
I Will Bury the Abyss
我将埋葬深渊
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 15k Words
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Rules Horror
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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5Chapters
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First, I feel that the author pays too much attention to the relationship between the characters. It is clearly about mystery but focuses too much on the characterization of the characters. This is a bit neither good nor bad, neither a mystery nor a romance. (To say it is a romance may not be an accurate description, but it is too expressive of people and emotions) Secondly, I read the character introduction. It is clear that Tang is the protagonist, but most of the words are used to describe another person he saves, which makes people think that Tang is actually a supporting role. If this supporting role had a bigger role, it would be natural for it to be described more. However, the description of the supporting role is a bit too much, and the description of the protagonist can be said to be only a few strokes. There are also many descriptions of the supporting role that "incidentally" describe the "protagonist". 1. There are obvious deficiencies in the depiction of the world view and the sense of immersion in the times. ,,, Of course, I am just sitting around and complaining during the holidays. If what I say has other intentions or a "personal style" as the author himself, then just think of me as a clown, just trying to make you happy! The Chinese New Year is coming soon, by the way, I wish you all a Happy New Year!