I Can Go Back to the Mysterious Age

I read over a hundred chapters in one go... The writing and plot are good, with more than 60% of Lao Gun's skills. I can't see the creativity yet. The characters are well created in terms of focusing on martial arts training and making decisions, but unfortunately there is a big gap in the layout (mainly because they lack a bit of magnanimity and vision in the real world, and sometimes bring out the mentality of a small citizen in their dealings with others). In this regard, it is recommended to refer to the protagonists in Lao Gun's books...

The chapter about recruiting disciples was so sloppy. There was no initiation ceremony or anything like that, and they handed over the secret martial arts casually. There was no such thing as saying that they were not allowed to teach it to others. And it just so happened that the three people described in the previous chapter had average qualifications.

This is about to get exciting, why do we still update it once a day😡😡

The author can write well, it's a high-quality work, but the number of words is a little short.

Yes, it's my favorite type. Come on~ I hope the author can come up with his own style~ I support you 🙂

Lao Tie, I'll give you my monthly pass. Come on, keep up the good work.

Author, didn't you find a problem? That is, all your characters will lean towards violent muscular men. Moreover, every book has the same style, which will limit your character creation and writing path. (Don't blame me for talking too much, I just think your book is pretty good. It's just a family story, don't take it seriously)

This is the only book I can read about Ji Dao Ryu, but there are too few updates. Go away is also a weird thing. If you don't dig up a golden mountain, you have to wear armor and operate a mecha.

Brothers, I'm here. I've found the author. I'm responsible for issuing the blades, and you are responsible for shouting!

Come, the author reads to me, and I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code words diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to code words every day and every night.

The author's novels are very similar to those written in the early days of Get Out, which are majestic and majestic. Unfortunately, the momentum of the novels written by Get Out is getting smaller and smaller now.

Collect it first, check the situation and then take a look. The last book was so annoying

I couldn't find a suitable picture, so I had to ask the eldest sister of Black Reef to support it.

The old group has disappeared due to involvement in pornography! A new group will be created after the author relieves his fear.

It's very interesting to read, but the protagonist progresses very slowly, and the world of secret martial arts equivalent to Journey into Mystery becomes two million words. In the early stage, the protagonist is at a higher level than the enemy (such as the Demon Shadow). In the later stage, the protagonist is a bit pressured (the protagonist's development progress in the past world is suppressed, especially in the last dungeon, the protagonist is 10% short of perfection and can directly kill Xiadu, so Xiadu has to be killed). Fighting at the same level again and again, and the protagonist is practicing the Secret of Nandou and also needs to train his body. So how did the other descendants of Nandou improve their bodies? If there is no improvement, wouldn't the protagonist be sent away with just one punch? It feels like the protagonist's physical body and strength do not achieve the effect of one plus one being greater than two, and the two powers are separate. Moreover, there is only the world of Miwu, and the world of excavated ruins is just a background version. When it ends, the protagonist is still wandering around in this world, and the collections obtained are not available in other worlds.

I'm almost at chapter 200. The biggest problem is that the upgrade is too slow. The main one is the secret martial arts of the Feng Xiang Sect. I don't know if there is a second-rate force. The bronze ring is really redundant. Apart from a bunch of faction masters, I don't know what the point is in going in. The golden finger is too weak. Go away after 200 chapters. It is already very strong. It's a bit boring to keep watching a protagonist who is actually not very strong. In the final analysis, the strength growth is too slow.

I was looking forward to the heroine. When I watched Mysterious Journey, my biggest regret was that by the end of the story, Garen didn't even have anyone to accompany him, whether it was his sister Ying'er in the first world, the female sect leader, or the loneliness in the totem world, or... The silly sister and the fox girl who were reincarnated into the world... There was no one who could accompany Kanon at the beginning... He was too lonely. After all, he became him. Ji Dao Ryu can also have a female protagonist. Don't you see, Lu Shengmon also has a wife? Of course, it's better to leave the child in the ending episode. When I saw Lu Shengshou's son, I wanted to slap him...

The female protagonists of Yakuza-ryu are all dispensable, just used to prove that the protagonist is not gay.

It was really good in the early stages, but after the fourth flashback, I couldn't stand it anymore. The more I watched, the more boring I became.

I will reward the author with 100 points for adding a chapter every day. I believe other rich dads will do the same. If you do what you say, if you have the same idea, support me.

Do you have any recommendations for Miwu novels?

The writing has been good from the beginning to now, but since the secret martial arts system is about to reach the master of the genre, the martial arts growth system, foundation and mystery that have been brewing since the beginning have been almost exhausted. After all, the end point of force in the entire Federation worldview is the genre master. It is no longer easy to continue writing in this worldview. After all, all the current plot characters are plot characters in the Federation worldview, and it is impossible to suddenly switch to the Gaowu map. In that case, the plot characters will be directly empty. This is a setting problem. There are several directions for writing it down. One is to follow the settings of dark creatures and mysterious areas, involving the ancient mysterious practice system, and in reality, it is also necessary to introduce the existence or power of the sect masters, and beyond the sect masters, to construct the plot and conflicts, and continue to use retroactive powers to practice and become stronger in the older mysterious years, writing in a matryoshka style. The second is to cut through the map to find the ultimate in martial arts. Three... To put it bluntly, the ceiling of the world setting is relatively low, the cultivation system is relatively short, and the upper limit is low. It is like fantasy cultivation of immortals. You have only been in the qi training period for these two hundred chapters, and they are still busy looking for Foundation Establishment Pills. They want to successfully establish the Foundation and become an inner disciple.

I felt that when I wrote more than 200 pieces, it was too messy. As for the copy, the first three are the best, but the latter ones are a little bit incomprehensible, so I cut them up.

After the card repair copy is over, the combat power will take off. From boxing master Dacheng directly to top fighter. Moreover, he also mastered the Golem Secret Martial Arts, the Nandou Red Heron Fist and the Nandou Sound Snake Fist. Both offense and defense are top notch. After returning to modern times, who can pose a threat to him except a big boss at the level of Holy Fist.

I heard that this book will be finished with 2 million words? It's really not necessary. King of the Century is just the beginning and can be further developed, such as the Mysterious Journey's Silver Totem Ancient Sound, the Mysterious World, Thousand Hearts, and the Inner World and Mysterious Other World that Summons Nightmares. The main world is just the last remnant of the world where the mystery has faded. Wouldn't it be nice for the protagonist to trace back to other big worlds where the mystery has not faded? The Three Great Gates and Holy Quanba Kenjiquan are just the beginning. You can continue writing after a few seams. . .

I just watched the plot after returning to reality after the third flashback. The first poisonous point is that after the protagonist goes back, he does not continue the progress of the last time, but goes back to another frustrating node? The second is that the system is too complicated and confusing. The first two or three dungeons were barely enough, but after the third time backtracking, it became extremely messy and complicated. There were too many systems, and the main line was not clear. I hammered here and there.

It feels like watching Mystery Journey👍

How is this book? Come on, Shen Nong

It's a bit long, please bear with it! ❤Add more essence!

I have to say that I always thought this was just an imitation of the Yakuza style. After reading Go away's Mysterious Journey, I felt that even though Go away was the pioneer, I really enjoyed reading this book, especially the plot where the protagonist comes into contact with the Fang of the Kestrel. It was so interesting.