A Literary Life That Started by Marrying a Big Star

The writing is good, especially the thrilling feeling of Shura Field, hahahaha. It has the same flavor as the previous work, please come on, author.

I feel that the progress of the emotional aspect is too fast and should be suppressed, otherwise readers will have no expectations, and the description and characterization of the previous characters will also be given away. You should maintain the ambiguity first and then make some small surprises to balance the emotional progress of both parties. You should mainly write about the system tasks and your own development first, and then finish it in one wave.

Writing half a chapter is worse than not writing at all, 😰😰😰

First build an incense building for the author, what if it gets cold one day?

I didn't hate harems before, preferring single female protagonists. It wasn't until several harem masterpieces came out that I realized that harems could be written so well. Harem Saka is here

Tsundere

Gentle and considerate, tolerance is great

After reading Chapter 92, I couldn't help but say Big Fish wanted a clear explanation from the protagonist. Because the protagonist rejected Big Fish, he felt that he had rejected the harem, which was amazing, and ran wildly in the heavy rain. I'm not talking about whether there is something wrong with the protagonist's head. At least if you have a girlfriend and you reject others, then you can be called a harem rejecter. Su's character hasn't been revealed yet. Oh, so by rejecting the harem and then Da Yu, does that mean you are now determined to be with Su? Now it's obvious that he wants to start a harem and hang himself out, so he doesn't dare to establish a relationship with anyone. Are you still complacent? Feeling amazing? I was so moved there that I just pretended that I didn't want to hurt them? I'm really convinced, you can write a pure scumbag better than this, we can't be bz and have to build a memorial... Obviously the front is quite normal...

It's really not what I said. The names are all Chinese names and the dialogues are all Japanese dialogues. It was very inconsistent with me.

"Plausibility" is very important in today's novels. Once the logic is inconsistent, the reader's reading experience will be reduced.

I can't accept the Japanese speaking style, bye bye

This is an article about buying a horse, which is slightly yandere and pure. Depending on the situation, other horses should be arranged in the future. People who like horse betting can check it out. But not recommended. There are three reasons. First: There are too many plots in Shura Field, and it is a bit hollow to use Shura Field to write about emotions. Second: The plot of forced repeated horizontal jumps makes people very uncomfortable after watching too many scenes. Children all know that when it comes to breaking off, adults should think carefully before making a decision. If you think about it from his perspective, this is not a choice that a bipedal monster should make. It felt like it was forced to jump around for the sake of the plot. Needs to be more natural and smooth. Third: I am a straight person. If I like it, I like it. If I don't like it, I don't like it. I look at it and get upset. Of course this is a personal reason. But I just like to speak my mind. Summary: If you like this genre, you can watch it. But the author will have no future if he keeps buying horses. Arts, science, and quintiles are not all Shuras. Although they have different intentions, they reach the same goal by different paths. If the growth line is set, then the growth line must be used to roll with the emotional line. I just feel that if I keep this style, this book may not get the results the author wants.

This book looks a bit awkward, and it's not that the book is awkward, but the character of the protagonist is awkward, which makes it uncomfortable and a bit depressing.

Is there a group for this one that was taken off the shelves? 😫

Multiple female protagonists dog food? Stop inventing new words, you're already a harem and you're giving back dog food, dog food mixed with feces and glass shards?

Will the author write a new book? The last book ended suddenly and was taken off the shelves too hastily😭

The system is a bit useless. Without the system, I can still be a copywriter and write out my pre-time travel works. With the system, it is simply cumbersome to have to do tasks to get out the pre-time travel works.

The title of the book is deceiving. I don't even know if I can get married after 200 chapters.

Seeing that there were many female leads, I clicked in immediately.

Is the author Japanese? Or are you studying Japanese professionally? Or are you a senior fan of Japanese animation? What's going on with this two-dimensional sense of déjà vu that fills the screen?

Generally speaking, I like the author's writing style, the feeling of constant testing on the edge of "life and death", the feeling that can only be understood but cannot be expressed in words, the feeling that is self-evident, that...; In a word, don't be a eunuch, follow your own ideas Write and don't be affected by readers' comments. Of course, if readers have good suggestions, they can still be adopted. When you sign the contract, I will automatically make a full subscription. Although I am a student, I should still have the money for the full subscription. Having said so much, I will say nonsense at the end: Come on! Author Jun＾0＾~

Good guy I've been saving it since I went abroad I originally wanted to read hundreds of chapters I just found out about the ending yesterday, and I plan to read it today It's blocked...

Is it the author of My Impossible Demon King Living Everyday Life in the Second Dimension?

I just found out today that I suddenly finished the book 3 days ago, and then it was quickly removed from the shelves, and then... Nothing happened.

😊😊😊 Yan Wei is a mother who takes care of her children. Although she doesn't know where the child came from, it seems to be her own. If you have a virginity complex, you can withdraw. I only saw this, so I will withdraw first. If there is a turning point, I hope someone will turn me out.

Good guy! Just gone? If I had known earlier I would not have subscribed...

Now that it's over, let's change the status 😒

I read this book a few weeks ago. I read dozens of chapters and thought it was okay, so I kept it on my bookshelf. Unexpectedly, I suddenly glanced at it today and realized it was finished, so I hurriedly read it. After reading it, I felt it was okay. At least for me, it is a readable book. Let me talk about the shortcomings I think. First of all, the title of this book is easy to dissuade, and it feels very offensive; secondly, Yan Wei is a bit awkward, and in the end, he did not explain where Yanzi came from, and to be honest, Yan Wei entered the game The words are far-fetched and make the male protagonist look too scumbag; and the initial process of Qingjiang and Xiao Yuer agreeing to the harem is also very cliché. In general, the harem is very blunt, the emotional development is still too little, and the ending is relatively hasty. Of course I'm not criticizing the author for how poorly he writes. It's really difficult to write the harem love line well. Most of them are written like a stallion. This one is at least within my acceptance range (ps: I recommend "I Loaded the Love Game". It's really good and the author can learn from it) Finally, I hope that the author can improve his writing skills after reading this book and write better in the next one. I wish the author can achieve his small goal of writing a high-quality book before graduation 😁

I still don't understand what happened to Yan Wei when she was pregnant. Is Yanzi the hero's daughter? You don't want to write about it for fear of being scolded. What's the logic? At least explain it. It's so vague.

The cover of Aqua is used to seduce DD, right?