I, the Lord of the End

The content is patchwork, there is no sense of immersion, and there is no sense of the times like Warhammer Throne. It is a bit like the difference between the Northeastern duo and the movie.

To be honest, what you wrote at the beginning is really confusing, and the first few chapters have no motivation to continue reading.

Sigh, sigh, except for the Emperor's book, I can't find any sword-and-sorcery book that I like, and there's no western fantasy book either. It's really a book shortage, a book shortage.

After reading the latest chapter, the Emperor of Stockings is well-deserved The names of the people in this book are so complicated that it makes my head hurt Chinese people cannot remember such complicated gringo names. Please simplify them and try to write them into two words, at most three words. The kind of four or five words without a break in the middle really gives me a very poor reading experience

The beginning of this book is too nonsense, right? How does the protagonist manage to squeeze himself into a couch without help? Is there room inside the sofa chair for a large person? Even if there was, who helped him clean the liner he took out? The protagonist has been fixed into the shape of a sofa chair. He can still eat dry food and drink water, and he does not need to excrete for four days. It can only be said to be incredible. It is better to just let the protagonist use some magic to turn himself into a sofa chair.

The Emperor's sincerity is not enough. He has not even reached the seedling stage yet and is so stretched out in this update. If this can be repaid in the future 🤔🤔🤔

1. I am very happy that Yu Tianzi can stick to the harem story. As expected, the interaction between the male and female protagonists is more attractive to me. 2. The emperor's description of the heroine in this book has been further improved compared to the proof of the Sun King. The detailed description from the neck up to the toes proves that the emperor can go to some strange websites to try the water. 3. Regarding the unpopular heroine mentioned by the emperor: the imperial daughter, and the unpopular Theresa mentioned in the previous book. In fact, I personally think it's good to slowly paint this kind of inexperienced girl with your favorite colors bit by bit. If it doesn't work, just use it as a way to enrich the attributes of the heroine. 4. When it comes to zz content, many authors cannot grasp the reason why their works collapse. Carrying out a grand narrative to improve the structure of the work is not a bad thing in itself, but it must be reasonable while making readers think, and try to avoid GC jokes in the feudal era. ps: Since the last book has chased all the fairies in the lake, has the emperor considered adding more extraterrestrial attributes in the next book, like the plump red dragon queen/green dragon queen who lays eggs without pain, the cute Cthulhu sauce that touches the wrist, the mysterious magical conch with a poisonous tongue, etc. Sad wind can be sad.

The previous one was about killing Acha, and this one is about being Acha, right?

The beginning of this book was okay, but I really couldn't stand it at the end 1. It's a joke, it's a joke, it's a joke, it's a joke, it's important and I have to say it three times. The reason why I finally gave up on the book was because the little Japanese high spirit went back to report to the Holy See. I really couldn't stand it anymore, so much so that I couldn't even read this. It even makes me feel sick to my stomach. A large part of the charm of Western fantasy novels comes from the magnificent swords and magic. When it comes to online novels, it means the freshness of foreign countries. If you insist on imposing the hatred of country and family in the East into the novel, this freshness will be destroyed, leaving only boredom. 2. The protagonist's image failed to be created. The author has already said a lot about this aspect, so I won't go into details. However, the creation of other supporting characters also failed, and the first one to bear the brunt is the princess. I don't need to say how hollow this character is. When the author wanted to use the princess' miserable childhood to resonate with readers, I really couldn't sympathize with her at all, and even wanted to laugh a little. There are also some problems with the portrayal of the other two characters in Tianhuiha. Their tool attributes are too strong and their personal personalities are not shown. From the chapters I've read, the eldest sister is the best portrayed, followed by the high priest. I haven't seen the eldest lady in the back, so I don't know what it's like.

This sword priest is very difficult to deal with...

Is there any clue about the emperor's new book? Is there anyone well-informed?

The writing is very messy, I can't understand it, I can't stand it.

I don't like the so-called "beautiful boy" little puppy protagonist.

How can modern times be interesting if I still talk to you every day in another world? ? ? ? ? If you want to write a modern patriotic article, then just do it. Why do you have to go to another world to write it? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

To be honest, I am quite satisfied with this book in all aspects, but it is the "big sister" that I can't deal with at all. . I seemed to have returned to the novel world 10 years ago. It gave me goosebumps all over my body. I was speechless and even wondered if the author had replaced someone when he wrote that character.

It's rare to see a novel that makes the setting sound like nonsense. There's not much to say, it's just boring writing. The writing felt like a farce. I want everything, so I write a little bit of everything, and the result is a bit confusing.

How should I put it? Personally, I feel that the plot with Big Sister is a bit stiff? What do you think?

A bit disappointed, see you in the future. Because you are already a eunuch, it is difficult to guarantee that the next book will not continue. It's a pity that I rarely see the heroines I like very much.

I'm very curious. The protagonist Sid is obviously a time traveler. Judging from the title of the book and the ending of the previous book, the protagonist has most likely inherited Archa's abilities. So the question is, did he know about Warhammer before time travel? Can he recognize it?

He deserves to be a level 5 author, his writing is really good! It's better than that dragon that controls time. That author deletes posts and bans people. I'm so angry that I reward him.

By Chapter 40 or so, I always felt that the protagonist was a green tea man with no skills😅

Is this book a eunuch? No.

You are the only one who writes about Warhammer. Why? Because there are too many Hammer Imps in your book, the setting you wrote is considered to be the official setting, haha, like others who write about Warhammer, they don't have a g

I couldn't sleep the night before yesterday and searched for a long time before I found such a book that suited my taste. I just found out today that the author is Eunuch. Damn it. Western fantasy, with an invincible series setting, the description of the girl's appearance is also very good, just wait for the plot to come to a harem ending, you just run, I don't dare to read your next book, I am afraid that I will get distracted after reading it halfway, so just keep reading (●°u°●)​ "

Emperor, I read Nogizaka's poems online a few days ago, and then I learned about it online, so I fell in love with it. It was also a promotion. As a result, almost all the first-term members have graduated. It's so stupid. If I have a chance, I'll write another Nogizaka novel.

Where is the new book you promised in September?

Does anyone have a follow-up to Nogizaka Poem?

Is there a new group? Send me the group number.