Days of Duels at Hogwarts

Let me give you a suggestion, author, do you not understand what an introduction is? The readers you selected by writing this introduction are not readers who suit the taste of your book. To be honest, after reading your introduction, I had already crossed it out, but when I scrolled down, there was no HP at all. I came back and took a look. After reading it, I found that it is really good. The core selling points of your book include: 1. Those die-hard fans of HP, those readers who deeply like the original characters of HP, rather than the second and third settings, will love it very much. 2. Only readers who like the novel will like it without being intellectually inclined and are not interested in relaxation and joy. 3. Those who like dark style will like it. As for your book introduction, don't you think it's just mindless fun? Readers who clicked in to read "Happiness" don't want to leave after reading it. Readers who want to read a book like yours won't click in at all after reading the introduction. There is definitely something wrong with your introduction, and the problem is huge.

A highly poisonous, brainless villain, with a forced character change, Malfoy dared to challenge Dumbledore, and even held a board meeting to change the principal. Can his brain be changed?

It feels like the author is not familiar with Harry Potter at all or does not agree with it. He has really changed it beyond recognition. It is a complete copy of the original work and nonsense. Some places are very toxic. For example, after one month of the first grade, he made more than 20 bottles of potions per week. For this reason, he only read half of the books recommended by Snape. I made a compound potion in just a few days within two months of school, and used a notebook from my grandfather to successfully cast a curse to kill people. Even Dumbledore couldn't see any traces of magic. With this curse, I feel that black magic is no less than that of Voldemort, and some places have very different styles, such as the hands of the author's grandfather at the beginning. It holds three whirlpools, and three items are wrapped in the three whirlpools. This is obviously a game-style thing. Also, the author seems to love sportswear and sneakers, and he blindly pursues them. Sportswear and sneakers are obviously only needed for long-term and large-scale exercise. For daily simple sports, except for high heels, There is no difference between any other clothing and sportswear and sneakers, not to mention that the sportswear purchased is standard and the school uniform is tailor-made, so it is not as useful as the school uniform. The protagonist wore sportswear and sneakers twice before, once for a pure-blood duel. At this time, even if he does not wear more formal clothes, he must at least be a wizard robe, right? Wearing Muggle sportswear to a pure-blood duel, the people around me thought it was very elegant. There was also the time when Harry and the others were being followed in the Forbidden Forest. I was really not afraid of being recognized, so I went there wearing sportswear with a completely different style.

After reading Chapter 20, the author has magically changed the magical world. Maybe it's because the original welding skills were unpopular. I think this book is good. There are definitely flaws, but you can take a look at it. Food and grass. It's just that the comment area is a bit messy, with a group of people commenting from the perspective of a sober God.

Since it's a duel system, why doesn't the protagonist practice magic spells? Don't hone combat experience? I have spent a lot of time studying potions, and now I have to study alchemy. When it comes to a duel, I know how to raise my fists and charge forward. What kind of wizard are you writing about? Moreover, if you want to deliberately suppress the protagonist, why did you give it to the system in the first place?

The protagonist wants to go to Hong Kong and join the entertainment industry. Is that interesting? Don't you have something to pursue? Like digging deep into magic to make yourself immortal? He keeps mentioning that he will go to Hong Kong in the future. Does the protagonist want to be the master of three thousand women and fly to heaven in the daytime?

What kind of golden crucible is there at the age of 11? It is equivalent to publishing an article in SCI in the first grade of junior high school in our country. It is really a super-prodigy level, but not a prodigy level. Did you publish an article in the first grade of junior high school? Even if you are the protagonist, if you step back ten thousand steps and say that soul travel has brains, it will be too awesome. You can't stand it until the end of the first grade. You deliberately create contradictions and trigger conflict points. It is very embarrassing to write like this. But the system is okay, the rest is hilarious 🙂

He killed someone in the first grade, and Brace found out about it. We haven't known each other for a year, and we haven't experienced anything. Brace isn't afraid of the protagonist, and the protagonist isn't afraid of Brace. Is this a beaver?

Let me clear the air. There are a lot of Chinese terms such as "obliterate", "son of a squib", "means", etc. In this article. Because I have read this book before and clicked it again, I have forgotten other similar terms. I have good reason to suspect that the author used to like to read ancient fantasy novels about immortality, or wrote one himself, otherwise why would it be so offensive?

Duel Malfoy to learn aristocratic etiquette? Happy, can he do it himself?