Ghost Story Simulator

First of all, it is purely subjective and has no reference value. The subject matter is good, the writing is just okay, the creativity is average, and the details are average. Then the advanced content of the subject matter has been completely blown up by the author himself, and it is basically not interesting to me personally. Let me comment kindly, although my impression of this book is really average. At first glance, the subject matter is a standard "acting flow". Even the introduction and early plot are all about this content. This subject matter is inherently beautiful, and the author's writing style has managed to capture the essence of this subject matter. Up to this point, the author has defeated at least 90% of his colleagues who write about acting. If there is any better performance in the follow-up, I think this book is worth reading, but it is a pity. The core of "playing flow" depends on creativity (or whether it is good to copy the character) + details (whether it is in place or not). The performance of these two authors is average. Not to mention the evil nun's revenge, at least most people take a look at it to "get revenge" for the nun. The section does not explain in depth how to explore and use specific abilities. Is it really appropriate for your "monster playing style" to not explain the specific abilities of a monster to the readers? The two writings are generally okay, but I am really speechless when it comes to directly exposing my identity. . . The focus of this approach is not "toxic or not", but that the "interesting content" that could have been expected in the follow-up is gone, and the "expectation value is gone." When I look at this subject, what I hope to see is inherent content such as "playing a role behind the scenes to gain fame in front of the government and the villain", "the government and the villain guessing based on the protagonist's behavior", "the anti-hero protagonist unscrupulously venting his own freedom of thought with his own mind", "the protagonist's human identity standing behind the scenes to promote the overall situation and control the chessboard" and so on. These things are most of the reasons why the "monster cosplay flow" is so lovable, and you expose yourself at will, kicking away all the "interesting" possibilities. I even guessed that you might find ways to make up for it later, such as adding settings, such as what will happen soon, such as only xx knows, etc., But from this plot turning point, it is all boring at first glance, and the expectations are shattered. What is the point of watching? The most terrifying part is that, You actually think you were poisoned? This is not poison, it is a negative expectation. Occasionally, if the writing is poisonous, others will tolerate it because the subject matter is interesting and fits the taste. If the expectation is negative, who do you expect to read it? Will you keep it and not delete it? Then if you insist on writing such a weird idea, you can either set the protagonist to be righteous and patriotic or extremely lazy, or the identity needs to be exposed to gain maximum benefits, or at least have the ability to predict, which will ensure that you will always be invincible in the future. . . At least give the protagonist some positive income from this weird behavior, instead of giving out information and doing charity at a loss without any benefits? In summary, this book is not worth reading for me, it is just a way to kill time, and the author is a bit speechless. Above.

Now that I have read Chapter 14, let's talk about some problems in this book! First of all, having both parents is close at hand: I am not saying that having both parents is not possible, but it is difficult to grasp "filial piety". In fact, even great writers will not easily write about certain aspects. Even if the parents are still alive, they will occasionally appear outside the main plot. Or although they are written as parents, they are actually brothers emotionally. In short, it is all to avoid this pitfall. (We can only look forward to the author's ability and handling of this) Then there is the issue of the protagonist's self-destruction of his true identity. In fact, the role of self-destruction of his true identity can be achieved without self-destruction, and even the lines do not need to be changed. Just tell those contents to the state machine. As for the true identity of the protagonist, it is not important to the state machine. It is also impossible to believe what the protagonist says because of his identity. All tests will be conducted to verify. In addition, the protagonist's self-destruction of his identity may be misleading. The protagonist's abilities are due to the simulator, and the situation may be different from other people's. And there is also a problem with the author's point of view. It is true that the protagonist currently has absolute combat power and the national machine needs the protagonist, but what about the future? I know that the protagonist will definitely grow faster, but as long as the state machine thinks that it no longer needs the protagonist and has the ability to control the protagonist, it will definitely take action against the protagonist, because the protagonist itself is an unstable factor. I feel that the author was not baptized by the novels from the earliest period of online writing. At that time, there were many novels with this kind of setting, and they basically fell out with the state machinery later on. The needs of the country and individuals are different. If the novel was entirely based on the needs of the country, the novel itself would be less interesting.

To be honest, I actually thought it was pretty good when I read the first story, but after the story ended, my parents and girlfriend suddenly popped up and I felt really uncomfortable. Originally, when I read the title of the book, I just wanted to read about weird stories, not about romance. Moreover, it involves too many things, and there are too many annoying things. If they are not handled well, they will be like lightning points. Why do you think Qidian Orphanage appeared? That is, the vast majority of people are unwilling to step on such relatives.

Spoiler alert! ! ! ! I was very happy to watch it at first, but then Goldfinger ceased to belong to the protagonist and became the protagonist + supporting role, but it was still bearable. After all, it was based on the story, so the requirements were not too high. Then someone persuaded her to quit. This time, the heroine got married after time travel and had a child. Of course, both of them died, and the author said: "This is a reincarnation, not a minotaur." But when I think about it carefully, the heroine's husband was forced into the emotional line between the heroine and the protagonist. The main purpose is to let the heroine become the protagonist's nanny to have some drama, but this is very awkward, even if it is just a maid or a child bride? No, we need a wet nurse, a wife, a tauren... Is this the author's fault? No, the author just reflects his inner world on the novel. Is this the protagonist's fault? No, the protagonist is killed by the minotaur, and he is also a victim. Is this the heroine's fault? No! The heroine is just a puppet on strings. She was forced to experience the Minotaur incident without even bringing her memories with her. Then this must be my problem... How is it possible! I'm just an ordinary warrior of pure love. I don't long for beautiful love lines. I just want the tauren to die. How could I be so sinful? After eliminating the wrong options, only the real murderer is left, and that is the system. It is the system that wants to form a team! The system wants to change the protagonist from male to female! The system is the real Minotaur! It is the real murderer! I can only hope that the author's next novel can give a home to the vast number of pure love warriors.

The second copy is really well written, but it has multiple perspectives and looks confusing. I feel like it would be great if it were filmed and turned into an animation, TV series, or game. Or make it into a script. This story is really great.

⒈A dreamModern ⒉A doorFuture World ⒊A female fox [ancient fairy] ⒋A mentally ill person suffering from multiple schizophrenia [modern times] ⒌Tentative, submissions welcome. —————— You can vote if you like it. The third copy has been decided. Stay tuned.

The first story was really off-putting, as if the author was pressing my head and telling me that here the protagonist was wronged, and there the villagers were scared. I felt no emotion when I read it, but I was confused when I listened to it. It was like traveling, and I couldn't appreciate the extravagant words of the tour guide in the wasteland.

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To be honest, the dungeon is quite good, the villain is annoying, and there is a bit of tragedy in it. In the end, it is a natural victory, which is very satisfying But I am not optimistic about the real plot. Cataclysm is good, and it is good to show strength. How can I write it for a long time? Now I have the impression that the real copy is shorter than the simulator copy But the author's writing is still very good, and I look forward to the future development If you don't like reality, you can read and wait, or just read the copy.

To be honest, the subject matter is very good. But this is a ghost story, not a romance novel. The writing is not very good, and there is still no complete plot line. I suggest rewriting it because it's too confusing. The first story could have been written more. Instead of ending it hastily.

I was reading a horror novel two days ago and suddenly laughed. By the way, that stainless steel should contain a lot of iron.

The sanity value of the second copy dropped like crazy. I tried to break free but couldn't. It was so hopeless. So why is there another protagonist appearing when the protagonist turns into a weird time loop? When will the protagonist become complete? Is there another protagonist? Several reincarnations will complete him.

Ghost stories are conflicting rules that make people shudder if they read all the rules in full. Instead of the evil ghosts taking revenge one after another after death, you might as well change the title of your first town legend to The Revenge of the Evil Ghost You can completely distribute the rules to the villagers in it and let them inadvertently touch the rules and die. You can even change the writing style to be more humorous and let them I feel that I have successfully survived, but inadvertently touched a rule that I didn't care about and died. The last survivor naturally knew the complete rule, or it was just good luck and did not encounter the rule that I had not seen. If I want to write about the people within the rule, I should write down the despair in the heart of people facing so many complicated rules and the excitement of escaping from death.

The subject matter and imagination are okay, but the writing style is too stretched. The most awkward thing is the emotional scenes or the description of character interaction is too poor. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

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The name is good, but the writing is not very good.

Golden Chapter 3 is a bit dissuasive. It looks inexplicably disgusting. Is it because my sanity level is not high enough? 😅

I felt that the content was a bit messy and the writing was not very strong. After reading the first copy, I was really confused about the ordinary life scenes. There was no foreshadowing and I simply wrote about a green plum falling from the sky. When I saw my true identity revealed in front of a researcher, I really couldn't stand it anymore. . . .

The second copy is well written, but I can understand it, but I think it is too long, and the theme is boring. I feel Those who endured it to the end must like this ancient theme I also finished it, but I felt really uncomfortable, and then I couldn't stand the mechanical part at the end Sigh What does it mean to not believe it? The first one written by the author was so good, but the subsequent ones were so bad It made me suspect that the author was no longer the same author I felt that the second one really didn't match the theme, and it was just a story based on ghost stories Why did you write such a long and complicated puzzle? It's not that no one is reading it with brains, I'm just too lazy to read it Others are reading your direct weird stories A very concise story like your first one is good The whole copy of the second chapter is ridiculously long and boring I think it's good, but I think it's a bit outrageous I like medieval style and don't like ancient Chinese style If you have characteristics like mine, I won't like it I endured reading most of it I guess I like the ancient style I can only say that the second one is well written, but there is no need After reading it, I probably read the first chapter, and then slowly updated it, and followed it slowly, and I didn't want to say anything, I can only say it's good And I also feel that the copy of the second chapter is really boring I will directly persuade everyone who likes to read it It feels like the fourth world is slowly starting to become normal, but it is not normal. Come on, author!

It's disgusting. You've become a monster. Damn it, you still have human feelings, you still have a girlfriend, you still love your family and so on.

The first simulation looked okay, at least what should be explained was explained clearly. When I was writing the second simulation, I got excited about writing. I was too ambitious and wanted to write a multi-line parallelism. Unfortunately, the writing was not strong enough and I couldn't control the main line and auxiliary lines. Some of them even had no beginning or end. Anyway, it was a mess and it looked big.

Praise Content, writing, and creativity are all five stars.

Although it is very convoluted, it is very good. It doesn't matter if it is convoluted. More updates will be great if you let me read it in a row. Come on.

The protagonist has changed his gender. If you have strong tastes, you can watch it. If you can't accept it, run away!

Regarding the third copy, there are several possibilities (the second copy is almost finished). If possible, cast your vote to see which copy you are more interested in. ———————— ①The background is ancient, the identity is a female general ②The background is modern, the identity is pervert ③The background is modern, the identity is a dream ④The background is modern, the identity is artificial intelligence ⑤The background is ancient, the identity is a schizophrenia patient ———————————————— I don't know how to vote. Just send out the serial number. To possible readers.

Damn, write weird stories well, write weird stories, under the general trend of China's foreign dynasty in Beijing, there are a little bit of super power strange stories, just combine human wisdom to do this and that, you have to get involved in what you are not good at, cater to the trend that has long been outdated, add bad emotional drama Abandon martial arts, destroy the Great Wall

The first script is a ghost story. The story is very complete. The story itself is very simple and not complicated. The main things are clearly explained. Other parts that should be brief are brief enough without being procrastinating. This is a good job. Although the author himself feels that this copy is not very good, I think it is okay. A few minor problems will have little impact. But! That's right, but it's here, but the first intermission embarrassed me to death! The first time I came into contact with the authorities, talking, doing things, my God, was that an intellectually sound adult? Including the old man, the protagonist just asked about the infected people, and the old man almost jumped up and fought for his life... What's wrong? ! ? ! I haven't read the rest yet, so I'm going to change my mind to a happy and brainless short article first. I may not come back to read it, and I may not be interested in continuing to comment after reading it. Just let it go~ I hope this book will get better and better, author, come on 👍

The subject matter is quite good, but the author's writing style is too bad... It's so messy... The first volume is obviously written by the author to get excited, but the problem is that readers can't get excited... It's too messy, the writing is too messy.

The simulation description of this simulator is unique. Different from other simulator novels, the character description is very good. In just two chapters, the protagonist's character is portrayed. It has great potential so far. Good luck, author.

I'm optimistic about you, and the author doesn't want eunuchs