
Why Is There Something Wrong with the Heroine of the Love Game?
为何恋爱游戏的女主不太对劲
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- Completed
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- 1.1M Words
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- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Everyday Romance
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- 2y ago
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- Qidian
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About Qingshui Xun
It's been a while since I read it, and I forgot some of the previous content. I originally wanted to write it earlier, but I forgot to put it off until now. Maybe I have forgotten some of what I wanted to say. I saw a lot of people talking about quitting the show before, and they also thought it copied the character and plot of Kujo Miji next door. It is true that the two have many things in common. They are both eldest ladies of the super conglomerate. They do not take human life seriously, have bad personalities, and the way they embarrass the male protagonist is also similar 😁 When they first met, the male protagonist failed to withstand the temptation of the system's high rewards. Later, the male protagonist also used false confessions to save his life. Let's analyze the characters and plot first. The characters are all super consortium ladies, so it is normal for them to have a lot in common. They are not from the same world as ordinary people, so it is expected that they treat others as ants. But there are still some differences in the characters. For example, Qingshui Kaoru doesn't have a strong mysophobia, at least not in terms of description. When they first met, the male protagonist couldn't resist the temptation and ran over to him. Some people thought it was unreasonable and too stupid. This plot happened when the male protagonist first got the system, that is, he didn't know that the system would issue deceptive tasks, or almost impossible tasks. When the information is unequal and the rewards are tempting, who can resist it? This kind of plot is also to introduce the heroine. Otherwise, how can we introduce this kind of heroine who is not in the same world? A perfect score? Make a lot of money? A hero saves a beauty? Or is it the overbearing president's style, "You actually ignored me? Very good, you succeeded in attracting my attention." Don't even think about the first two. The kind is working for the heroine. The third kind, there are a lot of bodyguards who need your rescue? Therefore, the author is using the third method at the same time to "steal the chicken but lose the rice". If he fails to save the beauty, he will be punished by the heroine. There is still a difference in punishment. After taking advantage of the male protagonist, Kujo Miki backhandedly tried to kill the male protagonist. (It also has a lot to do with her mysophobia) As for Shimizu Kaoru, if you go back and read it, you will find that she punishes the male protagonist, but not completely. For example, the male protagonist was asked to lick jio at the beginning, but in the end he was not actually asked to lick it. Instead, he let the male protagonist go. I won't go into details about false confessions. It's unlikely that the eldest lady will confess her love when there are a bunch of bodyguards next to her. Love letters will also be intercepted and disposed of. In order for the male protagonist to survive, face-to-face confession is relatively new to the female protagonist. (You can also understand that the author didn't think of a better way) The male protagonist's counterattack is completely different. The male protagonist next door is to be a good boyfriend and subtly change Kujo Miki. Hojo Makoto is not the case. When his wife Arashi and Shimizu Kaoru were torn apart, he fought back forcefully and left a deep impression on the heroine. I understand that freedom is more important than life, and I plan to commit suicide after taking revenge. Later, after the female protagonist really develops a crush on the male protagonist, when the male protagonist encounters a tsunami while surfing, the female protagonist's first thought is to go and save people. I won't go into details about what happened on the island (it's a bit of a tease), as it might be spoilers. Finally, I want to say that throughout the whole story, although Qingshui Xun has a strong sense of oppression, he has never made a move on the male protagonist from the beginning to the end. (Maybe he did, but I forgot) (unlike the neighbor who killed him several times). It can even be said that the male protagonist owes her a life.
Around the fifty or sixtyth chapter, it's really good to watch. It's different from the love game next door. If you feel the same or feel uncomfortable after watching the previous games, don't give up.
I'm very optimistic about your book. Come on, Aoli.
The handsome guy reading the book, look over here! Although I wrote this book very seriously, I don't have much confidence. If you see any flaws or poisonous points, or if you have any suggestions or ideas, please feel free to share them in this post. I will read them. Thank you🙏
What do you think of this little Tsubaki⊙⊙
Qingshui Kaoru The Eternal God of Black Silk
In the end I couldn't help but write something. First of all, I have to say that I haven't been following it all the time, but I have been watching it since the early days. It has been a bit intermittent recently but I still follow the plot. The author always surprises me with his imagination and the unexpectedness of the plot. I think this book also has its own style that is different from other books. However, the author seems to have lost his temper after the counter-attack. The transformations of the eldest lady and the protagonist are very blunt, and some plots are very rough. Obviously there are some plots that I find very interesting, but they feel a little baffling, that is, eh, have they developed to this extent? Most of the problems are related to the eldest lady and the protagonist. I can provide you with an idea. I know you will read it, so just take a quick look at it. Don't be affected too much. The most important thing is to lay out the outline and details now. The eldest lady did not kill the protagonist immediately after being counter-killed because she wanted to tame the protagonist. She believed that such a protagonist was valuable enough for her to make an exception. Then the next step is to take action, and the student union and other things are all because of this. Then you can naturally discover the closeness between the protagonist and Qingmei and become jealous, but you haven't reacted yet, and then instinctively use her power to disturb the protagonist and the two, without being too direct. At least the eldest lady's character must be maintained during this period. She can take time to do other heroines' things, and then the eldest lady will give feedback on these things. The pull between the protagonist and the eldest lady, one wants to tame, and the other has the courage to resist, and then the eldest lady finds that she can no longer bear to be harsh, but she will still switch to other ways to punish. The protagonist also thought that the eldest lady just wanted to tame him again, so he hated her very much. However, because of her power, he could not rely on her, so he wanted to use the system to work hard to become stronger, so he became more motivated with all the beautiful girls. Among the beautiful girls in the guide, along with the jealousy of the eldest lady, it is necessary to set up the daily routine and intersperse it a little more. This tests the attack power. Finally, when attacking a certain beautiful girl, such as the yandere one, the protagonist loses control and is rescued by the eldest lady. Of course, the protagonist's disgust will not subside just because of this, but the eldest lady has the capital to negotiate with the protagonist. At this time, due to long-term jealousy and the protagonist's lack of income, the eldest lady has accumulated a lot of complaints, which can be given away in vain. Then, although the protagonist's attitude has not changed much, he has noticed that something is wrong. To be honest, the eldest lady's line is at the crematorium of her husband, so she will definitely be wronged, but it is up to the author to judge whether this is appropriate? Also, I think the scene where the eldest lady shed a tear on the protagonist last night was great. It should be that it was better to write it when the two of them broke the ice and improved in the later period because they were unable to fall in love for a long time, and then were misunderstood by the protagonist in the end. Writing about the protagonist touching the tears dripping down his cheek, the eldest lady actually cried? In short, the eldest lady needs a more delicate psychology and mentality portrayal.
Congratulations to the author for taking a new path. I originally thought that if the protagonist was still in the dog-licking mode, I would just delete it. Unexpectedly, after a few days of waiting, I was pleasantly surprised. Finally, a normal man came out. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง
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Chapter 65 so far. Around Chapter 20, Shimizu Kaoru's treatment was unpleasant, even disgusting. Around Chapter 55, a reversal came. Although I think this reversal is still a bit "hard", considering that reversing it too late will lose more readers, I reluctantly accepted it. According to the current situation, Sanjiang should be stable. Overall, it is a very good book. I'm just waiting for it to be released. The updates every day are really not enough.
The early setting is very similar to "I Loaded the Love Game", which is not a problem in itself, because it can be seen that the author wants to write his own story. But the protagonist feels like a "diaosi" 😅. Let's not talk about the fixed revenge method of light novels by making the enemy fall in love with you. You tie up your enemy and then commit suicide in front of her. This is the first time I have seen it... And what is even more outrageous is that this way, you can make the enemy fall in love with the protagonist? I really don't understand what kind of emotional line this is. As for why I feel like a "diaosi", the episode that gave me the strongest feeling was the part about my wife Lan. To make people surrender and regret through "what's the point of being strong?" I almost thought I clicked on the wrong novel website. What's even more outrageous is that there is a fake pregnancy plot. Although it turned out to be fake in the end, when I saw the beginning of that paragraph, I thought it was a classic abortion scene in some domestic youth literature, which was extremely uncomfortable. In general, the plot of this book feels a bit too strong. There are many eye-catching plots, but the rationality and logic are too far behind.
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My wife's party will win😜
Ah! This is a great question, so I can talk to you about some science theories! The suspension bridge effect means that when both men and women are stimulated at the same time, they will mistakenly think that this kind of relationship means they like each other! The most vivid thing is the famous scene in Assassin Wu Liuqi, where A-Zhen falls in love with A-Qiang! Wu Liuqi kissed Plum Blossom Thirteen in order to avoid the blade If Shimizu Megumi really likes the protagonist, I think it should be when the male protagonist asks her! The part where you want the stick in my hand or my stick and the part where you carry Megumi Shimizu to the toilet! The first paragraph is about the breaking of spiritual defenses, and the other is about the breaking of physical defenses. Originally, Shimizu Megumi thought she would die, but then the protagonist injected anesthetics on herself, leaving huge traces on Shimizu Megumi's young mind. The alternation between life and death is definitely not as shallow as described in the novel. This also explains why Shimizu Megumi went to save the protagonist. There may be hatred, but not so much. And this plot puts the male protagonist between life and death, making Shimizu Megumi completely understand that she does not want the male protagonist to die. Before, she was always a tough talker, and she broke the window paper by the way! This feels like a very vulgar version of a female pornographic novel. The domineering president has everything and thinks women like his money. Then he meets an unpretentious heroine who doesn't like his money and gives him a lot of money. For Megumi Shimizu, the male protagonist is the different person. Wait! Why should I analyze the emotions of the characters in the novel so carefully? Slipping away This post is to answer a question from a buddy, why the male and female protagonists reconciled so quickly
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The title is not cruel, seriously 😅? Let's not talk about the plot and the heroine's full sense of déjà vu. Apart from being tough on Ninomiya in the early stage, the male protagonist is basically a doormat after that, being ordered by all kinds of things. Is it necessary to take on this kind of male protagonist? 😅
After more than a hundred chapters, I want to change the author.
Extremely poisonous, stomachache, forced to lower the protagonist's love, intelligence, and outlook. After more than 100 chapters, it's almost just a weak plot number. It insists on plotting, insisting on weak numbers, bad reviews, extremely poisonous!
I have read more than 20 chapters. I have heard of Kujo but never read it. I can only say that the heroine named Xun made me angry all afternoon. The whole scene where the male and female protagonists first met made me feel that there was nothing to watch later unless the woman died, so I canceled it. I am still angry and speaking irrationally, but I really can't stand it. I wish the author will get better as he writes.
The author is so awesome. I have never tipped anyone else, but you, my god, Klass, you are awesome. I like your writing so much. It's great, so exciting, it's almost ecstatic. Also, although the tips are not much, they are already my money. Come on, Klass, come on, Oli!
Due to force majeure, this book has been completed. The books should be off the shelves in a few days. See you in the next book. 🌹
My wife Lan, please take me away 😭😭😭, Lanmen
The sense of déjà vu is too strong, and the jokes are a bit awkward. The protagonist is not afraid of death and being caught by the eldest lady and even teases her. There is absolutely no need to join in the plot next door. He deliberately causes trouble as if he knows that he has the halo of the protagonist.
Didi! You pretty boys, one group is full, and the second group is here!
It's pretty good, but the ending is too rushed.
Book review
1200,3400, ,,,,,,,, However, everyone's character, ability, and development of cleaning are different. They may be similar in the first few dozen chapters, but there are differences in the later chapters. The Miss in the Love Game is very powerful, but this Miss is not as scary as that one. The teacher in this book is the daughter of the world, with super powers, and the world is controlled by her subconscious. My wife in the tsundere zone is related to the protagonist. It's hard to say. You have to see for yourself 😃. It's a bit strong. The writing style of the two books is also different. The writing style of Love Game is excellent and literary, and you can feel that the author is very knowledgeable. This book is a bit slutty. I seriously suspect that the author has a side job. The last dozens of chapters are like being in heat. However, I cannot say that the writing is bad. I can only say that the style is different. Personally, I still like Love Game a little more. I don't know what else to talk about. You can ask in the comment area and I will reply when I see it 😁
Lanmen🙏🙏🙏
It's always been free prostitution, this is my first time giving a reward, the author is awesome, it's pretty awesome
I have been reading this book for a long time, and I really watched it grow. From more than ten chapters to now, I have kept it on the shelves. From being a transparent child to the current celebrity, it is like watching my own child grow up. I sincerely hope that this book will become a big hit!