Land Demon Country

The writing style is acceptable, and it tends to be flat and direct. The storyline is relatively old-fashioned. You can transform into a person in Chapter 36. It feels like you have conquered the surrounding area and then traveled separately. Overall, it is rated as a straw. If you like this kind of thing, you can check it out.

I feel like most people who write about monsters are eunuchs. There are various factors involved.

From now on, I won't watch if I become the same person or if I change someone else.

You can either write about the upgrade flow or the operation flow. In both cases, you write a lot of details and cover them all in one go. There is no focus, so you don't have a bad level balance.        ，，，，，，，， I see that you deviated so much that you didn't subscribe after it was published. I have been reading it before. I hope the author will consider my opinion.

The writing is good, and farming is also very interesting. But don't lick the human race later. You'll be groveling and licking any female tribe member you see.

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Don't fall in line with the human race. I hope you can have your own stance on the monster race.

A demon who doesn't even kill anyone, or a demon? Rubbish

Just like the monsters in Journey to the West, including Monkey King, Zhu Bajie, Rhinoceros, Huang Mei, Huang Feng, Black Bear, etc., Except for the female monsters, none of them are human-like, they are all just humanoid. So you can have a human body, which is easier to fight and cast, and you don't have to look exactly like a human.

I'm here to support you 😜@ Author, come on, Lao Mo, I will always support you 🙏🙏🙏

I can find rock ants, but I can't find the picture of the rock ant queen 😂

Dude, you are really not good at driving. Are your grades that bad? I feel like my writing is okay. There is nothing bad about it. It's just a bit slow.

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When I first said "demon", I was thinking of Furui, but I didn't expect it to be grass... It's okay, rounding things off, the male protagonist is an elf [dog head]

Come on, it's not enough 🌹🌹🌹

Since we use a special setting, we need to be more imaginative and imaginative. It's only twenty or thirty chapters and it's so heavy on anthropomorphism without writing anything. Doesn't this just turn into a human race cultivating immortality in a shell? It's either that the author's imagination is not rich enough, or that he can't let go and dare not write. This won't work, it's too cliche, and it's a waste of the well-thought-out settings.

The setting of this book is already bad. The characters in the game have no technical content at all. I feel like vomiting after reading a few pictures.

How much is the first order?😰😰