Duel Day at Hogwarts

If you believe that unconditional attachment to the strong is correct, and you don't mind using various reasons to cover up your admiration for bandit logic again and again, then start by deceiving yourself and form a disguise that should not be promoted even in your daily life, and you can allow your aesthetic ideas to be homogeneous. Congratulations, you have found a story that suits you.

The title and text don't match, and even if you have a golden finger, you can't use it. There is a duel system. In the early stage, the protagonist only needs to specialize in a few spells, buy some good magic equipment, find people to duel with to constantly make up for his shortcomings (you don't need to learn potion alchemy yourself), and then rely on omnipotence (realizing potion alchemy) to defeat other people's specializations. Cycle specialization-omnipotence-specialization, constantly raising the upper limit, and can easily conquer the entire Snake Yard. Voldemort, a hybrid, can be praised by the Snake Yard, isn't it because he is strong enough? Is the protagonist stronger and more versatile than Lord Voldemort of his age, or is he a pureblood, senior investment protagonist? Is it worthy? It's just for the protagonist to be a dog. 🤔 After clearing the Snake Yard, there are also the dark wizards of Knockturn Alley and college professors. Even if some people, such as Dumbledore, Nico Meller, etc., Cannot directly do it, they can take the exam. What about duels in games like wizard chess and Quidditch? , You don't have too much experience, why are you following Harry shamelessly? In this process, the protagonist can even conquer all wizards without killing anyone, use his own ideas to unify the magic world and build a magic civilization. Not convinced? Zhuge Liang captured Meng Huo seven times to learn about it, and repeatedly tried to maximize his profits. Voldemort defeated dozens of Aurors at once, carried out terrorist actions, and was feared and praised by others. How can I say that the protagonist defeated the entire wizarding world by himself? Opening up the layout, with this golden finger, the lower limit of the protagonist's curse is Dumbledore, potion Snape, and alchemist Nico Mele. The protagonist should be worshiped by all wizards like the God of War Artho in Game of Life. Pure-blood wizards will think that the protagonist is the ultimate pure-blood and worship him as a god. The half-blood wizard will also be regarded as a legend by the protagonist, surpassing Merlin's existence.

It's quite interesting and well written. The entry points are a bit cliche, but I can tell that there is something of my own in it. There is not too much copying. Unfortunately, it lacks the flavor of HP.

The author's problem is very obvious, that is, the title and introduction are too misleading and cannot really attract the same type of readers. But the author's imagination and writing style are on the higher side, and there are no poisonous points so far.

Let me give you a suggestion, author, do you not understand what an introduction is? The readers you selected by writing this introduction are not readers who suit the taste of your book. To be honest, after reading your introduction, I had already crossed it out, but when I scrolled down, there was no HP at all. I came back and took a look. After reading it, I found that it is really good. The core selling points of your book include: 1. Those die-hard fans of HP, those readers who deeply like the original characters of HP, rather than the second and third settings, will love it very much. 2. Only readers who like the novel will like it without being intellectually inclined and are not interested in relaxation and joy. 3. Those who like dark style will like it. As for your book introduction, don't you think it's just mindless fun? Readers who clicked in to read "Happiness" don't want to leave after reading it. Readers who want to read a book like yours won't click in at all after reading the introduction. There is definitely something wrong with your introduction, and the problem is huge.

A highly poisonous, brainless villain, with a forced character change, Malfoy dared to challenge Dumbledore, and even held a board meeting to change the principal. Can his brain be changed?

It feels like the author is not familiar with Harry Potter at all or does not agree with it. He has really changed it beyond recognition. It is a complete copy of the original work and nonsense. Some places are very toxic. For example, after one month of the first grade, he made more than 20 bottles of potions per week. For this reason, he only read half of the books recommended by Snape. I made a compound potion in just a few days within two months of school, and used a notebook from my grandfather to successfully cast a curse to kill people. Even Dumbledore couldn't see any traces of magic. With this curse, I feel that black magic is no less than that of Voldemort, and some places have very different styles, such as the hands of the author's grandfather at the beginning. It holds three whirlpools, and three items are wrapped in the three whirlpools. This is obviously a game-style thing. Also, the author seems to love sportswear and sneakers, and he blindly pursues them. Sportswear and sneakers are obviously only needed for long-term and large-scale exercise. For daily simple sports, except for high heels, There is no difference between any other clothing and sportswear and sneakers, not to mention that the sportswear purchased is standard and the school uniform is tailor-made, so it is not as useful as the school uniform. The protagonist wore sportswear and sneakers twice before, once for a pure-blood duel. At this time, even if he does not wear more formal clothes, he must at least be a wizard robe, right? Wearing Muggle sportswear to a pure-blood duel, the people around me thought it was very elegant. There was also the time when Harry and the others were being followed in the Forbidden Forest. I was really not afraid of being recognized, so I went there wearing sportswear with a completely different style.

After reading Chapter 20, the author has magically changed the magical world. Maybe it's because the original welding skills were unpopular. I think this book is good. There are definitely flaws, but you can take a look at it. Food and grass. It's just that the comment area is a bit messy, with a group of people commenting from the perspective of a sober God.

The protagonist wants to go to Hong Kong and join the entertainment industry. Is that interesting? Don't you have something to pursue? Like digging deep into magic to make yourself immortal? He keeps mentioning that he will go to Hong Kong in the future. Does the protagonist want to be the master of three thousand women and fly to heaven in the daytime?

Since it's a duel system, why doesn't the protagonist practice magic spells? Don't hone combat experience? I have spent a lot of time studying potions, and now I have to study alchemy. When it comes to a duel, I know how to raise my fists and charge forward. What kind of wizard are you writing about? Moreover, if you want to deliberately suppress the protagonist, why did you give it to the system in the first place?

What kind of golden crucible is there at the age of 11? It is equivalent to publishing an article in SCI in the first grade of junior high school in our country. It is really a super-prodigy level, but not a prodigy level. Did you publish an article in the first grade of junior high school? Even if you are the protagonist, if you step back ten thousand steps and say that soul travel has brains, it will be too awesome. You can't stand it until the end of the first grade. You deliberately create contradictions and trigger conflict points. It is very embarrassing to write like this. But the system is okay, the rest is hilarious 🙂

Let me clear the air. There are a lot of Chinese terms such as "obliterate", "son of a squib", "means", etc. In this article. Because I have read this book before and clicked it again, I have forgotten other similar terms. I have good reason to suspect that the author used to like to read ancient fantasy novels about immortality, or wrote one himself, otherwise why would it be so offensive?

He killed someone in the first grade, and Brace found out about it. We haven't known each other for a year, and we haven't experienced anything. Brace isn't afraid of the protagonist, and the protagonist isn't afraid of Brace. Is this a beaver?

Duel Malfoy to learn aristocratic etiquette? Happy, can he do it himself?

First of all, the overall evaluation: It is "The Fighting Sphere" in the guise of Harry Potter Poison point one: The author used his shallow mental memory to create a "Golden Crucible" journal out of thin air without thinking. The academic journal in the potions industry in the original book is called "Practical Potion Master", and the highest paper designed in it is The award is called the Golden Crucible Award. You directly create a Golden Crucible journal. It is really disgusting to read it over and over again. These things are in the Harry Potter Encyclopedia and Pottermore. You can find them by just searching. Fan fiction is not impossible to create, but the most annoying thing is to tamper with the original setting! Poison Point 2: The entire dialogue is in the style of Chinese waste-chai Liushuang and Dragon King novels. Do you know why Harry Potter is a classic of wizarding literature? It lies in its unique translation accent. The protagonist is rubbing his nose for a while, and chatting awkwardly with friends for a while. Are you the British version of Xiao Yan? 😅 Poison point 3: The strength increases too quickly and the rhythm collapses! The first-year protagonist copied the Iron Armor Curse from his second-year co-con. In the original work, only the fourth and fifth graders were eligible to learn the Iron Armor Curse. In the OWLs exam, it only appeared as a test question on the theory of spells. It is also a must-have spell for Aurors. If you want to say that the protagonist is extremely talented and learned it by himself, I won't say anything. You can think of a second-year guy like you and he can use it. Isn't that funny? What comes next is even more outrageous. The protagonist publishes a paper in the top journal in the potion industry in the first grade. This is like an elementary school student publishing a SCI paper or a high school student winning a Nobel Prize. Do you know what academic fraud is? No matter how talented you are, it takes time to accumulate knowledge and you treat others as fools? Poison Point 4: The plot design is a modified version of Battle Against the Sky, especially between the protagonist and Gavin. Don't be too awkward. Why don't you like to alienate and deliberately punish the protagonist? You are still thinking with your Chinese thinking. Is it awkward? It would be disgusting for the whole loser to return to the family. You thought it was a very scheming game. You thought Dumbledore was dead the whole time. Do you know what the White Devil is? Even without Legilimency, you can easily know what you are doing. How could you be so confident and start violence on campus? Can you survive for 3 seconds after traveling through time?

Poison Point 1: Young Malfoy was bullied and the older Malfoy came to threaten the principal. The protagonist used a curse to kill a pure-blood who felt that he contradicted Snape in the school. It was no big deal. Poison Point 2: The protagonist's grandfather gave him a notebook, which was so damned that it could be said to be an enlightenment textbook. The principal was actually helpless against the curse in it. Just like the principal of Tsinghua University cannot understand the textbooks for county-level kindergarten classes. Poison Point 3 The Three Deathly Hallows Invisibility Cloak is said to have the ability to evade death. The TM protagonist's pocket watch can be immune to Avatar once in 7 days, which means dancing a disco in front of death once in 7 days. The original version was written in 7 books. Only Harry survived being hit by Avatar, and was raped by the author in just a few words. Among the people who were hit by Avatar in the original book, Harry was the only one who needed to confirm whether he was dead. Even the principal was not qualified to do so, so even the principal was not qualified to have this pocket watch, and Voldemort was not qualified to know. Poison Point 4 No matter which pocket watch is NB, the protagonist still chose a kindergarten class tutorial among the three choices at the beginning. Some people are still saying that this is knowledge, but knowledge is nonsense.

One thing is, what does it mean that flying is not suitable for him and he doesn't want to learn it anymore? Never fly again in this life? A wizard doesn't learn to fly? What kind of brain is this? Normal person?

It's a bit confusing for the protagonist to commit murder in the first grade. Aren't you afraid that they will investigate the person who recently had a conflict with the deceased? The protagonist is using his own magic wand. Is he not afraid of the flashback spell or the time funnel?

I didn't even watch it at first, but a group of fans chased me and started criticizing me. Why, is there a fan circle here? I just asked a question, why, this is not allowed? One after another, if you ask, you will be a fan, if you ask, you will be a fan

While saying that she is not Harry's nanny every time, I deliberately pretend to be indifferent every day, and then go to Harry's dungeon and boss when needed. It feels quite strange.

The main character, Goldfinger, obtains magic spells through a duel. Why do you keep writing about other things? It's about magic potions and alchemy. Are you such an awesome student? All the other potion masters who have been there for decades are all fools.

If the heroine is not Furong at this point... Then I can only say emmmmm I don't really like the warm smell anyway.

There are several points in this fanfic that I cannot accept. One is that the protagonist enters Slytherin and is ostracized because of his bloodline. The other is the vague memory of the original work (in my opinion, you either need to have a clear memory, or you need to have no understanding of the plot at all).

The male protagonist of the Hogwarts version of the novel Broken Engagement Liulong Aotian My Fate I Can't Help It

I looked at a few carefully, then read a few, and skipped through a few more. How do you evaluate it? The starting setting is too buggy, and the high IQ, high goals, and infinite brawls quickly improve the game. Then the author has to lose his wits. After losing his wits, he can't write anymore. It's a vicious cycle and he has to kneel down to participate in the protagonist role. A crooked-mouthed god of war who lives with his daughter in a doghouse is filled with love and weirdness.

I finished reading it, and it was considered a pseudo-invincible style. There were no knives or plots that forcibly suppressed the combat power and caused a lot of frustration (I have no objection to suppressing the combat power. I hate the kind of people who suppress the combat power and then torture the protagonist. That is really poisonous.) I don't know if the author changed the book later or what. It's all scolding. I think it's okay. The system is only used to transition the plot. I think it's okay. The transition of combat power is also very smooth compared to the plot characters in this book. And it's not just three little nannies. It's just that the ending was a bit poorly handled, but as for the last chapter, it doesn't affect it.

Watched it for the third time! ! ! The second HP fan in my mind. The first one is the one who was favored by Grindelwald. I went to Hogwarts.