I Made a Ghost Film, So How Did I Become a Celestial Master?

How to deal with ordinary zombies, regardless of intelligence

The more I look at it, the more disgusting it becomes -_-||! Make a movie and play detective? The gameplay is full of loopholes, and the setting is completely messed up to keep the protagonist unaware of ghosts. The protagonist is like a retard, and the official staff are no longer retarded, but a bunch of mentally retarded imbeciles!

Let's talk about the advantages: 1. The story logic is relatively rigorous, which is a rare work for old bookworms. 2. The setting is also quite interesting. The male protagonist can catch ghosts, but others cannot! It's so cool. 3. It is also what I value most. As the saying goes, reading words is like reading people. When you look at the three views of the characters in the book, it is not difficult to find that the author's three views are also very positive. This is very important. It is related to the quality of the whole book and is also the motivation for me to continue reading. Let's talk about the shortcomings In fact, there are some shortcomings when I read it. Book friends all mentioned it, but I think the small flaws are not important. After all, this is a matter of opinion, and there will always be dissatisfying points. But what is the most unpleasant thing about this book? It's just "bloated". It gives people a feeling of water. After reading it carefully, you will find that every sentence is good, but after reading one chapter, you will find that things can be solved in a few words. But it is precisely because of this that the plot of True Skills advances slowly and seems bloated. I started reading at 6 p. M. And saw that from now until the latest chapter, there are only two main stories in Chapter 90. Isn't that the end? Many book friends have a negative reaction, that is, the author did not remove the complexity and keep the simplicity, and there is no substantial word count to advance the content. It feels like it is advanced, but it feels like it is not advanced. Although I have never written a novel, I have done short video commentary. I want to explain everything clearly, so I need to write in detail. I feel this is also important. I have to add my personal understanding to that paragraph, and then it is a bloated video. In fact, apart from being self-motivated, it will not be liked by many viewers. In fact, how to condense a one-to-two-hour movie into six or seven minutes, and still explain it in a clear and coherent manner, with a small climax of 20 seconds and a big climax of 30 seconds? Only such works can have a higher completion rate and higher broadcasts. The same is true for novels. If it is just to structure the world view in the book and create more characters, but ignore the importance of rhythm, then it can only be regarded as the author's self-feeling. No readers will care about this at all, and they have no responsibility to understand the author. Results are the best feedback.

I'd like to meet you and comment on it. I hope you won't delete it for the sake of reading the original version. From the title introduction, this is a supernatural system text, and the whole story has a supernatural plot from beginning to end. The system plot is less than one thousandth. Secondly, as a time traveler, things like time travel have happened. Even if people all over the world say there are ghosts, even if the system provides a lot of information about ghosts, I don't believe it, don't listen, don't listen, you are all neurotic. All kinds of pretending to be stupid. I have read a book before and stayed in the restricted area for many years. The memory of the protagonist is sealed, and then the whole world surrounds the protagonist and hides the protagonist. And you are the whole world telling the protagonist, and then the protagonist is stupid. The latest chapter has been cut and he still pretends to be stupid. I really can't stand it anymore. I can accept the protagonist's escape, mental illness, dihua, and dark series, but I really don't include fools.

The plot was so boring that I didn't have the patience to continue reading, and the first dozen or so chapters were boring and not interesting at all.

Before reading a book, you must first lower your IQ to the level of a third-grade elementary school student.

After reading some, I feel like complaining First: The protagonist keeps repeating that there are no ghosts in the world, and you have to believe in science. This is actually not a poisonous point, but I personally find it a bit embarrassing. Everyone says there are ghosts, but the protagonist alone still doesn't believe it. I have never even doubted who is sick Second: The squad leader of the relevant department, this is the one who is scolded the most. No objection. In fact, if you think about it, if you are the squad leader and you don't know whether the protagonist is good or bad, can you trust the protagonist unconditionally? If this is the case, then your captain position can only be obtained by py. Originally, you should monitor contacts and cooperate best. If the protagonist shows signs of danger, you should use all means to deal with the protagonist. Don't talk from a God's perspective.

System, time travel, talent, don't believe in ghosts. Very poisonous.

Does the author never look at the results of his own books? Is the data increasing or decreasing every day? Is the increase in collections slower or faster? Do you think it's funny if you don't believe in ghosts in supernatural literature?

The protagonist's logic is understandable, but it's uncomfortable to watch. The protagonist feels something is wrong from the things given by the system, and then goes to verify it, but he can't find it. Asking others also said there is no ghost, so he suspects that there is a problem with the system. Here, the protagonist does not think that there must be no ghosts, but he can't find ghosts. They all avoid the feeling of the protagonist, just like writing about the death of an important character to create a climax, then this character has to waste some writing. It doesn't just mean that this character is a close friend of the protagonist's parents, but it also has to be felt by the readers.), The reason for this discomfort is Because only people with special physiques can see ghosts. All the protagonist's methods of dealing with ghosts are true. He can also practice and easily destroy ordinary ghosts. He has a lot of knowledge that others don't know, but he only lacks the knowledge and ability to see ghosts. All knowledge is true! But the only way to see ghosts is fake! This is not to say that this is definitely not possible, but it is more forced to create conflicts. Some "invincible flow" and "I am invincible but I don't know the flow" are prone to this kind of problem. If it is handled well, it will be comfortable to watch, but if it is not handled well, it will be more uncomfortable. It feels like the protagonist is forcibly subdued, and the logic is not asked, but it is not handled well.