I'm Looking for Immortality

It seems pretty good so far, more to my taste.

Very well written! Come on, author

Can there be more updates?

The book is good, but the progress could be accelerated

Many people have questions about Concubine. Please explain the first few chapters. The original owner has no children, no real wife, or is no longer there. Many people say that in ancient times, concubines had no status and could not inherit the family, let alone threaten the original owner to such a degree. I know all this, so my concubine slowly gained the original owner's trust from the moment she entered her home. At that time, she was hardworking, smart, and endearing to everyone. So even though the original owner later found many women, he still had only one concubine left. The concubine knew that it would be difficult for her to inherit the Xiao family, so the concubine was very docile when the original owner was healthy. After the life of the original owner came to an end, the concubine slowly revealed his true face, because she knew that the original owner would not give him the Xiao family, so she forced the original owner, instead of doing it like this at the beginning. You all start reading the book from the plot where the original owner wants to die, so as soon as the concubine starts to force the original owner, you can't accept it, thinking that a concubine dares to bully the owner. But she was not like this before, otherwise she would not be trusted by the original owner. That's why she forced the original owner to make a will when the original owner died, and asked the elders of the clan to come and witness it, thinking that this would achieve a just and legitimate result. As for whether the clan will let her succeed later, that is not what the protagonist cares about later. The protagonist just wants to get what he wants. The original owner in the book obviously didn't have much contact with the clan. It can be seen from the three old people who came to witness the will that they didn't care much about the protagonist's situation. Some people say that people from the clan are here, and the protagonist can call for help, but there is Wang Shuo guarding him in the dark with a sword. The protagonist is worried that his concubine will jump over the wall in a hurry, so it is better to do less than to do more. Some people say that the protagonist cares so much about the box that the concubine will be suspicious even if she is a pig. But how suspicious would she be of a dying man lying in bed unable to move? She didn't know that there was an elixir that could instantly cure the protagonist, and she had also seen things, including an animal skin, a bag, and a bottle of pills. You are from God's perspective and feel it is abnormal, but she is not. She will only think that the protagonist has given up struggling and just wants to get something meaningful to the protagonist. How can there be so many ideas? In real life, a bottle of black eight-ball pills appears, and then someone tells you that it can bring the dead back to life. Do you believe it? And what is impossible in this world? Wu Zetian can be the empress of a country, what's the problem if a concubine wants to take over the Xiao family? The only question is whether she can succeed! From God's perspective, you think that the concubine will definitely not succeed, but does the concubine think so? Doesn't she take any chances? What if it succeeds? She is the only one left in the Xiao family. She is not moved by the huge family property? If there are other people in the Xiao family, then she may not force the original owner, but she is the only one, can't she have some ideas? Don't talk about the status of concubines in ancient times. This book only writes about her ambition to seize family property, rather than honestly writing about the low status of concubines in ancient times. This is like a robber who knows that robbery is illegal, so he won't rob him? The concubine may know that the clan will not let her get the Xiao family, but seeing the original owner dying of old age and being the only one left in the Xiao family, doesn't she have any ideas? Some people say that the original owner is not dead yet. Who dares to eat Juehu? It would be normal for the original owner to die, but he is not dead yet! The most important thing is that the world of this book is set by me. If I determine that the will is valid, then it is valid. What is the use of you fighting for it?

Now that I see it, I think this novel is quite fresh and refined among fairy tales. Except for a small flaw at the beginning, it gets better and better as it gets better and better. I will continue to follow it to the end. I feel that the overall layout is reasonable, the IQ is online, the author's writing is delicate, the characters and psychology are well described, the plot has ups and downs, and is refreshing, making people feel immersed in it. The only shortcoming is the lack of explosive updates. It is recommended that the author occasionally publish explosive updates at the beginning of the month or when the plot climaxes, so that everyone can enjoy it, and I believe it will be more popular.

Except for changing the age of the protagonist to an old man, the rest are just a change of the soup without changing the medicine. The essence of the word "old" is not highlighted. A young soul paired with a body covered in age spots and smelling of old age looks really twisted!

This protagonist, whose IQ is not very high, knew that Hidden Fox had been discovered in Blood Wolf City, so he knew to run away, and actually ran back to the previous city. It was the city where the disciples of the Spirit Beast Sect were, and it was also the place where you first appeared. It was difficult to check and it was safe. At this time, it was obvious that you should escape to the ends of the earth! Who do you think is a fool? Why are you so careless when you know how valuable the hidden fox is?

I just discovered that this protagonist is actually labeled as being cautious, so I'll just laugh.

The writing is good, but a lot of people can't accept that you become invincible as soon as you become an immortal. You still need proficiency to play a game. This is too ridiculous. This is unacceptable.

In Chapter 6, the guards and concubine kill the protagonist. During the sensitive period of family property transfer, a half-dead old man has to be poisoned and chopped with a sword at great risk. The couple were definitely beaten to death when the clan members found traces of their corpses. It makes no sense. The rush to kill them as soon as they were brought back is inconsistent with the previous description of the concubine's 15 years of forbearance. Instead of me being a concubine, she is just a weak old man who is about to die. There is no need to go to war. I can take her home and pretend to be a good wife and take good care of her for a few days. One night, I will give her a rag and let her drown. There will be no traces and my hands will be dirty. No one will notice anything. The previous writing is very good. If you want to pursue the eternal life, you must write it down. I hope the author will write more fleshed-out characters in the later chapters.

The creativity is okay, but I can't read it. The setting is repeated and there are too many contradictions. A small amount is fine, but too much really affects reading. For example, in the later stage of Jindan, you cannot see through the cultivation in the later stage of foundation building. If you have a treasure that defies heaven, forget it, just use an ordinary spell. At first I said I would use the ruler once every six months, but ended up using it three times in a second, which was too much. Also, the golden elixir here in Changsheng is like a holy mother. The protagonist is not tempted by such a treasure, and is not forced to join or sign any oath.

Although the author keeps highlighting the word "old", he does not let people feel at all through the text that old age is a thief, or that wisdom, courage, mentality, etc.

Even though he knew there was dangerous water, he didn't go there for a long time, and he just ran away after giving him spiritual stones and magic weapons. Moreover, he was suppressed almost every time in the group battle. If he didn't run away, then the protagonist showed his power and became the turning point. It's disgusting if there are too many plots.

This is too poisonous. Moreover, in places where the essence is thin, spiritual stones are very rare. Things are more valuable when they are rare, and ten spiritual stones will be more valuable. Too poisonous

The beginning of the chapter is a bit like a holy mother. After the maid turned away from the guest, she still wanted to let the other side go. Moreover, she had the ability to kill the other side. She had to wait until the other side did it before taking action herself. (I don't know if you will delete the comment!) It's not easy to do things. You see, the author has Ben Shan. Jun Simulator, the protagonist relies on his sharp behavior in the world to get good grades. The new author's grades are better than those of some great masters. Go away and kill when you say it. The same is true when you are watching Haoyu Zhenxian. Not to mention those at the top of the monthly vote list, they are all promoted, and the authors will not be compared.

It looked fine from the front, but when we reached the 110th page, it was normal for someone to find the thunder he was carrying and run away quickly. As a result, the protagonist actually ran to the old place that was obviously connected to him and would definitely be found out... It's not that he had to go back because there was something he couldn't let go of. This person had no worries and didn't just go to a new place thousands of miles away and had to go back and throw himself into a trap... Even if it is to lead to the subsequent plot, this approach is too feeble-minded.

It's okay, but there are many places where poison is put. I hope the author will change it.

It's a good start, how come it's written like this? . . Every time I win, I deliberately write like a lost dog. . The pressure on the protagonist is very harsh. . . Bye

Why does the author always forget what he writes at the beginning and then forget about it later? It's so contradictory. Let's go.

What can I say about this book? The enemies that the protagonist encounters usually look a little more powerful than him, but their strength is not overwhelming. Then the protagonist uses all his strength to barely win. It has always been this routine, and then he immediately provokes enemies who are more powerful than him. It is a routine within an old routine. And I have been reading the novel for so many years. Do you think this routine can make me feel "good"? ? ? I'm tired of seeing this trick. Can you outsmart the enemy? ? ? How about a little counter-routine? ? ? There are other minor poisonous points that I don't really care about. When Da Yu was very good-looking at the beginning, even having a concubine or a woman was nothing. I don't have misogyny, everyone comes from a woman's belly, and my mother is also a bit stupid. I don't hate it either. The spirit stone economy has collapsed. For minor poisonous points, just look at the entry fee in the market. The difference is hundreds of times. I can accept the difference of more than ten times. Hundreds of times? ? ? When the protagonist is building the foundation, he discovers that the secret realm can only be entered by building the foundation. When the protagonist is building the golden elixir, he discovers that the secret realm can only be entered by the golden elixir. It's an old routine. To be honest, it makes me sick. The protagonist always talks about being stubborn, and then there is force majeure and he has no choice but to take risks. Every time, the protagonist takes advantage, let's do something counter-routine. Author

I feel like it would be a failure to see Fat San again. The Beast Control Sect and the Immortality Alliance are not very far apart. Exposing one's whereabouts is a fatal certainty. Also, there was clearly speculation that the Beast Control Sect was related to the Xuanling Sect before. He even led Silver Fox into and out of the Beast Control Sect's sphere of influence with great arrogance. Don't know if it's smart or stupid. Now he finally escaped and exposed his whereabouts. Not only did he meet with Fat San, but he also told outsiders that he had gone to Blood Wolf City before, and also explained the reason why he had to come to the Immortal Alliance's sphere of influence because something happened. If you want to join a family, then that family will definitely pry for information about you. No family will let an outsider join without any reason. You have revealed that you have been to Snow Wolf City before, so some of the information personnel renting the house will definitely ask for confirmation or inquire about the information. It just so happens that you are being offered a huge bounty again. Your appearance, your news, and everything about you have been turned upside down. To sum up, you are causing trouble for yourself. It can obviously be avoided, but is it just to reduce the number of words for the plot later? This is a foreshadowing that I feel is relatively bad.

Goldfinger is just a piece of paper to wipe your butt. You wipe it when you need it and throw it away when you don't need it. When you were in Dayu, you could sense the spirit stone just by passing by Mingyue. You could sense that you were going to die of old age from time to time. You could also sense the crisis when you were fighting against a corpse-refining Taoist. As a result, later in Yinshanfang City, I only felt the prying eyes of spiritual consciousness. At this time, the golden finger is useless. You might as well not have the golden finger and be indifferent to others.

Alas, it's a bit unfinished. It's a pity that the previous writing was so good and the style is very to my liking. This book has stayed with me for more than a year and I was moved and excited by some of the story developments. For example, the chapter where Xiao Ling saved Mo Wusheng from self-destructing his sword was really touching. Although the ending was a bit hasty, I still expressed my understanding that life is not easy. I would like to thank the author for accompanying me for more than a year. I wish the author good luck and safety in the future. I will follow it when I publish a new book. See you soon.

I have been passively running through the plot. Why is it the same as kneeling down to beg if I change the insect control technique? From Yuanying down, I have some strength and have no style at all.

The writing style reflects the skill, and the plot reflects the experience. ——Good writing is rare

It's said to be a mortal stream, but I think it's fantasy. It's not difficult for the protagonist to break through.

There is no main plot, and after watching it for a long time, I had no desire to read further.

I can only say that the ending is hasty. I originally thought there would be a fairyland chapter, but I thought too much. The book is good in terms of mood, but a few words will come out during the retreat. It's a bit like that, but it's generally good.

No cheats, a very real novel about cultivating immortals. The protagonist has three spiritual roots and a medium-level talent. He relies on himself all the way through life and death to continuously break through the realm. It is a real mortal-style family cultivating immortality "Sun's Immortal Path"