The Wizard Who Comes to American Comics

The first part was actually okay, but when it came to the fight, I was a bit speechless😓It took me a long time to talk about something that could be solved with just one portal. I don't know if it was water on purpose or something. The mirror space is not open either.

The writing so far is good. I hope the author can write more details about each major event and introduce the characters. Also, regarding the strength of the protagonist, it is best to make a clearer positioning or comparison. Also, can he be allowed to leave the earth during the transitional period of some major events? Nine realms. There is much that has not been introduced and more stories could be developed. As for the melee combat ability, although he is a magician, in Marvel, he still hopes to have stronger melee combat ability.

After reading about a hundred chapters, I can't stand it anymore. Just now I was fighting with Obadiah, and it didn't take long for me to torture Loki and kill Lao Fei. After a few chapters, I easily cut off a few fingers of Iron Man's old enemy the Mandarin. In this way, I can completely torture the Purple Potato Demon in just a few chapters...

To be honest, the content of this book is okay, but the author's writing style and expressions are a bit embarrassing. I hope the author's writing ability and literary level will improve to bring better works to book lovers.

I don't know why, but I have to write about mutants, aren't aliens enough? Moreover, aliens also have genes from the Celestials. What good are mutants and for what power? ? Don't you want to gain magical power? I feel that mutants are redundant, and there is really nothing to write about in the mutant universe. With your writing skills, writing about mutants is better than not writing at all. It is obviously a combination of the Marvel and Harry Potter systems. You have to bring in mutants. The mutant universe is also very big. You might as well not write about only part of it. Please explain Marvel clearly first, okay?

Don't teach magic to others!

If you want to write something different, then a self-written plot is indispensable. Due to the mage attributes of the protagonist of this book, I am going to look for Marvel magic characters from comics to integrate into it, and write some self-written plots, or adapted plots from comics. I wonder if you have any thoughts, ideas, opinions and suggestions. Please tell me below, thank you.

Can we see a villain in the main character? There are really too many American comics that are superheroes.

Personally, I feel that Marvel's wizards and Harry Potter's wizards are both weak! They are all powerful when blown up! It feels like every official wizard in the wizarding world is stronger than them! Their strength lies in their weird useless spells. There are only a few powerful ones, their rank is not obvious, and even the weak can kill the strong! In particular, Marvel Mages are so good at creating a mirror space, and it's so funny to trap people inside if they can't defeat them! He doesn't even have a fireball or a pyrotechnic, so he still deserves to be called a mage?

Isn't this HP's magic? A transformation spell like Iron Overlord can solve it! Just turn the mecha into paper! Or is it that the author is deliberately trying to be clever! There is no need for Shuhubao to spray me! Get out of here first

It's so funny when I look at the first few pictures, how to use the simplest levitating spell and still recite the incantation. You traveled through time in the first grade, right? I can't cast spells without a wand. You have to get a magic wand. Completely unable to grasp the rhythm. It slipped away and I couldn't stand it at all.

A useless villain wrote nearly 80 chapters without dying, and escaped three times in a row? Haha, you "vaguely feel that something is wrong" at the critical moment, and then you forcefully subdue your wits and pretend to be smart and get slapped in the face and then "it seems that I have slacked off", I can go to nm, I can see it, the author wants the readers to take the role of the protagonist and then be disgusted

This battle is really dragging on. It's really uncomfortable to watch this kind of turn-based game where you obviously have the means to win but you have to do it bit by bit. Playing two rounds in each chapter every day is very unfriendly to the readers who follow the update. You must know that the popularity is slowly lost in this way.

I think the protagonist should make the Infinity Stones into magic tools, not like the Eye of Agamotto, but similar to those in wizard novels. The author can improve the protagonist's alchemy ability. As a magician, what's wrong with maximizing the ability? For example, the strongest wand. Take the heart of the world tree as the body of the staff. 24 runes are drawn on the whole body to give it "omnipotent" ability. The 24 runes are connected with quark-level magic pattern drawing technology to further increase its ability. If you choose dragon heartstrings, there seems to be nothing better, unless the author creates a new plot to bring out Nidhogg's level. But in this case, the wand will be a black wand, which will lead to another material to achieve a balance. I personally recommend the British Red Dragon. I remember correctly that Marvel UK also has a plot, which can be magically modified. If you want to introduce Eastern forces but don't dare to go too far, I personally recommend going to Kunlun. I won't write about the country and will only briefly describe Kunlun. Maybe you can master new runes, such as Oracle. Maybe it can also lead to Jianmu. I personally recommend that the author can design a feature for the protagonist. Tony has different models of armor. There is no reason why the protagonist cannot do it. It is recommended that the protagonist carries a wand library with him. Don't you think it is more handsome? In this way, the character of the protagonist will be more fleshed out. As for the protagonist's lack of magic power, I personally suggest that the protagonist open up a new path and combine the new magic systems of Marvel and Harry Potter. Marvel magic generally uses a "big source", which is energy from the outside world, while Harry Potter is its own "small source". Therefore, Harry Potter Blue Boy is normal. This is when new elements can be introduced. For example, using meridians as carriers for demonization can achieve the function of absorbing external energy and transforming it into magic power. Similar to the magic circuit in the moon. Or you can imitate Naruto's sage mode and temporarily integrate the energy of different latitudes with your own magic power, which not only increases the amount of mana but also increases the power of magic. Also, it is also a good method to store and seal unused magic power in case of emergency. In general, the protagonist in the current article is too weak. The main plot is not clear enough, so you can give him an equipment control character.

To be honest, it's really a joke that the purebred Harry Potter's magic comes to Marvel.

The wizards in the Harry Potter world are probably the worst wizards

(; 1_1) I couldn't stand it until I saw Killing the Doctor. It's not that there's anything special about that part, and there are too many bugs in this book. If you want to understand it, you have to seal your IQ, but my IQ really can't be sealed. If you can kill instantly, can't you just use a big move? Are you really going to give it away for free? In the middle of a fight, do you feel comfortable having to say a few nonsense words to expose your weaknesses? ? ? No wonder you were killed in the Harry Potter world in your previous life and didn't learn any lessons? If you want to pretend to be awesome, just pretend to the end. Don't get slapped in the face again in the middle of writing. Do you think you are a supporting character in those pretentious novels? ? ? Wherever you write, a first-person inner monologue suddenly pops up. Can't you look at how other novels deal with this kind of description? The character's personality is really not the slightest bit different from the movie. The connection between the content is really forced, and the things that have not been foreshadowed are directly taken out and written? ? ?

I hate novels where the protagonist takes someone else's body. When the heroine gives birth to a child, is it her ex's or yours? ! You're using your ex's body to fuck your woman, doesn't it feel green? Still green myself. When you look in the mirror, don't you feel horrible if it's not your face in the mirror? ! This book is abandoned!

After testing the poison for more than ten chapters, and looking at the table of contents, I know that the author has poisoned many people. The magician who traveled back in time for many years did nothing. Six years later, when something happened at the beginning of the story, he remembered that it was difficult to make a wand, so he started making it now. When you encounter the first enemy, run over and engage in melee combat, let them run away, and then kill them with magic. Is the protagonist a warrior or a magician? Then a long third-person perspective introduces information about magic materials, but the water is a mess. Reminds me of some sandbirds saying that 1 mile is equal to 1 meter, and 1 sun is equal to 1 hour. 7 Nanometers is equal to 2 meters, everyone is sick, and it is useless for good people to do it without saying anything.

Sure enough, there are hundreds of people, and some people say that such a novel is good to read. Not to mention anything else, the pig's feet are written from a world where Harry Potter and the Marvel world are both novels. Can't you just say that you traveled from the earth? How can a pig's trotter know kung fu and beat two or three little gangsters? Where did you learn it? It can only beat two or three little gangsters. A few more will not be enough. Go ahead, big brother, you are too good at this. . .

I'm really unhappy without vomiting. . . The protagonist's levitation spell can levitate Jessica in motion, so why choke her neck with bare hands? Why not be manipulated by Ziren's words? But didn't you use Occlumency? As a wizard whose power is knowledge, can we use our brains?

Goodbye, heroine Wanda, why not come out with an original heroine, one of Marvel's four major heroes?

I have to miss the X-Men and slip away.

The author forcibly reduces the protagonist's intelligence and abilities. . .

I feel that there are many problems. First, the two worlds are different. Magic potions are very rigorous. A slight deviation can lead to very serious consequences, especially when you are the only one who knows this system of magic. It would be very scary to touch the magic potion in this situation. Could it be that the protagonist is so awesome? Then why did he die at the hands of Voldemort? Also, what if the protagonist is so talented? Then why not learn the secret techniques of the lineage of the Supreme Mage? This idea should be very simple. The arcane mage borrows the magic power of Emperor Weishan to cast spells, and the HP magician uses his own magic power. What about combining the two? Is it possible to get rid of the wand and use hand gestures to cast spells? Borrowing your own magic power to cast spells? HP magic is actually more idealistic. What did Harry Potter do when the magic was rampant? He made himself float in the sky and turned snakes out of glass. Why did he need to use a wand and a spell to do it later? Spells and wands only give you better control. Since you have the means of a mystic to cast spells, why bother getting a wand? If the wand is broken, what's the difference between it and an ordinary person?

. . . It's so watery that I can't stand it anymore. I used a floating spell until I died. JK didn't expect that the spell she made up could be so watery.

When I saw the relationship scene, I knew that I started licking the girl again. What was so good was suddenly arranged for some relationship scene. Will people these days explode if they don't fall in love? I hope those who see no girls and no ambiguity can quit. This is a dog-licking article.

I just want to know how many pictures the protagonist has grown up in

The author took the transformation spell. In Marvel, just mastering the transformation spell seems to be enough. Not to mention invincible, at least it is more effective than those magic potions you make.

I don't understand why people who write about Marvel use Harry Potter. There is no powerful force in it, and it's no different from ordinary people's guns.