Offending Player

The first world was a god-level work, but then it fell off a cliff, which was a pity

​​​​Don't read what the comments say about not watching the second world. They have only read the first 20 or so chapters. I enjoyed watching the second world. In the first world, the late-stage power achievements were vague, and I thought that the power would increase step by step. However, it turned out to be like the wizard who got away from level 3 and became a god before reaching level 4, making this power very illusory. The bosses of the Sea of ​​Death, the Holy Tree and the Four Knights, should be considered the ultimate boss. The protagonist is the same as them, but the size is different. Just like everyone is level 100, the opponent has 6 divine equipment, and the protagonist only has Dolan Shield. And unlike them, the protagonist is not only a god in the Sea of ​​Death, but also has authority in the Metal Sea. He will be defeated directly when he develops in the later stage. The second world is a little slow in the early stage. The more you see the protagonist later taking off, he will directly become a big muscled tyrant and destroy everything. It feels like watching Mystery Journey.       ，， ——————Too long to watch—————————— 1: The protagonist's power in the first world skyrocketed too fast (referring to becoming a god), and gods of the same status (equivalent to the old days) cannot defeat him 2: The second world Martial arts, transition in more than 20 chapters in the early stage, and later becomes an invincible muscle tyrant, destroying enemies along the way 3: The world of martial arts has a totem element (mirror master), which is a bit similar to the totem world of Mysterious Journey 4: My daughter is well-behaved and obedient, and there is no poison.

I pushed your book to two book lists.

The first world is considered golden. I subscribed and read it all. It turns out that the author must have died in the second copy world. I can tell by reading the comments. There are obviously not many comments. I was impatient and hung there until the limited exemption. I thought it was unlimited streaming, but it turns out that the first world is very long. In fact, it is okay. It is not necessary at all. The strength improves so fast and the writing is so high. As a result, the second world starts from the beginning, so it's okay to start from the beginning. Before we like to go away, we have to describe some actual martial arts content. As a result, you good guy, the blood can flow directly, and there are more than 10 chapters describing the progress of my daughter's martial arts. In fact, it is completely different from the strength of Zhujiao. There is no need to describe so much at once. The update is slow in the first place, and it is double-edited, so I should give up this book. It should simply be completed as soon as possible. Otherwise, the new book will not be updated. Judging from the author's description, he should still be a college student. I have graduated from college for 6 years. In terms of creation, as well as the description of the relationship between men and women. At least it's the kind of thing the diaosi author describes. As long as there's no dog-licking plot, it's at least qualified. Come on, the first book is a pity.

Royal National Knights

If it can be said that before protecting the princess, it can be said to be food and grass, then the princess chapter can only be said to be hay The writing is too scattered, with a hammer in the east and a stick in the west. I know the author wants to use this to introduce the world view, but the impression is really not good.

Don't tell me that all the previous strength is gone and you have to recover and level up again. This kind of routine is boring! I'll take another look. If I start leveling again, I'll have to give up. I don't like this.

It is much better than those mindless novices, but there are too many unreasonable plots, and I can't help but want to complain from time to time. I just added some plot points and the main character has read the whole book without any sense of violation. Moreover, I arranged for the main character to have a disabled hand and replace it with a machine, which is very conflicting with the body strengthening potion. Although it is considered an artifact in the early stage, it will be left behind when he reaches extraordinary level. There is a huge flaw in the story, either to regenerate the limbs or to find more advanced mechanical upgrades. Although this can add a main line and develop a branch line, the author has no foreshadowing. Realizing this makes people uncomfortable. When these things accumulate, I don't want to read anymore. Come on, author, I will look for something else to read first 🙏

After changing the dungeon, the previous physical fitness and ability were gone. I changed from fighting all over the planet to being a black boxer. Is there any meaning in writing unlimited flow like this?

The first world is truly the pinnacle and essence of this book. It is the golden beginning that every good book must have. The problem lies in the second world, the fantasy style and the modern martial arts style do not match And the protagonist starts from scratch and starts training again, which is equivalent to writing another book, except that the protagonist has the same name and an extra golden finger. So there is something wrong with the continuity of the dungeon. You can make a transition through a dnd, magic mod, biohazard, poisonous milk powder dungeon, or even the game world. The protagonist only has a heart and soul, and he can also be the boss behind the scenes to cause trouble.

It's normal when it's over. The style of the painting changed, and he suddenly brought his daughter with him, which lost many readers. At least I'm one of them. Although I haven't canceled the collection, I don't like the recent content very much, so I haven't read it.

I understand, the protagonist is like a leader. The Metal Sea is the abyss hell that is expanding and swallowing the world. The protagonist uses his ability in other worlds to send coordinates to the Metal Sea. In the end, the protagonist grows up and gets the maximum authority. He is the abyss.

It has the style of "go away". Generally speaking, it can be watched, but there are not many highlights. The book "Go Away" will feel fresh when you first read it, but after reading it too much, it will just be like that, kill people, kill people, improve and improve. Descriptions without emotions are just promotion for the sake of promotion. What if you are invincible and immortal. After countless years, wouldn't a person become like a stone? ? ?

The protagonist's path should actually be to find the creator of the most powerful force, in other words, to become the source. The main god may be on the same level as the Sea of ​​Death, the Sea of ​​Metal, and the Sea of ​​Flesh. The main god should be positioned as the sea of ​​data or something else. It may not even be the source. He is a strong person like the protagonist who has embarked on becoming the source. The only difference between the two is who has gone further. The first point in reading novels is not to impose other people's settings on other books. Who said that the main god must be the top of the world? Why can't it be a medium power? Who said that there are the strongest beings like the Lord Gods in the worldview of this novel? According to the existing information in this worldview, it can be said that the source level is the top of the world. The main god's transmission was interrupted because there was a trace of power from the most powerful person intervening. Also, what can the Lord God be called the source of? For example, the kind of data sea I joked about? Although the protagonist seems powerful in the first and second worlds, even if he has blood energy, the problem is that blood energy cannot be the source, because it contains the power of the two sources. If you want to become the source, you must become a source! Just like those who use the aura given by Heaven and the world to fight against Heaven and the world, this is actually very outrageous

If the first world is like this, it will be difficult to write later. We should explore the worlds one by one. This kind of world-destroying disaster will be okay later, but it happened too early.

I thought there was a next world, a next world, but it ended here... Thinking of this, I just want to say one thing: Fuck. Over.

Black Tide, Suppression Level, Dreamland, Wings, Good Guy, Summon Nightmare 😃

Dark flow? Decisive to kill? In a crushing posture? 🤔

I see that many people don't understand and think that the protagonist leaked the secrets of the Federation to the princess. Let me explain it here. ①The material of the manipulator is red-grained steel. Basically all the red-grained steel mines in the world are in the hands of the Empire and the Federation. Other small countries simply don't have the energy to engage in these things. Wouldn't it be better to use these red-grained steels to make more than a dozen red-grained guns? It would be more practical. ②The manipulator is a complete military-industrial system, and the Perpetual Motion Research Institute and the Federal Mechanical Institute are behind it. Moreover, the success rate of mechanical prosthetic transformation is so low that the protagonist succeeds only because of the protagonist's halo. The simple version on the Federation's side also requires the precious resource mercury blood, which only the Federation has. Even so, the success rate is low. If other countries take it, it will be of no use. ③The princess is the most advanced graduate student. The robot she made by herself is useless, it is just a simple mechanical pulley. If she could figure out the complete black plan just by looking at her arm, she would have become a god long ago. It would be useless for her to study it for 100 years. The various basic resources behind it could not keep up, and there was no group of talented scientists. The protagonist knows that she can't find anything through research. ④The drawing skills of the manipulator, various machine tools with extreme precision, red steel, mercury blood, and a group of skilled scientists are the reasons for the success of the black plan. ⑤The robot hand is not a secret at all. What's the use of copying a pile of scrap metal? There are also magic patterns on it, and the various depictions of the magic patterns almost failed. Not to mention the out-of-print Mercury's Blood. It didn't matter at all to show her. The iron-bodied troops went to the battlefield behind, and there were lots of corpses. All of them were taken care of by the empire. Even though the empire was so powerful, it didn't take care of them. (The source of the Dark Moon Empire's mechanical troops is not here. They rely on a Federation traitor and a perpetual heart.) ⑥Actually, the reason why I don't explain it in detail is because I'm afraid it will be too verbose. The previous tips are already there. The mercury blood alone has blocked the path. The princess is just a hobbyist. Just like you show a mass-produced rail gun to the African natives, only you have the necessary energy for the rail gun. What do you expect her to research? Here is an explanation, everyone is too impetuous now. I understand people want to have no heroine, but don't get too carried away. If you encounter something you don't like, just pass it by. There are also readers who like daily life. I can only try my best to take care of everyone's taste.

I was a little bored at the beginning of the second volume, so I gave up. Unexpectedly, I couldn't stand the other books anymore, so I came back 😭. Book shortage, dear book friends, can you recommend any good books.

The previous parts of the battlefield and life were well written, but when it came to protecting the princess, I had no idea what the author wanted to express. 1 A battlefield killer, working as a security guard? The person who arranged the mission must be mentally ill. When being attacked on the battlefield, the conditioned reflex is to dodge instead of resisting. As for security, protecting people is the most important thing. What if you avoid it subconsciously? 2 Under the premise that you can use high-power damaging weapons, doing security is a joke. Even tanks can be destroyed, fortifications can be penetrated, and ambushes will be laid on the road you must pass. Advanced explosives and heavy machine guns can't solve the problem? How to protect?

To be honest, I have already read Chapter 80. I personally feel like I am on a mysterious journey to the world of secret martial arts, and have a sense of déjà vu with Jidao Fist Master.

Give me an update quickly, five monthly passes, give me more refinement

I regretted it and watched a daughter suddenly appear in the second world. .

It feels so much like Zhan Meisu's book

The author has sent two books, can you write about a mecha? When I read the author writing this book before, I thought that the author would follow a mecha world. It's actually quite suitable to pick up mechas after the first world, and the style of painting is also quite suitable. Like when I wrote about martial arts before, the style of painting suddenly changed. Many things in the first world were abandoned. Starting from a blank slate made people feel that all the previous efforts were in vain, which made it a bit uncomfortable to watch.

Back from book three. The first world of this book is so perfectly written, it is an absolute masterpiece. Scene description, atmosphere shaping, absolutely top-notch, concise and precise writing style

I like this kind of extremely reckless man, in one word, do it

When will the second world end? It's over. Kick me.

What are the author's other works and accounts? , Can anyone tell me?