The Executioner of Dayu Began to Torture the Fiancée of the Witch

The dragon-slaying warrior finally became an evil dragon, and the pure-love God of War also became an NTR warrior. I still remember that the supernormal girl I watched on QReading was clearly a pure-love harem, but now... What NTR crumbs

I have read more than two hundred chapters. In terms of writing style, the heroines described by the author are indeed good and have delicate emotions. Although the character of the Queen Mother is not likable, the interactive scenes gave me the feeling that the male protagonist is a bit sexy, but the flaws are not concealed. Also, there are too many ntr scenes, which feels like the author's bad taste.

I've read half of it, let me tell you about my feelings. First of all, the advantages. The characterization (the Queen Mother) is very good, the plot design is also very good, the writing is okay, and the heroine's emotions are relatively rounded. I won't go into details, everyone can feel it after seeing it. Mainly talk about the areas that I think can be improved. One is the way the characters speak. The author habitually puts the speaker after the speaker and divides it into paragraphs. When there are many characters or long conversations, it is a bit awkward. In fact, it is okay to just use how someone said it. It is better to put the speaker and what he said in the same paragraph. The second is the rhythm control. So far, the rhythm of the part before the release is very good. After the release, the rhythm suddenly becomes faster and there is insufficient foreshadowing (mainly because the protagonist's change of mentality is not reflected). In addition, the description of the third battle scene is not very good. As a result, this part should be the climax of the plot, but the perception is significantly lower than the previous part, which makes people a little confused. I feel that the more critical the plot is, the more slow and detailed it is. If you are not good at fighting, you can focus on describing the changes in the character's emotional state of mind. Of course, it is on the shelves after all, and it is understandable that it needs a climax plot to support it. Overall, it's worth a good review.

Are there any similar harem books about pretty girls that you would recommend? 😭 After watching Ten Years of Palace Undercover and the Female Villain's Follower, I am addicted to this type of stuff and can't help myself.

It's pretty good, but which dual cultivation I want to see. Rather than the inner one

The character development is really great. At first, I thought the bad character of the Queen Mother was very annoying, but as the relationship between the two further developed, this "badness" became a kind of fun-like thing, very natural, and it made people move their index fingers just looking at it. On the other hand, the demon princess at the beginning has nothing to like about her so far. It would seem a bit unnatural and uncomfortable to force the protagonist to lean towards her even though she treats the protagonist so badly. After all, I am a staunch Queen Mother fan ~ I hope the author can write better and better, come on.

What should I do if I keep clicking on the browser halfway through reading this book 😟

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I saw it on Tieba. I finished it in one go and still haven't finished it. The heroines are really well written, and the number of four is currently under control. At the same time, I also like the character of the male protagonist very much. He has courage, bottom line, and youthfulness. What is rare is that he is not wretched or has a decisive personality. I have automatically subscribed to it. In addition, I also read the previous book, which is simply a treasure author. The only shortcoming is that if you read the two books in succession, the heroines' characters in the two books will overlap to a certain extent, and there will be no surprise. But just reading this book is definitely very satisfying to me.

It's well written, but I have to get Princess Ning to come out.

I've seen Chapter 245. The protagonist is a pretty boy, the Queen Mother's dog, nothing else. The enemy's plans were successful every time, but the protagonist had no IQ at all. In the end, it was the protagonist's halo that unexpectedly resolved the enemy's plans. The classic line is, I can imagine what the enemy will do, but I don't expect what the enemy will do. Classic trash talk.

First: The characters in this book are well created, and the emotional transition between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is relatively smooth Second: The plot is quite interesting. At least the plot level of the latest chapter is always online Third: The author of this kind of book is very good. There should be a book of the same type as this kind of book at the beginning (the heroine seems to be called Fifth Jinshuang). But the plot at the end of that book was too weak, and the plot couldn't keep up. But the author handled it very well. Fourth: When can my sister get on base?

Is the author crazy? It's enough to do the NTL plot once or twice. The Queen's plot is progressing normally, but it's really disgusting to keep writing NTL plots and it's still forced. In particular, Concubine Yuan and her husband are still alive and well, and their relationship has not broken down. This episode is really poisonous. Has the author really been writing well since Hunting in the Frozen River? There is no plot at all, it just keeps brushing off the edges illogically anytime and anywhere. If this is really the case, the author might as well just write Liu Beiwen...

Purely because it looks good (picture intruded and deleted)

This sister should either get married as soon as possible, get married at every turn, and test like crazy on the edge of green. She obviously has feelings, but she is still majestic as the eldest sister all the time. I can't see where there is any majesty. She just kept her appetite after hundreds of chapters. Just like Lu Hongluan, she only knows me as your aunt. It's your aunt. There was no process of change in her inner thoughts. It just took a sharp turn. If you asked me to say, just write that my sister should get married early and go out so as to save her from staying at home. Zhao Lingling is jealous. If she stays at home and has an affair, she doesn't want to be a child bride. It's an inappropriate scumbag character.

It is suggested that it be more appropriate to change the name to Dayu Tauren.

Containing extremely high amounts of beef, Pure Love God of War expresses approval

It feels weird, a feeling somewhere between NTR and pure love

It's pretty good-looking at the front, but it's getting more and more sparse at the back, especially because there are so many ntr elements that I really can't stand it.

It is suggested to change the name: Dayu Cao is a thief. If she is not a wife, I will not accept her.

The husband of this witch princess is still at war, so she comes to seduce men? You, the author, are too strong-willed. Prince Ning doesn't like the princess, so let's just take it away. But the Witch Clan princess and her husband are not bad either, do they want to take it away too?

The heroines in the front are well portrayed, but there are too many heroines in the back, and there will always be a convergence, which is already a bit numb. Moreover, there will be more female protagonists in the foreseeable future, which I am really not optimistic about. The protagonist feels too weak, passively waiting for things to happen, and then letting others rescue him. There is neither the power to turn the tide nor the wisdom to strategize.

After observing it for a few more days, I still gave up. The author is simply writing an illusion. This kind of writing is destined to be a niche. It will be harmful to both success and failure.

After reading Chapter 16, I will reward you with 100 coins. It's really annoying. I thought that torturing the witch was torture. I never expected him to kiss me? ? Brother, is there poison in that wine? Are you pouring poison into your mouth? Damn, it's not at all what I thought! The demon girl has obviously been poisoned, so she was tortured to extract a confession! Then he reported Dayu. The Zhao family not only failed, but actually gained merit. After reading Chapter 16, I felt that the protagonist was indecisive and had no courage at all. After being poisoned, he first slashed her several times, cut off her hands and feet, and tortured her to extract a confession... ... Oh, I dare say that the witch is the absolute heroine in the end. So speechless

After reading over a hundred chapters, I didn't see the protagonist becoming stronger through practice, not a single mention of the Taoist methods and characteristics of each system, and not a single fight. The Queen Mother said she was being arrogant, but she was actually trying to make a fool out of herself, or at a very low cost. The eagle is not allowed to eat or drink, and the eagle is not allowed to sleep. While it depresses the eagle's spirit, the person who cooks the eagle cannot eat or drink much, nor can he sleep at all. It is a competition of will between man and eagle, otherwise the final eagle will not be convinced. This queen mother is very good. She is here to eat, drink and have fun. She still teases the eagle twice, giving her a hard punch and then giving her two sweet dates. While asking for sex, she emphasizes that she likes you. It is simply the most classic PUA. It can only be said that Tsundere has long since retired from the environment. I hope that the Queen Mother will regret it for the rest of her life.

The writing is very perfunctory starting from around the 300th chapter. Later, Zhao addresses each woman as "you". You know how uncomfortable it is to read. Isn't it written by Ri Qing? This is too shabby. Was it written with AI?

Hey hey, the new book is here! Ah, reading new books is such a beautiful thing!

After reading more than 200 chapters, the summary is that the main character's plan is purely fw. As for the emotional drama, just make do with it. It's not bad but not bad.

The interaction between the male protagonist and the Queen Mother has an instant feeling of being taken care of by a pretty boy, which is very awkward to watch.

The setting of Princess Ning is purely disgusting