Real World Simulator

I calmed down and read it. To be honest, the Ice Age volume is considered a fairy tale for me. The overall sense of immersion is strong. Unfortunately, this sense of immersion disappears from the second volume. It is very sloppy from the beginning and the writing style may lack some delicacy. Overall, it is a good book.

I'm currently on my third copy. The first copy really amazed me. I immediately subscribed, got monthly tickets, and recommended tickets. I think it's very good. At the beginning of the second world, maybe the author struggled a bit. The rhythm of the plot was not well grasped, and I did not feel "enjoyed". Normally, a good story should not only have dull moments, but also climaxes and exciting points. In addition, the ending of the story was a bit sloppy. The third world is a bit too bland. I understand that the author wants to enrich the types of copies of his book, but I don't know whether it is because he lacks energy or is not in the same state as the first copy. I feel that there is an obvious gap in quality. And the emotional line feels a bit awkward Finally, in general, if the author writes Ice Age alone, or a similar novel, I think it is very good. At least the first copy surprised me, and I have a strong sense of immersion. Seeing it now, I am still willing to give it an 8-8, and if it doesn't suck, I will probably keep watching it.

Xiancao A slow-burning apocalyptic novel. So far, the male protagonist is not a virgin, he kills decisively, the villain also has an online IQ, the plot is smooth, and the author's writing is strong. Shennong highly recommends it! !

I calmed down and read it. To be honest, the Ice Age volume is considered a fairy tale for me. The overall sense of immersion is strong. Unfortunately, this sense of immersion disappears from the second volume. It is very sloppy from the beginning and the writing style may lack some delicacy. Overall, it is a good book.

I just read the latest chapter in one go. I think the story and writing are very good. The characters' IQs are online and the environment is well-developed. I give the author a thumbs up 👍 A very good point is that the details of survival are handled very well. I can also learn a little knowledge while reading the book. It can be seen that the author has accumulated experience and has a story. At present, if this book does not develop towards male ketone, I will keep pursuing it I am serious. If there is a male ketone plot, I will abandon it directly.

After reading Chapter 37, I wanted to ask how sharp a table knife can be. Should I wear a short-sleeved T-shirt in sub-zero temperatures? ? The knife pierced through and made a big gash. What kind of knife do you think it is? Can you have any idea?

Look down at the hotel mission. . . It's too deliberate, for the sake of the plot, it's forced to be clever. Some comments said that God's perspective is different. Don't forget, this is a game, OK? When your cognition accepts the definition of the game, no matter how real the world is, your behavior will change. For example, you will be less law-abiding, less cherishing life, and you may feel disgusted when you see blood, but you will feel more real instead of guilty What is a player? A group of lawless creatures, with nothing at level one, they dare to dominate the city and PK, killing soldiers, guards, and neutral creatures. Tell me, are there any target restrictions for this mission? Is it said that non-mission NPCs cannot be killed? "Real players" have long been prepared to kill them all. Anyway, they kill NPCs whenever they see them until the mission is completed. As for justice? It's funny, you talk to a player about justice. Only when the player has no tasks, and the NPC has no experience and does not explode anything, will he talk to you about justice according to his camp preference. Please remember that all players must be at least Neutral or Chaos.

The author's strength is the depiction of survival in an extreme apocalypse. The weakness is the plot of the fighting part. You can see it from the snow hotel and shelter. As a result, you still like writing this thing, and you still find it exciting. I really hope you can use your strengths and avoid your weaknesses. You have written a lot of starting points for fighting, but you still can't write well. What are the characteristics of your book? If you don't exploit your strengths and use your characteristics, you will fall into mediocrity. It's really hard to describe.

The first Ice Age, the plot of ice and snow adventure and survival, is quite attractive to me. At the end, I just put on fantasy, what is the trump card in the end, what realm is it, half-step to Dzogchen and so on. These things have long been disgusting after the struggle was over, and in the era when the themes were rampant, they were not dealt with well, but fell behind.

Students who don't have money keep reading pirated books. But I really like this, subscribing for living expenses. I hope you don't want eunuchs

The Ice Age was written quite well earlier. But the more I read later, the weirder it becomes. The real world is not handled well, and the routines in the back can be guessed. Compared with the excitement of the Ice Age copy, it is even more tragic. This book has gone downhill again and ran away. It's such a pity for a book to start like this. The following is a complaint With this setting of sleeping for three years, does the real world still require frequent communication? Just take away one million and that's it. Are you short of money? There are countless ways to make money with this strength. After your strength increases, you can participate in competitions in your own name, and then come back to open a boxing gym. Isn't it more satisfying than being a true disciple and working as a kid? You already have a simulator, but you still want to change your job? ? While saying he was short of money, he refused the opportunity to get a million dollars to lie down and concentrate on playing games. I also thought the boxing gym was suitable, so I changed my job. I also said that if you are a player, planning will help you maintain corresponding thinking. When you play the game, you can think more clearly. I am really speechless. I've already guessed the plot behind it. Farewell. Personally, I think it may be a better choice to continue writing the Ice Age dungeon. The preliminary foreshadowing, character creation, and atmosphere have all been done very well. It's a pity that it ended so suddenly. Farewell.

It's so high and low. I really don't understand. Are guns just decorations? They shoot the mob. They use the idea of ​​​​stabilizing society to describe disasters. Why don't the army dare to shoot? The guns are all being snatched away. If they don't shoot, I really don't know what the army is thinking. Who can watch it?

If you have new ideas, just start a new book. Don't continue the story by force. The latest chapters have a sudden twist. Taken individually, they are quite attractive. However, your twist is too abrupt and the whole thing is fragmented. It is better to strive for a better writing in the next book. If you want to write this book, you can update it slowly, whether it's a side story or a daily routine. The author doesn't have to be discouraged. You can see that the author's level has improved significantly. Compared with the previous book, this one is much more popular. Come on, I've finished this one and I'll follow the next one too.

Alas, it's the end of the world and you have to prepare to have a harem. You can't live without a woman. It's just that the first teammate is a woman. The reason is normal, but the second teammate is still a woman. It's really a bad novel.

What a great book. It's hard to find a protagonist who fits my three views - he helps others when he can and he is decisive in killing evil. After all, the protagonists of recent apocalyptic novels are all absolute egoists for some reason. . . I hope the author can maintain this tone and not change it. . .

After reading chapter 70, there was an outbreak of influenza and the appearance of Dr. Tang, and I suddenly felt that if the end of the world really comes, Chinese medicine will definitely be more effective than Western medicine. Chinese medicine can make you live in a daze, while Western medicine can make you die in a clear way. Western medicine without instruments or finished medicines is far different from traditional Chinese medicine. It is not that it is useless, but there are many diseases. It has no instruments and no ready-made medicines. At most, they only know the cause of the disease, but they do not know how to cure it. Unfortunately, Chinese medicine is limited by Western medicine.

This book seems to be the one I raised last year, but there is no eunuch. Come on, the author, I will share my humble efforts.

Apart from being good during the Ice Age, it has been going downhill. It's like playing a game, and playing it all the time. There's nothing to deal with in the real world.

Abandoned I saw the beginning of The Wandering Earth The Ice Age was pretty good Then the description of the scarlet virus world was a bit poor. And it can be clearly seen that he is a character with the protagonist's abilities copied from the original form of the torturer. The main reason for not watching it is that the movie The Wandering Earth is too fake! I didn't watch it when it first came out. The special effects were pretty cool, but the logic didn't make sense at all! The planetary engine cannot work at all. Politics is a problem, and resources are also a problem. Even if it is built, what energy will you use? The most important thing is that if you think about it, you can understand that the mass of the earth cannot bear this kind of thing at all. You pushed it and scattered it! ! It's okay to cause a huge earthquake that can wipe out all mankind without spreading out. And can the atmosphere withstand it while you push it? There are a lot of bugs like this, you can think of them all. The writing of this novel is okay. The subject matter in the beginning is very good, but it is copied from the Ice Age, but the writing style becomes worse in the middle.

This novel is outrageous. It's freezing cold outside, the protagonist's physique is amazing, and it takes a few hours to walk two miles... Your two miles is different from what I understand, otherwise it wouldn't be possible!

Pulled after the shelter. What a waste, I booked everything

I thought the first world was great. It gave me a sense of aftertaste. I stayed up late to read it. At that time, I thought it might be a seriously underestimated book. As a result, the subsequent world did not have that flavor. It felt like it had no soul. The charm of the protagonist in the end of the world disappeared and he became a clichéd and self-righteous "player". I felt that this player's mentality seriously affected the connotation and excitement of the plot. In my opinion, this is a wonderful life of self-fulfillment, rather than being a player and starting out. If you can't beat the game of Unparalleled Killer Kill, it's the blame on the plot, right? Since it's a game, why don't you play a real-life game? In addition to the realism, which real-life masterpieces can't beat these copies? The plots and characters are creative and in-depth, and there are many multiplayer games that you can play with friends, so I think it's broken.

The author's subject matter and the current paragraph are all fine. I suggest you not to be in a hurry to write. You should not update it for two days. Think carefully about the follow-up copy and make it attractive and interesting. Then I think your book will not disappoint you and our readers and can achieve good results. Let's put it this way: I Have a House of Horrors in Horror Paradise and Mr. Liang Zhenggong from Qingshan Mental Hospital were both equally popular with you at the beginning, but then the quality became higher and higher, and you became famous all of a sudden. I think you have the potential, so write well. The content is important, and updating is also a prerequisite to ensure continuous popularity. I hope you can become a god

It's really difficult to find one that meets the three views. Nowadays, all the openings, such as shelters or rafts, are more like gamification of the world, and they are all the same. They are probably produced in batches by some studio. It almost makes me vomit. The protagonist in it is just a plug-in, and then he starts to rise. It has an apocalyptic feel, more like a pretentious urban novel, changing the soup without changing the medicine. It's uncomfortable!

Alas, I thought the author would keep writing about natural disasters, such as changing the world to a dry desert or a jungle in the rainy season, and surviving on a desert island in the vast sea. As a result, he turned into a fantasy virus zombie with a new skin. I was a bit disappointed.

Reading the introduction, it feels like a small world game, but the content is not as interesting as Tingri's writing style, but the author has written his own interesting points. . . Ah, this is a bit comfortable

Except for the plot of the Ice Age, the other dungeons are quite impressive.

The first few dungeons were okay, but things started to go wrong after wandering around. The protagonist of the ancient dungeon has given up thinking and just wants to survive the drought, locusts and floods... The protagonist has forgotten that this is a doomsday sim. I feel that the character of the protagonist is broken, and I can't pursue it anymore. Come on, author.

Awesome

I have been reading it for nearly two weeks and finished it in less than an hour. Can you give me some advice, author? 5000 Updates per day? That's okay.