Something’s Not Right About This Cultivation World

The contradiction between utopian privilege and fairness is also vividly reflected in the attitude towards transmigrators. If an Earthling transmigrates into the body of an indigenous person, they are considered one of their own, and there is unity and friendship.

I just finished watching "Don't Retire!" I hope you'll work harder on this book, Belly. Don't make me like the one in the last book. I subscribed to the whole thing and I'm still a disciple. It's so embarrassing to tell anyone

A person like Lao Jiang is great to be his friend, disciple, colleague, or even just a stranger under his protection, but don't be his family. Being his family will really trap you in a dead end. In principle, there are no problems. He has a strong sense of responsibility and high moral character, but family always comes second. It's like a dull knife grinding at your heart, which is meaningless.

I dislike Jiang Tao. His insistence is laughable. It's not a matter of patriotism; it's a stubborn, incompetent, and passive attitude. His efforts are meaningless, and his actions have no effect whatsoever. If Wu Kingdom is bad, then change it. Instead, he ridiculously acts as a gatekeeper of the old era. Just remove his identity as a time traveler.

If the early and middle parts of this novel deserve a 90 out of 100, the later parts only get a 70. The early part was excellent, with a good balance of everyday life and urgency, a clear main plot, developing subplots, and a touch of elemental conflict. The villains were also very powerful. However, the introduction of gods and demons later on felt off.

After the Chosen Ones learned of the Chosen Ones' wounds, why didn't anyone try to create more children to bring in more transmigrators? If they didn't want their children to be transmigrated, they could simply not invest any emotions. They could use in-vitro fertilization, find natives to sow their seeds all over the world, and after 16 years, they would become a massive army of transmigrators.

Ahem, let's build a "supporting character" building, complete with the name we want, basic personality traits or catchphrases, and a reasonable cheat code.

The writing is quite good, with no major flaws, but the pacing is a bit slow and there aren't many exciting moments.

I'll give you a number: 10,000 per day, understand?

There seems to be a flaw in the setting: the lifespan of an extraordinary being is 300 years, but the Wu Kingdom has only been established for 200-300 years. Where did the founding emperor and his large group of extraordinary sons go?