Card World: Surviving on a Desert Island

It's not bad written. A survival game for one person can be interesting, like wilderness survival. There are cards, and the plot is logical. Are netizens these days so impatient? They can't even finish this kind of story. They wish the male lead would be invincible on the first page and the book would end on the second, finishing the book in two seconds.

The plot is too long, with a lot of unnecessary text and storylines, and excessive descriptions of the characters' inner thoughts. Character growth and labels need to be shown through the plot, not forcibly stated in the text that "biu, he has grown up." The plot progressed very slowly, and I missed the three golden chapters.

When I got to Chapter 6 of Volume 2, I was speechless. A woman who had been through thick and thin with you for over a year was not as good as a neighbor who was just a familiar stranger. And it was clearly mentioned earlier that you saw her medical records. Is she sick or what? Why do you have to think of a woman who is obviously seriously ill?

The modern-day arc makes the island arc seem like a joke.

The monkey-taming part was poorly written. What was the rush? Stockholm syndrome was introduced, and that wasn't enough; the system suddenly appeared and granted a taming function. And to make matters worse, the system changed its nature – initially requiring the protagonist to discover all functions, now it just tells the protagonist all the benefits of the taming function.

Regardless of the author's writing quality, the overall direction is wrong. The novel's title attracted readers who were drawn in by the card-based island survival theme, but the later part about cultivating immortality with the Wood Spirit Orb is discouraging. Looking at the table of contents, it seems to have turned into an urban novel. Isn't this completely irrelevant? Did the author not have an outline? The main plot and theme are way off track.

Before chapter 58, it's about the little cheater's survival on a deserted island. After Chapter 58, he acquires a spirit beast and an inheritance, and begins his cultivation journey. Recorded on October 8, 2023.

Has the author changed? The genre is completely different now. I don't know what the author was thinking. It turned into a modern urban novel halfway through, promising an isekai world, but it never actually left the island. It feels like they're just deceiving the readers. 😅

I still can't understand what you're writing in the second volume. Look at the title, even before the name change, it was clearly a cultivation novel, and the first volume was also clearly a cultivation story, although it included some awkward romance.

I bought a coconut from Meituan Youxuan. At first, I thought I could break it open, so I took out a kitchen knife and tried to split it. After trying for a long time, I finally used a clean awl to chisel it open.