Zongwu: I, Long Xiaoyun, Am the Co-Leader of Jianghu

I envy your courage. The logic of writing a book is completely mindless. After a rough reading, the tone is quite smooth. Let me describe this story. Goku, who dreamed of becoming the Pirate King, eventually became Hokage. If I haven't watched One Piece, Dragon Ball, or Naruto, you can write whatever you want. But I have seen it. We have all seen this type of martial arts fan fiction, film and TV series with original plots. Your front foot is useless, your back foot protects you, Uncle Li. Also incredibly brave. The Shaolin master attacks you cripple, even if he is a hypocrite. At most he is a gangster with a bit of moral integrity. But if you kill his brothers and he is unreasonable, he must find someone to vent his anger on. The bottom line of my heart. Even if you write a flower later, you don't need to read the rest at the beginning. Stephen Chow's nonsense can describe you, a pig's foot. The tone is smooth, this thing doesn't look like it was written by a living person, it looks like it was generated by data. No matter how incompetent a new author is, he will not write a story about a person with a disabled front foot and an unmatched back foot. This is a fan, a counter-plot innovation, Long Xiaoyun has no inversion. There is no reason to forgive someone. Don't explain anything else. It's okay to watch for entertainment, but it's a bit difficult to pay for it.

The plot is too drawn out and doesn't really reflect the main character. There are too many plots with supporting characters

🤫Sure enough, you shouldn't have high expectations too early for a new book

Who should I wear? No, if I wear Jackie Chan Xiaoyun, how can I face my mother? Your mother was manipulated by others and has been a coward for half her life. What does a time traveler do? Of course it's a matter of grudges, aren't you causing trouble for others?

The two beasts Long Xiaoyun and Long Xiaotian are the ones who most want to be beaten to death!

How desperate is the author to choose Long Xiaoyun to be a pig's trotters? It's okay if he doesn't hack him to death. It's impossible to substitute this name.

I've read eight chapters, what is this about?

It's true that Wu Jing must be called Long Xiaoyun among Wolf Warriors 🙂

You should still control the comments in the comment section, the writing is actually quite good.

Book recommendation: "The Famous Sword Breaks Frost and Snow"

I don't know what I wrote, it's a mess

Haven't you really read Jin Yong Gu Long's novels?

In a word, the characters are not like the original. Fans are allowed to use their imagination, but I feel that the imagination in this book is completely inconsistent with the original characters.

I want to read the story about Xianer who traveled through time and transformed into Lin Xianer.

What's going on in this comment section? Why are they all scolding? The problem is that I, an old bookworm who has been here since CMFU days, don't think the writing is bad. At least this book is readable. Although it is indeed a bit messy and has many pitfalls, it is innocuous, so... Has the author offended someone?