect is really boring. A sect can become number one in the Yue Kingdom despite such internal fighting. The other six sects are nothing but rotten fish.

Very well written. From the chapters I have seen so far, I guess the author wants to write a chapter on the human world where "a single spark can start a prairie fire". But mortal readers have basically entered society and been slapped with big ear hooks by society, so they will feel fake and unreasonable when they see people who have not been slapped with big ear hooks. And to be honest, most of the mortal fans are believers in egoism. If you write that you want the protagonist to lead the mortals to fight against exploitation, it will be difficult for them to take on the role of the protagonist. They will think that it is because they are full and full, and it is extremely poisonous.

Use the shell of a mortal to write modern science and technology articles, and sell dog meat as a sheep's head! More disgusting than Aiwen

The butt determines the head. Since the protagonist is the beneficiary of cultivating immortality, he still has to crush the basin for eating. If the protagonist has always been a mortal, and the scientific and technological revolution defeats the cultivators, then he will be considered a true hero. Even if he becomes the protagonist of a rape and overturns the table, so what? To trigger a bigger war is just to change a group of people in power, and the dragon slayer will eventually become the evil dragon. Who among mortals can resist the temptation of immortality?

Jiao guy? ? ? ? If you want to make money, don't write things that the public can't understand.

The best among mortals is the Demon Fairy. Who agrees and who opposes!

The protagonist's character and behavior are unjust and unjust. He is a huge bug and is always on the verge of death. . . .

I can't stand the part where you criticized Han Li. You're just an angry young man. Did you travel through time and prepare to be a saint? If you want to learn from fellow fans, you must respect their settings. Technology is technology, and cultivating immortality is cultivating immortality. Although the end point may be the same, the process is different and the basic settings are different. Don't directly apply modern technology. Three years have passed. In 18 years, people in their thirties and forties still look like they have not grown up. Why are they so naive? And is the modern person you write about our current person? People nowadays are not so stupid. Damn it, you just follow the path that the predecessors have taken. You can't even return the ball, just act blindly. When you become the master of this world, you can change it. Just like a great person like a teacher, he must become the leader of a party to lead the party to the light. What is the protagonist in your name?

I don't understand, pig's feet always feel out of place, not like a modern person, like something out of a period drama.

After reading more than 20 chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. The two lives were like a blank slate. The previous life in China always excused the protagonist's inexplicable madness and stupidity. 😅

I think writing fan fiction for mortals actually doesn't require any system plug-ins. You, the author, arrange formations, talismans, elixirs for the protagonist, who have superb talents, no matter how special the physique, or directly have all the five elements and spiritual roots. Arrange an opportunity for the protagonist to practice magical powers such as five-color divine light, and then arrange various caves and blessed places, genius treasures, such as the Blood Forbidden Land, and arrange for the protagonist to get some formation diagrams or tokens by chance. , Just take the Bloody Forbidden Land with you and take it away. Set the Bloody Forbidden Land as a place where great powers from ancient times left their inheritance, and let the protagonist take away the treasure of a space. Isn't this just a mortal fan fiction?

The person who wrote the negative review didn't know how he understood the original work. He spoke like a three-year-old child. Black and white? Do I have to follow your way of thinking? I can't bear to write it myself

Well written, the author is thoughtful. The protagonist has grown!

I guess, I'm just guessing. The author's initial thought was that it would be cool and invincible to drive a Gundam. Then if I become an immortal, I would be cool and invincible if I drove a Gundam made by immortal cultivators. . . . As everyone knows, the cultivator said after seeing it: There is a weird freak here! ! ! ! Then dismantle the Gundam with bare hands