Doomsday Deduction Master

How can I put it? The setting is okay. It gives the protagonist the ability to play. It is also very interesting to play. It is also a good setting to cooperate with the official. But Firstly, nonsensical jokes in the early stage will ruin the popularity of passersby. Secondly, the protagonist's performance is low in IQ and a bit neurotic. If you want to write that the protagonist is Feng Bujue's kind of character, I think the author of the details is still It is necessary to think about it carefully. If people set up the first point well, it will not be a problem The third is the part of cooperation with the official. The information revealed is not only that I am a time traveler from tomorrow, but that I am a time traveler who can control the information of tomorrow. There is a huge difference between these two points. I think The fourth is about the kindness of the protagonist. How should I put it? I feel that most readers of the post-apocalyptic genre now accept darker protagonists. Although kindness is not a problem, but if the author's writing skills are not very, very good, there may be a certain improvement in performance if he properly caters to the readers Fifth, actually, this is not a big point, just a second supplement. After the draft, three whites were given, but the protagonist didn't even look at it, which made the protagonist not cautious enough, like a big smart guy. It would be much better to simply look at the talents that are useless These are my personal opinions, and it is normal to have biases. I hope it can be of some help to the author I hope the author's works will get better and better.

The book is finished at chapter 26, so you don't need to read the rest Although the first 26 chapters contain the protagonist's worrying IQ and the tendency to lick a girl for no reason when he sees one, it can still be considered a novel. Chapter 27 has changed. Even if you get home at 11 o'clock, you will have at least tens of thousands of simulations by 9 o'clock in the morning, and you will go to sleep directly. Let's not mention that the big guys above will help you go home. The key is that you sleep after you get home and sleep until the end of the world. Moreover, it was written before that you can sleep in the simulation. You are really the author. The open ending of 26 chapters is better than what you write later.

I wanted to laugh when I saw the introduction. A few years ago, the protagonist learned a lesson from a certain Han before he broke out, and he still wanted to inform Harmony.

Hello, book friends, I am the author Qidou. Thank you all for your support and suggestions for this book. I know that my writing is not very good, I just want to write something that I want to write and find it fun. I don't have any illusions about my grades or anything like that. I feel that just being able to sign on as a lv1 author is already a very good start. I hope I can write better and better in the future. Book friends can pay more attention to it. I will keep writing. Thank you.

Personally, I think the biggest poisonous point is that you don't push all the BOSS in the city when you have unlimited times. At least you have to be invincible in the city first before going to struggle outside the city. Moreover, you know that there is a BOSD on the viaduct, but you don't go to bed to officially start the plot first, so you can't watch it after seeing the plot officially start.

The plot and the character of the protagonist are both good and to my liking, but the IQ of the protagonist is really discouraging. It feels like we are not looking at a person, but an orangutan. It can do very well in many places. For example, I said before that I can sleep in the simulation, and I still slept for more than two hours. However, at night I slept directly until 8:59 in the morning, which directly wasted almost more than ten hours of simulation time, and just to watch They just used the once-a-week simulation opportunity to see if they could absorb the red core. This simulation was forgotten. Once they could digest it, it was over immediately without collecting information. I was really speechless. I can only say that everything else is fine. There are some small bugs, such as the country is about to end and the protagonist does not always let the protagonist simulate this. We can make up for it by ourselves, but if the protagonist's IQ does not improve, no one will watch it! This is more to my liking, and I can't stand its intelligence! I hope the author will improve in the future, at least not just for the sake of watching and listening, getting very happy after getting some news, and then exiting the simulation! Come on!

The protagonist's IQ is worse than that of a pig I was persuaded to quit.

Well written, don't write again next time

Holy Mother + brainless follow-up is poisonous

It's a bit poisonous in itself, but Chapter 52 is even more poisonous! Knowing that the protagonist has the ability to travel into the future, most people wouldn't want to offend him, would they? If you want to kill the protagonist, you must at least have a dragnet under your command, and you must have a way to fail and die together before you dare to do it, right? The villain has a serious brain disease, so he has no brains to send so many people to catch the protagonist, and his actions were leaked! It's so poisonous!

Why do you have to find that Zhou Lan? Don't understand

I can say that the biggest dissuasion point of this book is the protagonist's IQ. As long as this is improved, there will be more readers in the future (●—●)

This book is pretty good so far, but I don't know if it will be cut off halfway or if it will be a group? I want to be a veteran

The protagonist's IQ is a bit touching, and when an ordinary person doesn't have much time to prepare, the best weapon in this situation is a fire axe, which does great damage at mid-range and has the ability to break goals, and is available in most communities. Why would you think of buying a baseball bat? ? ?

This introduction is bad, I don't even know what you wrote, how can I click to read it?

This introduction is okay, the author is also very naughty

This kind of neurotic writing is rare. I guess I wanted to write a funny flow but failed to write it well. It looks neurotic.

Good introduction

The synopsis looks very similar to that of Apocalypse Simulator. It seems to be called this, so it's almost the same. Do all novels these days share the same outline?

Why don't you write it down? Come on, I gave you the monthly ticket

It looks pretty good, Ollie.

Monthly tickets and recommendation tickets have been given, please write more