Swallowed Star: Reborn as Ke Di, but I Don't Want to Die

In this book, anyone of the same level can fight the protagonist to a draw. Why is Coty so weak? In the original story, how could he have been accepted as a disciple by the Lord of Chaos City in this state?

You paid for this, and you've already started writing fanfiction without even understanding the original work. You've concocted several near-genius characters, writing them at about the same level as Berlan. Look at how the original describes Korthy—a genius who appears only once every billions of epochs—and you've made him worthless. You even added a stellar-level time stop and just ran away.

First of all, the protagonist is a time traveler, so you know the original work, right? If the original work has something written about it, can the protagonist not be so surprised? Can the original work gloss over the details?

I've finished reading all the chapters of this book so far, and I'd like to share my thoughts. I think this book is really, really well-written, especially considering the author is an experienced writer. Overall, it's very captivating. Although I didn't notice what the protagonist looked like in the original character of Swallowed Star when I read it—it seems like it wasn't mentioned much or I…

Speechless. Deliberately avoiding the timeline of the original protagonist and forcibly adding familiar characters—it's just... Unbelievable! Well written, please don't write like that again.

They've lived for hundreds of years, yet they're still like children. Then this character, Huan, appeared. It's a miracle I wasn't poisoned to death.

Regarding the issue of stellar-level casting time pause I've seen many people questioning in the comments that I wrote time-stopping at the stellar level. I admit that this was indeed my mistake; I didn't verify the facts at the time. It's already nearly a hundred chapters in, so revising it is quite troublesome.

Stellar time stopped? What's the author thinking?

The timeline has been altered, and some details differ from the original work.

The timeline you wrote is not precise enough. The time difference between Kedi and Luo Feng is significant. Even if you wrote that the time difference between the two is not significant, the time interval between the opening of the Primal Star in the original work is very long. Luo Feng only opened the Primal Star tens of thousands of years after participating in the Genius Battle.