The Other Side Comes

The wait is finally here, give yourself a thumbs up.

I have been reading novels for ten years, and I think the style of this book is quite strange.

I didn't expect you to be able to hold on.

Very good, very good. I hope the author will write well. The current quality of this book is worth reading the original version.

I found a book yesterday and finished reading it today. It is well written and the world view is quite interesting. However, the author's control of the plot is a bit weak. The connection between the previous chapter and the next chapter in some chapters is quite strange, and the pace of the plot is sometimes fast and sometimes slow. It is difficult to grasp the excitement. It can only be read as an interesting story.

After reading Chapter 21, there are no poisonous points so far, and the worldview is constructed very reasonably. I hope the author can persevere and become popular.

The ideas are very good and the writing is good. But it feels like the rhythm gets a bit messy from about thirty chapters onwards. Does the author want to speed up the plot? There is also the October Group incident, the small group of classmates, and the father suddenly revealing his identity. They are all intertwined and difficult to grasp.

It is indeed interesting, and this chapter is also quite essential, unlike a novice 😊 If you continue writing at this pace, you will have the qualifications to become a god.

Come on, come on, the book will be completed and the appraisal is completed (manual funny)

Guys, keep writing~it's very tasty

When will it be put on the shelves? Baby, I want to subscribe!

Can anyone please explain what the part about Jiehailou around Chapter 60 means? It feels good, but I really don't understand it. T_T

Author, I will also be the editor of your internally submitted book!

The writing is quite good, the story is very interesting, but some sudden changes in the plot can be very confusing.

After seeing the latest, I probably feel that the setting is the main world where the protagonist lives, and the different world of Daqian is a bubble attached to the main world, or is it another timeline? Therefore, the other world basically has no ability to resist when people from the main world directly seize the body, because the other world is considered a "false world" produced in sequence one. I guess travelers are the anchor, and the integration of the other world and the main world is inevitable?

The idea is quite wonderful, but it's always vague and a bit tiring after looking at it for a long time.

It feels like it's borrowed from the setting of Tao Wei Xian

The writing is quite touching, thank you to the author.

This setting is that the timeline of another world can be jumped at will. The circle pit is simple, but it will be very confusing if you don't watch it all at once.

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