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I think this is a rare good book, but the author may be less famous and few people can discover it. However, it is a good book and it should not be buried. All the recommendation votes are cast here. I hope more people can read this book.

To be honest, I haven't written a book review for a long time I think it is worthwhile to write a review for this book This book is an average choice overall. If it performs well in the future, it will probably get good results. First let's talk briefly about the setting. The setting is on the Western and mysterious side. The entire force system is based on Western types such as spell flow, witchcraft flow, physical enhancement flow, summoning flow, etc. The monsters are aberrations, ancient gods, and mysterious side types. Overall, the system is relatively traditional, but there are also some relatively novel settings, such as the design of the world view and the setting of the emotional system, which are quite to my taste. The protagonist, Goldfinger, is a cat girl (change it to . JPG for me quickly) cross it out The setting feels okay, you can see additional descriptions, and then you can obtain abilities by completing some conditions. It is relatively conventional, and it introduces devil fruit elements, some online game elements, monster refresh mechanisms, etc., But the story chapter is not opened and the description is not very detailed. Generally speaking, the look and feel is very good, the writing is excellent, and there are few poisonous points. It is worth reading.

As the author writes, many problems arise, such as the asymmetry of the power system. It is said that the Red Moon Temple does not allow the emergence of strong men above level four in the other three cities. It turns out that he himself can only be considered a relatively powerful being, and others who are more powerful than him include Kim Myung-soo and others. There are losers in the front who will be eliminated by the city's big guys (the chapter about the invasion of the furnace by the Red Moon Temple), and there are no masters above level four behind. As a council member of Zion City, nine people jointly control a city, and they actually have to charge into battle by themselves. It's a big deal. Speaking of pretending to die, there are too many spies in the Red Leaf Temple, and he also lets people he knows come to find him. This is not a typical bastard. Others are holding their own fruits, you are interested but don't care about the results, and you don't pursue them if there are problems. Knowing that the other side has a problem, he still kills all the witnesses and gives the other side a chance to take action. This is a watt brain.

I started reading novels in the first grade of junior high school, and it has been more than ten years now, starting with the Three Young Masters of the Tang family, then Douluo, Dragon Clan, Three-Body Problem, First Sequence, Dafeng Watcher, Nomenclature of the Night, and now Guangming (and another book of Light Barrier). I think the books I recommended above all have some common characteristics. Except for the later ones, the previous ones are all popular 1. The world view is novel and relatively grand. I won't talk about Guangming's current three systems, which have not been fully written yet 2. Plot issues. There is no behavior that forcibly reduces the villain's intelligence, especially the time when Xu Le suffered a loss in the lighthouse. I think this is normal. Currently, the villain's IQ is not reduced in Night's Nomenclature, but I feel that the protagonist's aura is too much now. So it doesn't feel real when you look at it 3. The system is more rigorous. Of course, this rigor is the combat power system set before and after. There will be no conflict with growth and so on, so people can clearly feel the growth of the protagonist. And good writing, like Guangming, has expectations for the unknown, so the first sequence, like the nomenclature of night, becomes boring after reading it Finally, as proof, this book will definitely be a hit.

It's a very interesting book, and the world view is very attractive. I've read half of it, and overall I'm satisfied with it so far. But the shortcomings are also obvious. I feel that the combat power is a bit vague. The protagonist's golden finger has a lot of background and is very useful, but the help or improvement of the combat power is very idealistic. There are often situations where the protagonist and a group of friends of the same level take the initiative to leapfrog and kill higher-level warlocks and win them at a small cost. Even if the opponent has an official identity, he does not hesitate. From the beginning to the end, he has never overturned and has never been held accountable. The villain's high-level power or rights holder will never appear when the protagonist narrowly wins. If you care about logic, this loose sense of violation will still affect your reading experience.

I was drawn in by the introduction, and then I read it all the way through. What can I say about the book? It was wonderful before chapter 500, but after chapter 500 it became a mess, and it was considered unfinished.

Among the books I am currently following, Guangming is my favorite. The characters, settings, and detailed descriptions are all very good, and the sense of immersion is also strong. However, it lacks a climax of the plot. If there is a breakthrough in the design of the climax and the excitement of the people, it will surely become a god.

After reading it, first of all, I would like to thank the author for showing us a complete and interesting story. Secondly, some suggestions: the later period was a bit empty, and there was always a tense atmosphere. However, this tension was caused by the constant rush to make progress, and it was difficult to mobilize readers to empathize. I think the reasons for this phenomenon may be: 1. There are too many levels in the training system. People tend to pursue "nine is the ultimate number", but in fact there are too many levels. The result is nothing more than repeating low-level plots through "Latter-day Saints are as numerous as dogs", or there is no plot to write, which makes the upgrade seem to be rushed and unfinished. I think there are several main solutions: change maps in time, each big map has 5 to 6 levels, and there is no need to wait until the protagonist reaches full level before changing; change the genre, upgrade to the slap-in-the-face style in the early stage, and the invincible style in the later stage. 2. The later plot is boring. Often in the later stages, the main conflict (world crisis) breaks out, and the plot atmosphere becomes tense. If the tension lasts too long, it will appear stiff and hollow. There must be relaxation, such as arranging several more story lines, emotional lines, grade lines, and crisis lines. In the final ending, conflicts will erupt in waves, outbreak-resolution-eruption-resolution-eruption-resolution..., The contradictions gradually become more serious, the frequency of transitions gradually accelerates, and finally reaches a climax. 3. The characters in the early stage no longer appear in the later stage, causing shortcomings. 4. Supplement 2. There is a lack of description and characterization, and the protagonist is exhausted. For example, in the description of the protagonist, it is not clear what the protagonist is thinking. Even if it is necessary to express that the protagonist is not clear about his own thoughts, the protagonist's lack of clarity must be clearly expressed. The description of the villains is also lacking, such as Gang Shi, who could not arrange so many villains.

After reading dozens of chapters, I suddenly wanted to say something... I feel that the author's writing skills are quite good! At least the story is told well. I've probably read a few other books too! But I haven't seen much! I feel like it's always a little bit worse, which means it's pretty good but not a big deal. If it can be completed, the author will be a great person! Like those who shout that there is no heroine all day long, those who pretend to slap the face, the monk who writes a one-man show... Ah, I am too lazy to say it. But this author is different. It can be seen that he is trying to write some supporting roles, but he does not write them so thoroughly. He always touches the surface and is almost meaningless. Take the recently quarreled Dou Po Cang Qiong for example. Look at Huo Huo. In his early days, he was Ya Fei, Xiao Yu, Xun Er, Nalan Yan Ran, and there were conflicts between his own family and the Oba family. In the middle period, Yun Yun, Little Doctor Fairy, Hai Bodong... Then the Queen Zhongzhou in the later period was too long and I don't remember it clearly. Each of his stories will have some particularly outstanding supporting characters who act as wingmen or rivals beside the protagonist, saving the story from being as boring as a one-man show... In this book and Doomsday Circle, the author wrote some supporting characters but did not shape them in depth. If L Circle only has two gay brothers! Well, this one finally got a supporting actress, Wang Man, but her role was pitiful. The image created by such few subdivisions is much better than other supporting roles. Although people have always been involved in emotional teasing, it is unavoidable. But I still have to say that no matter whether it is good or not, it is better than nothing. What a story! ? The story is about different things happening to different people. I follow a bunch of sidekicks all day long, what story do I want to write? ? The upper limit was said to be locked from the beginning! So what I don't like is the one-woman show without a female protagonist! Unfortunately, Ya refused, leaving no suspense! There is only one cat under me! I am back to performing a one-man show with a cast of supporting actors. It's a pity... That is to say, each section of the story has one or two outstanding supporting characters by his side, so he doesn't have to accompany the protagonist through the whole journey to the finale. He can just change after a section! When we go back and meet again, it gives people a feeling that despite the vicissitudes of the world, old friends remain the same! The feelings came out all at once. I think if the author puts some effort into this aspect, his works will be better.

The ending is quite hasty, and it is understandable that there is a lot of foreshadowing in the mid-term, and it is understandable to hurry up in the later stage. In comparison, the early stage seems very monotonous. Normally improving the strength and opening up the world view, it seems that the combat power is slightly collapsed in the later stage. However, these are minor problems. At least the increase in combat power is well-founded and there is no unreasonable increase in combat power. But to be honest, the ending is really difficult to accept. Sacrifices are inevitable when an era changes. I can accept Bai Ye and Chi Xiao's sacrifice for their friends for the new era, but there are basically not many things about the new era, which makes it difficult for me to accept this result. I feel that the story is not completely over yet, and it does not necessarily have to be a he. I still prefer stories that are slightly sad and depressing. Ding Ke's matter has not been resolved, the holes left by the puppets and Rose have not been filled, and the development of human society has not been written. It feels like Xu Le is like a passerby, which is quite uncomfortable. I hope there will be some side stories later to satisfy the reader and make the readers feel refreshed.

The author goes into the process of how people in Zion fought against the black tide and what they did when facing the black tide. Better shape the Black Tide and Zion. Make the story richer.

It's good to read It's because of this book that I downloaded it I also paid for membership and money

The book is quite nice, it is not a mindless read, you can keep it and give it a try. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

All the recommendation votes are given to you, come on

Author update soon! ! !

Not bad, I feel it was well written.

If you could only choose three, which three would you choose? 1. Increase your IQ to the peak of human beings 2. Have a chance to travel through time 3: You can be invisible, walk through walls, burrow under the ground, and fly at will. 4. Double pass through door. 5. No disease, no disaster + a hundred years of internal strength 6. Ever-changing. 7. Listen to the sound of all things 8. Keep your memory and choose reincarnation 9. God-level hacking technology + Cui Mianshu 10. World modulation 11. Preliminary Know the future 12. Danger perception + mind reading 13. Devouring evolution .14. Infinite clones 15: Reply to 666 and like, you can get all of the above.

This introduction is interesting. I paid 2 coins for the review. I have to say that I am definitely committed to this book. As long as it is not brainless, I also like Deep Blue. After all, it is all earned through my own efforts. Add some points, Deep Blue, let me see my own limits. 😇😇😇

When I was a child, I ate 800 packs of Dove. My mother threw me off the 16th floor. I laughed to death. I kept running smoothly all the way to the end and could not die at all [😏] When I was a child, I ate a hundred boxes of Snickers. My mother locked me in the basement for two years. I laughed to death. I was not hungry at all. [😏] When I was a child, I secretly drank my father's Red Bull and was beaten by my father. I am still running after chasing for three days and three nights. I am laughing to death. My energy is beyond your imagination [😏] When I was a child, I secretly ate 100 Want Want crushed ice. My mother punished me to stand in the sun. I laughed to death. The sun froze and melted [😏] When I was a child, it was so legendary that I had no pocket money for a year. My mother punished me to have no pocket money for a year. It was so funny that I didn't have any pocket money. I was not short of money [😏] When I was a kid, I secretly drank 500 bottles of Pulse. My dad punished me by depriving me of sleep for three years. After drinking 100 bottles of paraquat, my mother worried that the grass on the grave would grow taller than a person after her death. She laughed to death because there was no grass growing for hundreds of miles [😏] When I was a kid, I secretly watched Boruto in the middle of the night. My dad was so angry that he burned Boruto as firewood. He laughed to death because it didn't burn at all [😏] After seeing my comment, he laughed to death. He couldn't stop laughing at all "😏"

I have been reading this book for a while, and then it died. I found that I didn't want to read it at all. It got worse as I went to the back. The first part is probably the best.

The forcible reduction of intelligence in the early stage was very speechless. The part about rescuing people clearly depicts a protagonist who is intelligent, ruthless and doesn't say much. Going to the ancient polyphonic tree and joining the Night Watch are just like sand sculptures. All the details are exposed. I can't change the two states at all. I can't understand.

It feels quite amazing at the beginning. When I read more than 200 chapters, I thought it was okay. By the time I reached the 300th chapter, I couldn't stand it anymore. Looking back at the whole book, I felt like it was in Naruto Shippuden, where the chakra mother distributes power and energy to her son. Son, mother, let's continue to share the power. The later stage is a drama where the mother tries to get her power back or is sealed by the unfilial son. The ancient Yinduo mother tree made several sons to protect him, and then the children felt that it was not enough and wanted to share the power. Then the mother tree wanted to train a man to kill the children and get back the power. The protagonist Erwuzi wanted to make a new mother tree and kill the old mother tree. It is a well-known story: Make your own way.

Speaking of which, my favorite is "weird is not evil", because I have always been an opponent of "people who are not of my race must have different minds". So in my opinion, whether it is weird or evil, it is not necessarily bad. If the author has no other ideas, he can also try to portray some "good weird and evil gods"

The first volume is invincible, with a world view that unfolds step by step, the power entanglement behind the tower, the conspiracy of the people behind the scenes, and various novel settings, it is definitely Xiancao Compared with the previous volume, the plot of the second volume is not only blunt but also very watery Many plots also unfold without any foreshadowing, the emotions come inexplicably, the setting appears inexplicably, the plot turns inexplicably, the foreshadowing of various plots is also inexplicably blunt, and the protagonist's behavior style changes The writing was inexplicable, several key plot characters died without any foreshadowing and was very stiff, and the writing failed to create an atmosphere that would allow readers to fully engage in the plot. In the end, it was just awkward to read. But the author had a lot of words in some dialogues and psychological activities, and it felt like a simply filled outline. The story was still very good, but the writing became very poor, making the article tasteless and a pity to discard, but it is still good. In the third volume, the protagonist goes to the lighthouse. All kinds of rigid sensationalism, forced atmosphere, non-existent foreshadowing, and a straight-forward conspiracy throughout the whole process basically exhausted my patience. It can be regarded as driving high and leaving low.

Newcomers suggest that you should just read Marry Alley. The more you write, the more you write. The level of quality has completely disappeared, just like pouring water into an article and turning it into a defense draft. It is a lot of water. I suggest the author spend half a year revising it before continuing. The writing is really outrageous😅

The early stage was good, but the middle and later stages were basically shit. Starting from Chapter 100, the power system was collapsing. Except for the Red Moon Temple, there was no one in other cities that could defeat it. It felt like there were only a few people guarding a city, as if there were no other masters at all. Decades of development have yielded nothing. We need talent but not talent, and we need technology but not technology.

Ding Ke could have done it, but the online pictures were invaded and deleted. Please improve.

Stop touching your nose, brother, please, you may feel like you only write once in a long time, but I think it appears once in a few chapters, it is really a drama

Hurry up, eunuch, so that you don't feel uncomfortable and I feel uncomfortable too. The quality of the articles in the past six months has seriously declined, and it is useless to say anything. I really don't want to watch you waste this book. I have been subscribing since it was put on the shelves, and I have watched the book reviews get fewer and fewer, and its popularity is getting lower and lower. I don't know if you've thought about why not, but I do think the quality is declining. Let's start with the plot. There have been reversals before, and occasionally there are really surprising ones, such as Gan's promotion, which makes people think that the author is very good. But it's gone now. It's just like the old books from a few years ago. There's nothing wrong with them. But times are progressing, and book lovers have all improved. Your current article can make people guess what to say next, which is very cliché. The part about the situation at Bai Jing's family is simply terrible. She is too old to be old. If you really can't think of how to write it, skip it. It's better to skip it than to waste it! Don't be watery, just be of high quality. In Zhang Ji's paragraph, the character design is not reasonable. Specifically, how could he, a level 5, dare to speak to Chi Xiao in an equal tone? Isn't he a male god? That's how you introduced him when he appeared, but the subsequent description was simply disgusting and too cliched. If you remove this character, it will definitely not be so poisonous. The plot is inseparable from the characters. You have to use character settings to set up the plot and think about what this person would do in this situation. And the premise for thinking this way is that the characters are reasonable and not crude products like Zhang Ji. There are a lot of problems elsewhere, but that's all I can see. But it can be seen from these that there is definitely something wrong with your outline, or there is no detailed outline or a central point. If you really haven't thought about what to do next, it is still recommended to take a few days off to improve your details. Also, take a look at the books that have good results now, and don't work behind closed doors.

There is a question about whether things like anti-theft are useful. I feel like it is difficult for us to keep up with updates. I finally saw that a novel was suddenly updated, and I read some books. When I saw it, I found that it was anti-theft. I had to wait an hour to see it. I was disgusted