My Success Is All Thanks to Dog Food

Yunqing

There are cows. Damn it, it's hard to find novels these days. I found cows again. It's bad luck. . .

I haven't read much yet. Does the heroine have a boyfriend? ? ? ? , No, Chinese people have a very serious virginity complex, it is best to do everything for the first time, not to mention the single female protagonist, some harem stories are not criticized for the first time, this may be the reason for poor grades, and the female protagonist has a boyfriend, I feel that the protagonist is immoral (looked at the comment area)

Dog food article? No Dog licking article? Yes

I was speechless in the first two chapters... She was called uncle when she was five years older, refused to communicate, and ran away from home at the age of 20... What happened to her that she lost her memory in a car accident and only had an IQ of 10 years old?

Mental cuckolds, everyone, run away

In fact, it is well written, but there are many problems. The most important thing is that the heroine has a boyfriend, and he is not the male protagonist. The most outrageous thing is that the heroine is the one who was abandoned. The matter was resolved only a dozen chapters later. I believe this alone is enough to make many readers run away. If possible, the author should overhaul the previous plot, replace the boyfriend with a pet or something else, or even remove these plots, which will not have any impact on the subsequent plot. The only alternative is to find another way for the male and female protagonists to meet. If this is not changed, it will be difficult to get better results in the future. Then there are several numerical errors in the heroine's favorability, happiness, or other values. This is okay, but more importantly, when will this value be increased. If the reader thinks that the heroine should be happy at this time, but this value does not increase, the reader will feel that it is inconsistent or not in line with their own wishes. If the number is too many, the reader will inevitably become irritated. In addition, the degree of happiness and sadness also varies. It is fixed at 5% every time, which is too hasty.

There are also some characters that can be written without. Such highlights can send a lot of people away. How do you accumulate fans like this?

There is no internal investment, so investment needs to be cautious. (The site is short, please increase your investment) This book has no internal investment, so everyone should be cautious when investing.

? I have a boyfriend, a WOC old tauren