Crown of the Old Ones

When I was first dragged into this trap, I was surprised. How could I, a pyramid scheme leader, be involved in a pyramid scheme? However, Comrade Yinping said that "the book review activity has been studied and decided," so I immediately read two... Cough cough cough. (So, in short... The following article is all about standing up and talking without pain. The author's own structure and outline are the first priority. Readers can just pick and choose and read it. Don't take it seriously.) After reading this book, I feel that it is... Quite bland. The writing is average, there is no poisonous point, and there is nothing particularly refreshing (compared to most online articles). It's the type that you can read when you're bored, but will get lost if you keep it on a bookshelf. First of all, I praise this gloomy urban setting, which has a strong dark fantasy style. The setting about the Silent Man is very high-end and rigorous. Fear is the power system of this article. It can be seen that the author probably wants to implement the concept of "the only thing we need to fear is fear itself". But now, the setting of "fear" in this article is a bit superficial - "fear" as a source of power currently gives me the feeling that it is not very different from martial arts, magic, fighting gods, fighting emperors, fighting saints, etc. Writing this, I came up with the idea that Grammatical themes are actually difficult to write in online novels. What makes most online readers happy is the traditional "acquire a young man, marry a beautiful woman and reach the peak of life"; while the Kexi world view is the opposite, emphasizing the unknown, terror and human powerlessness. How to balance these two elements - instead of turning the resistance setting into a simple power system that is not essentially different from magic and fighting spirit, or dissuading traditional online readers because the content is too scary and curious - is a difficult problem. Back to what I just said... My experience of "fear" in this book. There are many places in this book that make people feel trembling, such as the protagonist being caught by countless hands and unable to escape, and the policewoman being followed home from get off work. But as a book with fear throughout, I personally think this is not enough (I think I am quite brave in this regard... I was scared to give up the book after reading House of Horrors before) This book has been distributed a lot so far, and many of the characters are the silent characters and the men in black next to the protagonist. Life, separation and death are the most frightening plots and arouse emotional resonance among readers, but I... Never left a deep impression... When I read it, my thoughts were "ah, this is death" and "ah, another one dies, wouldn't the mortality rate be too high?"_(:з∠)_ Then here comes the point... I personally think that the character description in this book is not deep enough. ——Uh, okay, that's a bit too harsh. After all, it's only 140,000 words now, so I can't get into it even if I want to. This book is obviously a work where the plot comes first and the characters are used to enhance the plot. 140,000 Words is basically a very compact and waterless backbone of the plot. During the period, the writing is rigorous, there are no bugs, and one link after another is closely connected. This is very worthy of recognition. But maybe the problem is that the plot is too compact, as if it only has solid bones but lacks flesh and blood... There was a speech in the middle that mentioned that some plots related to the second grade boy that had nothing to do with the main story were cut off. In fact, I really want to watch this... Well, I personally don't just want to see what the protagonist does and what he does, I also want to understand what kind of person the protagonist is and what kind of people his comrades are, and these are often reflected in bits and pieces of life that have little to do with the plot. Compare with the online novel "Mysterious " which also has grammatical elements. When "Mysterious " was 140,000 words long, the protagonist had just received his first supernatural-related mission (probably around Chapter 44). Before that, in addition to the main plot, he also spent a lot of words cooking, calculating money, renting a house, buying clothes... Disclaimer! ! I definitely don't want Wang Qing to spend 140,000 words on cooking, calculating money, renting a house and buying clothes! ! ! After all, the platinum author has the confidence to start slowly and take the heat (and his beginning is really slow when looking at the entire site). It is better for young authors to have a faster pace and catch the readers' attention as soon as possible. I just want to show that... You don't have to be so anxious to catch up on the plot. Now that you have the skeleton, the flesh and blood can be fleshed out a little bit. If there were more descriptions of the couple in the latest bento, it would make me more sympathetic. Now they make me... Unimpressed. Well, what else should I say? Let me think about it... Also, looking at the present... The protagonist's time travel, doesn't it make any sense? What you are wearing is the same as not wearing anything 😂 I personally think that the greatest significance of "time travel" in most online novels is: 1. Give readers an easy-to-insert perspective of the youth of the 21st century earth to explore various fantasy worlds (if the mainstream views of the indigenous people in these worlds are different from those of the 21st-century earth, then such a substitution perspective is very useful) 2. Give the protagonist some modern knowledge or concepts, and these knowledge concepts are difficult for native people to access ( This is a very useful golden finger when traveling to the world before electrification for farming) But this article feels that these two points are not needed... The early plot can basically be seamlessly changed to "a local young man participated in the evil harmony cult activities, inexplicably obtained a golden finger and fell into a coma. After waking up, he lost his memory but came into contact with the mysterious supernatural world, and used the golden finger to become a silent man" ← Anyway, explaining the reason is not more difficult than explaining time and space travel. I have talked so much, I should have enough words... I would like to reiterate that the above is my irresponsible personal opinion. It is just a matter of standing and talking without pain. Don't go into details... Anyway, I have never written a novel...

Don't write too grievously. The government has imprisoned you twice. It's best for the protagonist to be evil and decisive in killing.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

The author is so poisonous that he never finished any of his books.