Pirate's Control of Thunder

Has no one discovered it? In the world of pirates, natural fruits can only be said to be shortcuts, while superhuman fruits are the real way. Time! Space! There are also some special abilities that only appear in the Superman series! The natural system is inherently grand, but it is basically a natural phenomenon that can be observed with the naked eye! And humans themselves limit the development of the natural system. After all, humans have limited physical strength and cannot use their abilities to create the most extreme natural disasters in nature! The fantasy beast type naturally determines the upper limit of development! Of course, the above opinions do not include domineering and swordsmanship systems, but refer to people who only develop their fruit abilities to the limit under the same conditions.

There is no invincible Devil Fruit. This is not a matter of brain power at all. If you want to say that I am invincible just because of my brain power, then if I write a novel in which the protagonist eats the Pee Pee Fruit and activates his ability to penetrate the universe, then that is an exaggeration. It is of no use to writing, except for Devil Fruit. In fact, physical domination is indispensable. Facing the strong, some fancy or large-scale AOE skills are of little use to the strong. Electric magnets, electric heating, and a derivative ability can be so powerful. What will happen to those who eat the magnetic fruit and the burning fruit? Magneto from One Piece? The sun god in One Piece? The thunder fruit is very powerful in the early stage, and it is invincible in front of the soldiers. It has a large area of ​​ae, fast movement, and a wide range of sight and color. However, when encountering a strong person, one thunder greeting cannot hit it. Put a few more to block the dodge space. Let's not say whether it can or not. I can hit it, and how much effect will it have if I hit it? Don't say I'm fast, and my extra speed is not teleportation. Kizaru is fast enough, and there are many strong people who can keep up with his speed. The God of Thunder is a big move, right? Can he withstand Kaido's Thunder Bagua? So don't think about those fancy skills. It's okay to deal with too many enemies or miscellaneous soldiers. Now it's time to consider the nature of thunder. It can stimulate the body and stimulate the body with violent thunder and lightning. It means that the control of thunder and lightning is like an arm wielder, using thunder and lightning to be violent and quick. , The characteristic of fatal paralysis to the human body, think about how Akainu hit Whitebeard, a powerful body, a powerful armed color condensed in his right hand, the ability to use the power of rock berries to store energy and explode, coupled with the ability to find the right time through knowledge and color, severely injure Whitebeard with a punch, this is the fruit, taijutsu, and domineering aspect Is the combined punch particularly pirate-like? Does it fit the name of a natural devil fruit? But if Akainu uses Meteor Volcano to hit Whitebeard, what's the use besides wasting energy and accidentally injuring his own people? Why are some fruit awakenings so powerful? Because they can The surrounding becomes an environment that is conducive to your own combat. It is surrounded by lines, magma, and ice. It can at least consume your physical strength. If you are at a lower level, let alone fighting, it will be difficult to save your life. Let's see if this is of any use to you. Let's pay attention to each other. I also wrote a book.

The protagonist is going to wash his neck. All natural fruits are like brothers to Luffy's Nika Fruit. During the battle between Luffy and Kaido, the Nika Fruit showed the ability to capture elements. Luffy jumped into the air and caught the lightning summoned by Kaido and threw it back to Kaido. I don't know if Luffy can capture other elements. Currently, Luffy's ability to capture lightning is definitely the best way to restrain the Thunder Fruit.

One Piece is so ridiculous that I don't want to read it, 😁,,, well, I don't blame the author, the original work is too brainless, One Piece is a joke now, even more ridiculous than Bo Ran 😁

The thunder and lightning fruit has appeared in the first few books. It has developed lightning to stimulate the body, control electromagnetism, increase the voltage and breakdown space, cover the new world with information, color and domineering power, strike the whole world with lightning, and even more extreme, can directly travel across the world.

After reading the first 36 chapters, I found a question. The protagonist's teammates didn't explain clearly and appeared inexplicably. What are their fruit abilities? What are your specialties? At first I thought the author was hinting that he would explain it later, but after reading Chapter 36, I still don't know. It just feels weird

The writing is quite good, it should be in a realistic style. As a pirate, he should be cruel, which I like a little bit. The following is a small suggestion. The general crew members should be recruited to provide more support, write down their characteristics, abilities, and maximize their value as crew members, instead of letting the protagonist be their nanny. After all, this is a cruel and realistic world. Weakness is the original sin, and pity is unacceptable. Wishing the Great Fire

Also, there is no need to take the three major weapons too seriously in the novel. To put it bluntly, the three major weapons are equivalent to the giants. They are powerful against ordinary people and against lieutenant generals. Strong ones at the level of generals are useless, especially those who wake up naturally. The world of One Piece is a world in a high house. What weapons are useful against ordinary people and lower-level combat forces?

The author has mentioned more than once in the article that the protagonist does not want to show off, but wants to be humble and not attract attention. But the protagonist does exactly the opposite. In the new world, everyone famously destroyed an island with a population of one million, joined the Rocks Pirates and became the captain of the famous Grand Line, and went to attack the Judiciary Island in the first half of the Grand Line after a disagreement?

The protagonist is a pirate, but the protagonist's pirate group has very few scenes, and it feels like the entire storyline has very little main plot and is basically just some side plots. The transitions between each scene are very confusing and I don't know what I am doing. Each event is basically without a beginning or end. I can't understand what the protagonist is after reading 200 chapters.

I'm very confused why, all the protagonists in novels like to save girls with tragic life experiences 😔

Author, it would be much better if you made the protagonist taller and have a domineering look. Are you kidding me at the height of 16 years old and 1.7 Meters? In modern society, sixteen-year-olds are all 1.8 Meters tall, let alone One Piece. Common people in One Piece are generally around two meters tall. And then there is the overlord look. The protagonist has always wanted to be strong, so why can't he have the overlord look? Also, according to your setting, Rocks said that the protagonist can surpass the white-bearded golden lion in the future, just to be different from other books, but you didn't give the overlord character? Laughing to death, you know what the image of the protagonist in your novel is in my mind. He is a 1.7-Meter-seven kid who does not have the temperament to be the ruler of the sea at all. He really has no sense of belonging at all. Apart from Luffy, which red-haired Pirate King is less than two meters tall? These two points are really poisonous. Many people are persuaded to quit by these two points.

Why does it feel weirder and weirder the more I watch it, what is the protagonist's purpose? It seems to be immortality, but you don't say how the protagonist is going to operate it, and you don't describe what fruit the second-in-command of the pirate group eats, just like the Riddler.

The Battle of the Valley of the Gods was too overly written and anticlimactic. Even if they want to break away from the Rocks Pirates, it would be bad for both the World Government and Rocks to suffer losses. They were fighting, Pigfoot and Whitebeard actually went on an adventure, and the author also used his imagination to make up some settings. What kind of crazy idea is this? Under normal circumstances, if Garp comes alone, wouldn't three people surround him and beat him up? Could it be that the pirates still want to talk to you about the rules, one-on-one? ? ? At the end, Roger came over to fight two against one. Pig's Foot and Whitebeard came out and released two big ones. After clearing the minions, they ran away. What does this say, play house? ? ? I can understand the author's thoughts, so I don't want to change the previous plot for the sake of writing later. But if the fanfic does not change the plot, and is not willing to reason about changing the subsequent plot, what is the use of writing it, instead of watching the text version of the anime again?

I found that except for the protagonist, everyone else was just a background wall, and I couldn't write it out, so everyone felt like they were there. For example, if his subordinates didn't talk to each other, they wouldn't feel that the protagonist had subordinates. They vaguely felt that they were there, but they didn't feel that they were there. Also, the number of subordinates was not written out. It was far worse than the previous Three Kingdoms novels. The Three Kingdoms novels definitely showed military generals, and many soldiers were written with a strong sense of presence.

I feel like the author can't go on with the rest of it. It's all about ordinary daily life. Even great people don't dare to write about daily life. Who can write about daily life well without a certain writing style?

I really don't understand. What's been going on lately? I've just had a few chapters with a small climax of fighting Big Mom and Kaido, but I decided to write something else. It's like the car broke down as soon as it hit the highway. Can't I write about the protagonist's battle properly?

Isn't that right? It's too difficult for you to describe the awakening of nature. Doesn't the awakening of nature permanently change the environment? Akainu and blue pheasant fight for the place of marshal

Many of them were skipped. For example, the scene where the Celestial Dragons go to the Dragon Palace under the sea is gone, and the scene where the Black Carbon Orochi is chased by Kaido is gone. They jump directly to another scene at critical moments.

Author, what makes you persist?

A person who has gone through time and space has done many things and told me that there is no Bawang color. You are absolutely missing a considerable number of readers, and the readers who are still reading will be bored.

There is no overlord style that is really poisonous

In the first chapter, the author's protagonist thinks that he is very lucky to have the Thunder Fruit in his hand, and then he is captured at the age of fourteen and has no choice but to become a pirate. I don't see where the protagonist is helpless. I think he is quite happy to be a pirate? Normal people with such good abilities would usually either run away or backstab unless the captain came to save their lives. What's more, they were captured and knew that the place where they were staying was a dead ship.        ，，，，        ，

At the beginning of chapter one hundred and twenty-nine, Fujitora smiled. It would be a bit difficult to write a lifetime.

By the time Luffy appears, the protagonist should be a 53-year-old uncle.

What are you writing about? ? ? ? ? ? ? Apart from the protagonist, who are the others? ? ? ? Riddler get out of the pirates🥵

The battles are well written, and the characteristics of the characters in One Piece are well written. However, the plot is quite confusing. After reading hundreds of chapters, I don't even know how many people are in the protagonist's pirate group. What kind of devil fruits are they?

Fujitora's name is also wrong. Is the author Unkai a fan? Who is Issei? Obviously a smile

Momonosuke died in 404🙂

Are there so many people discussing the plot in this comment section 😂 mourning its misfortune and hating it?