The Days When I Was Working as an Errand in the West Factory

Now the biggest problem for the protagonist in the author's novel is the lack of moral integrity. His character is cowardly and greedy. It was okay to be afraid of death at first, but I lived cautiously and used my brain. Now he looks like a successful villain. It was too easy to gain the status of martial arts, but the diaosi's character has not changed (I have escaped death many times in the past few months, at the end of the dynasty, when political opponents and bosses want your life, you dare to be distracted when meeting the emperor, I vomited (ﾉ ○ Д ○)ﾉ). In other words, the author has not yet written the change in the protagonist's character. I hope the author can make the protagonist mature as soon as possible and clarify his goals in this life.

At first, some people said that the writing was rubbish and I still didn't believe it. Isn't this writing very good? I really didn't expect it. The more I write, the more rubbish it gets. I really can't read it anymore. It's just a waste of gold coins.

The third golden chapter is indeed a bit of a dissuasion. You have filtered out the system, the system, and the remaining systems. . 😅 However, the outrageous belittling of the comments made me rebellious as I read on. Unexpectedly, I became more and more surprised. The protagonist will not lose his opinion just because the person he is facing is Lu Xiaofeng and Li Xunhuan, nor will he deliberately belittle them to appear independent. The relationship is handled very well. The refreshing handling is not too amazing but it is at a normal level. I hope it can be maintained! Come on

After reading more than 20 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. You are in the martial arts world and you have no kung fu. You only know how to kick the crotch. Are you trying to make people read this without thinking? Please quit.

The story is quite exciting, I just hope that the invincibility of the pig's feet in the later stage will not ruin the rhythm. I hope it will be a masterpiece.

I'm really numb. Ever since I got used to reading book reviews, it's hard to find the right book.

A world where force is paramount, chapter 60 or 70. I have been writing the book for more than a month. The protagonist has no plan on how to learn martial arts. In addition to completing the tasks given by the eunuch, he just goes to eat, drink and sleep. I keep writing that I don't feel safe. I've played hard at East and West Stalls, and even at West Factory. According to the way you write it, a pig can be the protagonist. In the world of high martial arts, people's physical data are several times that of an ordinary person like you. You, an ordinary person, can pass the level with just one move! The brothers couldn't stand it, so they retreated first out of respect. They relied solely on the protagonist's halo to pass the level. It was too witty.

Hokusai

It took me a day to finish this book. I thought it was a good book, and the protagonist had some intelligence. Unexpectedly, he started to poison the book shortly after it was released. After the protagonist gained some status, he completely lost his mind for a subordinate who could not be named. He killed gods when gods stood in his way, and Buddha when he stood in the way of Buddha. He bloodbathed Li Yuan, wiped out the money gang, and killed the feudal king. He almost lost his life. Does the author feel that writing this way is very passionate? There is a guy named Pao Zeqing who has been with me for two or three months and has a subordinate that I can't even name. I saw the protagonist killing a prince just for that little minion who didn't even have a name and shouting about brotherhood and brotherhood. I was so embarrassed. The previous protagonist who was cautious and did anything to improve himself suddenly turned into a hot-blooded and stupid young man. Was this written by one person? What a waste of my day👿

If it doesn't collapse, this book can be a god, believe in yourself, slow down and write...😄

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This book is barely readable in the early stages, but poisonous spots, big and small, keep popping up like mushrooms after a rain. Finally, it started from the protagonist learning the lion's roar skill and falling into coma, and it turned into a story about abuse. Not only is Ping Fan in danger, one after another outrageous people start to attack the protagonist. The protagonist appears to be invincible but actually can beat him even if he is an enemy. From the beginning, Jue Wushen has become completely unwatchable. He still upholds the extremely disgusting moral values ​​of being both responsible and upright, and is so poisonous that he almost becomes a god.

The last time I unsubscribed was because I forced the protagonist to lose his wits and strength. You said you were sick, but you didn't say anything to me at all. This recovery becomes more difficult. It's totally boring and meaningless. The protagonist's vaginal leg lifting is already an 8th level skill. It can be used to beat anyone, but no one can beat it. As for whether it takes so much effort to fight these two people? If you really don't believe it, don't write it. There is no need to forcibly increase the difficulty for the protagonist, just be invincible and be done with it.

This book is not very good. If the martial arts writer writes about Jiang Yuyan and then makes Jiang Yuyan very strong based on fatalism, it is basically unreadable. The protagonist is inferior to Jiang Yuyan, and his martial arts skills are inferior to Jiang Yuyan. This alone is very poisonous. If you like Jiang Yuyan so much, and the opportunity must go to her, you can just write her as the protagonist. If there is a supporting character whose martial arts is stronger than the protagonist by chance, the protagonist's drama will not be interesting. Anyway, I don't like the martial arts lead Jiang Yuyan. This character is brainless and strong, kills others without brains, and has no personality charm. He is not an original character, but an original character in the TV series, so this character lacks the core. To write a supporting role of a tool person so strong, all the opportunities are given to her, what is the author trying to do? Arranged like this just by scratching your head?

I feel weird, can you read it before writing a review? When I came in and read the comments, I subconsciously felt that they were not well written. I opened the first two pages and unknowingly saw the latest updates. I think the writing is good and innovative! The protagonist is quite smart. I can't tell how the author will arrange him in the future. I'll wait for the update.

After writing it for a long time, didn't this silly protagonist think about practicing martial arts?

The protagonist becomes more and more mentally retarded the more he writes. I had a brain at first, but then I lost my brain.

Alas, my patience has almost run out. The protagonist has suffered misfortunes all the way, and many of them were brought on by himself. If it weren't for Jiang Yuyan, I would have left long ago... This abusive master is abusive... Forget it, the value of complaining is gone. Author, you can read the data in the background. The data will not lie.

This protagonist is too useless. He wanders around in the world of martial arts without practicing martial arts first. He is so scared when he sees Wei Zhongxian. Then he must not wet his pants when he sees the emperor. When he sees a person like Emperor Qin and Han Wu, will he die on the spot? 🐶

I still don't understand why the skill of lifting the vaginal legs is so powerful? The reaction speed of martial arts practitioners is not as fast as that of ordinary people. How fast can you kick? You want to say that the system is powerful, but you personally killed the system, so why bother. An ordinary person in modern society relies on the halo of the protagonist to break through. To be honest, he has no sense of immersion. Otherwise, don't write about time travel. Write that the protagonist is a person from that world.

Others are quite acceptable, but the latest fake death is really disgusting. Jiang Yuyan has done so much for the protagonist. The protagonist coaxes her to go to Shaolin, thinking that she will be crushed, but she is trapped when she goes up. It's all about Erha and her luck. The subordinates are no longer good, but they are still playing there. Even if they have the ability to break through the siege, they will not come out. Later, the plot of Tianlong was pulled out. One wave after another, what is this? Can't you consider the readers' feelings? After this plot is over, you can do the next one.

After reading this book, those who don't see the system are silent, and those who read the system are also silent.

The character of the protagonist is quite fucked! He looks down on the character of the hero. Even if the hero risks his life to save him, he is not grateful but curses. He has a wrong outlook on life, but he likes to comment on others from the moral high ground! Toxic protagonist, toxic book

It was okay at first, but the more I wrote, the more I degraded to kindergarten intelligence.

It's baffling. After The Forbidden City, the writing style changed drastically, and the author was changed. He forced his wits down. Whether he should kill the baffled Virgin or not, it depends on God's will to praise his name.

It's not unreasonable for this book to be so popular. I've followed the protagonist until he almost died. He still has the same broken mentality and lacks a long memory. The villains are jumping out of the nest one after another, just to fight the protagonist's stupidity.

I've set up a book club group for everyone to come and chat. 704089133

Don't like the integrated world. The sense of dissonance is too strong.

After reading 91% of the book, the level of the book dropped sharply. There were many and confusing characters. The description of the duel with the villain made it look like any new villain could beat the protagonist. Every villain has a 55 chance. 90% Of the time before the protagonist went to the dog. The plot of fighting the villain is similar, both after having an advantage. , The younger brother is in danger, and then he is forced to help, hey, there is no need to write like this in every reply, you can afford it or not, 🤔 and any new villain that comes out can be 55-level with the protagonist. This makes the protagonist look so low. This is more than 90%, why does it feel like there is still 90% behind?

I've read about ten chapters, it's a no brainer, the main character looks like a clown.