
Swallowed Star: What's Yours Is Mine
吞噬星空之你的就是我的
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 154k Words
- Subgenre
- Infinite Flow
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
73Chapters
0Votes
222Recs
12Fans
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Reader comments 12
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How can I put it, knowing that you want to suppress the combat power, the golden finger can only be used once in a hundred years. The protagonist is a time traveler and the first time it is used indiscriminately, it is actually a big poisonous point. You might as well change it to a setting where the protagonist does not know the hundred years, and then use it and then know that it is a hundred years of CD. This is more natural.
Thor doesn't have any big changes or opportunities compared to the original work, so why did he become so awesome?
Indiscriminate use of golden fingers + golden fingers cooling down for a hundred years = defeat in the street
I didn't understand the first chapter. Is the protagonist a native or a time traveler? Is it just about the plot? This is important.
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Thor's talent is not that strong! The original work is barely at the level of genius in the universe, but it is much different from Bolan and the Savages, and you don't want to cheat, so it's a bit inconsistent to suddenly write it so strong!
Why doesn't the author update anymore? Has he entered the palace?
Same as Chapter 1 about persuading people to quit. The biggest one just disappeared and took 100 years to cool down.
Thor, your daughter is good, she is mine.
The first chapter was very persuasive, and I was persuaded to quit. If the rest of the writing is good, please kindly give it a kick.
It's so rubbish, and my understanding of Swallowing Starry Sky is so poor. I only followed the original work once, and there aren't many new plots in the updated version.