Super Hunter

The writing is not bad, but some places are very abrupt. For example, why does the protagonist risk offending the gang to help the child? Just because he could only fire three rounds of air bombs that day? Why did you spend two gold pounds to buy a cursed item later? You must know that the protagonist is unemployed, and two gold pounds is most of his remaining property. If no one is willing to ask him to make up lessons, what will he do next? What's more, the system has fallen into a deep sleep, and the protagonist still has to touch and open the cursed object, isn't he afraid of causing harm to himself? Why wait until the system is restored? There is no explanation at all in the book, which makes people confused.

It's not normal to be like this after traveling through many years in a backward world. I also went to university there. I think it's not difficult for a university professor or at least a lecturer.

Ah, the author is so miserable

Tsk, the author, you banned me from speaking in your "God Simulator" for no reason. I'm speechless. I even read my own chapter to comment on it. Didn't I scold you? There is no other way, then I can only buy your novel for free. Let's meet the author in the free novel software. I hope you can write more, short and weak, and don't be a eunuch. Tsk tsk tsk, you can save a lot of money.

The author Ning is really awesome. If you point out your grammatical errors, you should ban me, right? It's right to repay a favor with an enemy. If I had known, what would labor and management be like, Lu Dongbin?

The attribute points seem to have no regard for the physical body at all The protagonist initially had only one attribute Now they are all in two digits, and they have increased dozens of times The body has not changed at all It is purely digitalized and belongs to it The protagonist's father, Mike, also has good intentions Seems like a burden, and is tied up frequently But opportunities are constantly given to the protagonist As a supporting character who triggers the plot by the disgusting reader He is very qualified

Why did the new book ban me for no reason? I didn't say a word. When I clicked on the paragraph to comment, I found that I had been permanently banned for no reason.

After reading this picture, I felt a little confused and wanted to laugh

Did the author watch Warehouse 13, or did he watch Khan's video?

Why bring a kid with an oil bottle?

Can we stop dealing with women like this in the last two chapters?

The author's writing is good, but the characterization of the protagonist, the description of his mentality, and his behavior are inconsistent with the author's positioning of the protagonist. It is reasonable to contact the official, but not to socialize with the gangsters

Has the author ever thought about writing a fantasy apocalyptic wasteland? Because of the magical disaster, most people have turned into magic zombies that thirst for magic and only drain the energy of others. The raging magic has created magical wastelands of various terrains. The environment is so bad that even demons and demons are unwilling to visit. The difficulty for humans to control magic has greatly increased, and a little carelessness can cause magical disasters. Various creatures have mutated under the influence of magic, and druids have almost no use for them, but some druids have explored new paths. The mage has become a street rat, the king has become a warlord, and the knight has become a thug, fighting to the death for the few survival resources he has left. The magic version of Resident Evil + Fallout has quite a few gimmicks. This background is also very interesting. I recommend the movie "Empire of the Fire Dragon", which is set in a magical wasteland.

These days, do people still write online articles with this kind of structure? This is the author's conception and outline many years ago. I can't say whether I will pounce on it, but it is true that at least it is not very popular now.

All I can say is that the author's writing style simply cannot support the protagonist's identity before time travel, and it would be better to write it as a diaosi time travel.

This writing style is good... Why are so few people reading it? Is it because there are too few show-off and slap-in-the-face plots? Is there anyone who can discuss it? Did the author's previous books have so few readers?

For those who say they are grateful to Shennong, I think it is better to read it yourself. This book is already considered a good one! Of course, if you like cool writing, just think I didn't say it, it's just a personal preference, and turn left when you go out.

This book is very good, the characters of the supporting characters are very distinct and memorable, the writing is also good, and the narrative is eloquent. The protagonist is too poor. Now that he has made some money, he can change his house and improve his taste in life. He will not be so poor forever.

The author tried his best and wrote it very well. I also did my duty as a reader and subscribed to read it all. So, a little regretful but still an enjoyable reading experience.

What happened to the eunuch? Chasing and chasing is gone

The protagonist's secondary key can directly go to the center of the dungeon, which is better than other people's main keys. Who has the main key to the city of sand and sea? The writing is too deliberate. It makes the protagonist feel uncomfortable to see what he lacks.

The author is not taking a break, so why are so many people shouting for updates?

Many of the protagonist's behaviors are inexplicable and even bizarre and completely impossible to replace.

The protagonist currently upgrades too quickly. It is recommended that the author add bottlenecks and open dungeons to perfect the world view. Although a lot of early settings are suddenly thrown away, there is still a lot of foreshadowing. If the writing is long, it is not a big problem to write more than four million words. However, there is not enough conflict in this novel. The power system of the divine nobles and the power system of the past are still a mystery. However, the author's description of social life is still very good. It is recommended to add more ordinary good people to add more hope to society. Most of Cthulhu's worldview at the end of the 19th century is still too desperate for ordinary people. The rhythm of the novel is so good that it is rare to see it. I feel that the author is suitable for writing this type of novel. He can add some works such as Balzac, Chekhov and Maupassant, which are very helpful for social, cultural and economic construction. Finally, I wish the author an early update.

Unbearable to read, a waste of time!

It was very well written, why did it end

Gg has just opened a new book. It's the same title. I've written it and taken care of it, but I haven't ordered the remaining chapters. I'm too lazy to read and the story has no end. I quite like it.

Is it really not going to be continued? The writing is okay. It's a pity to cut it off

Raised to death again😢

It's very strange to give money to a fishman who wants to kill you Just give it as recruitment fee The question is what does the clause "the contract will be void if the money is not paid after one year" mean This fishman wants to kill you, but half the success is achieved, just catch him and that's it? Where is the contract so loose