Looking for the Immortal Path in Ancient Times

The most difficult thing about writing this kind of old-age cultivator is to describe the mentality of the elderly. Any mistakes in writing are poisonous points.

After reading the first thirty chapters, I couldn't arouse people's interest. The beginning was so boring. It took thirty chapters to write a cultivation process 😰

The contract has been signed, please follow me and read it, thank you!

The opportunity is too deliberate. If you are sleepy, you will have a pillow. When you are hungry, you will eat when you open your mouth.

Thumbs up, at least the author has finished the book. What a eunuch, it's so abominable×……

The writing is okay, but the concept is terrible, and the imagination is lacking. At least it is based on the routine of more than 40 years ago.

There is a problem with the writing. The dialogue is always subjective, and the statements are too redundant and unclear. I hope it can be corrected.

Give the author a thumbs up, from beginning to end

It's fine to write, but it would be a pity to discard it.

This book ended silently without my knowledge. Fortunately, I clicked on the author's homepage to take a look.

It was too slow to warm up, and it felt like there was no main plot, and it turned out to be just a eunuch.

The clear soup is devoid of water and tasteless.

The introduction is very good, but the content is too detailed. The content is also good, but too detailed.

The first chapter has a bit of flavor, and the further you go, the more clueless you get. I'm just talking about the text, not the plot.

There are too few chapters and too few words, so the updates are not strong enough!

Why do you have to persist in finding Jin Jianzhu? Everyone has his own fate. Even if we can't go together on this journey, the article mentions that if you want to find Jin Jianzhu, you still have strong strength. Is he the father of the protagonist?

Followed

I feel like the protagonist's attitude toward Ding Ran is a little soft! !

I thought it was a classical fairy tale. . . The result is mortal flow

I have the same doubts as downstairs, why not write a classic fairy tale if you have this condition? I feel like I'm tired of watching Mortal Flow, but it's well written and I've seen the latest.

Looking at the introduction, I guessed it was in "Encouragement to Learn", and it has indispensable copying elements. 😁

It is difficult to write brilliantly about classical cultivation of immortality, and the alley is still deep!

It should be a continuation of the first work. The first work is very good and should grow quickly. You can't always repeat it over and over again. It is already the Mahayana stage and a sudden self-destruction must have a result. Why are you stupid enough to repeat the previous article? It must be repeated and it must become the same character as Lao Shi. How stupid🙀🙀🙀🙀🙀🙀🙀🙀🙀🙀🙀🙀🙀🙀!