Have the World of Martial Arts with You

I feel like Chapter 11 is a little unreasonable, and how can you sell an A8 car for 3 million? There is also someone who beat your sister due to domestic violence. You went to evaluate the injury. I saw that you described that the head was bruised and the head was wrapped in gauze. It was considered a concussion. It must have been serious for at least three years. Why did you go to his company to beat him? Isn't it a good idea to send him in? This is your fault, and you still have to be sentenced. Although you are writing a novel, it must at least be reasonable.

I would like to make a suggestion to the author. The article says that silver should be purchased in modern times for use in other worlds. I suggest changing it directly to low-purity silver. The purity of modern silver is too high, and it will easily cause problems in other worlds. Some people have measured the purity of ancient silver, which is generally between 70 and 90. Commonly used silver is basically below 80, and anything above 80 is basically official silver.

Written by an angry young man, he was almost poisoned to death

It's better not to write about the real world. It's really not good to write about the real world. The author should check it out for himself.

The formula is a bit old. After reading this book, I suspect it was written in the early 2000s. Other authors' deposits are based on quantity, while yours are on year.

If you don't do the good things of the two worlds, a third-rate warrior will wander around every day.

Am I blind? In the world of ancient martial arts, cordyceps are discussed and sold.

Is this the time to be a general manager?

It develops too fast and the gangster plot is boring. There are also direct kidnappings for the protagonist to fight. A bit poisonous

In the real world, the protagonist should build a country so that he can buy weapons on a large scale in the future.

It takes ten seconds for the protagonist to rush up and punch him within ten meters?

It's over. I feel dizzy when I look at the last few pictures. I have to do something in the real world.

The writing style is a bit awkward and it's embarrassing to read The author should practice his writing more I can't stand it

Author, are you toxic? So many days off?

This is how you handle the matter between your brother-in-law and your sister😒

When I read Chapter 26, I couldn't stand it anymore. Maybe it's just not suitable for my personal taste.

I have to complain about this. You've been running away for half an hour and an hour. Still blocked. This is the speed of escape. It seems a bit dramatic.

Chapter 12: Is it the Tiger Roaring Iron Cloth Shirt or the Dragon Roaring Iron Cloth Shirt? Why don't you check it when you write a book again?