Hogwarts: I Became the Third Generation Dark Lord

I didn't understand it at first. Isn't it called by the last name when sorting? Isn't it allowed to call everyone by their full name when they are being sorted? Or should there be an explanation later...

What the hell? In the UK, he suddenly turned around and killed everyone, hung up on cn, and then it was over?

As we all know, British people can understand Tang poetry and Song lyrics.

The protagonist should have a period of explosive strength. I feel he is not as strong as Cedric.

It felt outrageous that Grindelwald wasn't sorted into Slytherin. And it was not requested by the protagonist, but decided by the Sorting Hat. . . However, judging from the branch, pig's feet will probably be praised by the group. . . Don't understand. . .

After reading a few chapters, there are quite a lot of flaws. In the branching part, the surname is not given in order to hide the identity. This seems unreasonable. It is quite uncomfortable to read that the surname is given but the protagonist does not. I haven't finished reading the rest yet, why don't you introduce yourself to the supporting character whom you met on the train? Even if I can't figure out the relationship between Dumbledore and the protagonist, the first-generation Demon Lord, the protagonist hasn't read the Seven Parts in detail, so it's quite uncomfortable to watch. After all, he grew up watching the Harry Potter series, so it's very awkward to watch. The author looks at the homepage and is an old man who has been in the palace several times. It is best to review it yourself before writing to see if it makes sense based on ordinary people's thinking. Most people who read this book are Harry Potter fans. A little personal advice to the author⊂[┐'_'┌]⊃

After reading this novel, I always felt something was wrong. In the eyes of Westerners, bloodline is still relatively important. Grindelwald is definitely a surname that can be on par with the Twenty-Eight Holy Families. The protagonist introduces himself only by his first name and not his surname, which seems disrespectful in the eyes of Westerners.

The writing is okay, but the female protagonist has negative reviews. She has a green tea bitch type. For example, she encourages the male cannon fodder to cause trouble for the male protagonist, and then she gets the princess disease and feels that all the men in the world should let her go. The author's favorite type is really a bit outrageous. No matter what this woman did later, you wrote her so disgustingly before, what, is it the ultimate reversal? Is she plotting against you because you attracted her attention? ... If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, you can do it without cp. The heroine can be considered extremely toxic, but the writing is passable, but it's outrageous. I want to continue watching but I'm afraid of seeing the hero licking the dog. I think the heroine is just a little girl, "She's just a child, why bother with her?"… This is probably what the hero is thinking.

It's not that I don't like Hufflepuff, but the logic must be smooth. If it is a protagonist who follows the route of the second-generation White King, Shiguan is suitable. You are a protagonist of the third-generation Black King and the Crypto Party route. Does the author really think Hufflepuff is suitable...

If wizards start a war with humans, except for the Imperius Curse and hypnosis, which can cause some trouble to humans in the early stages of the war, the wizarding world will probably be beaten by humans. The three most damaging Unforgivable Curses are all single-target attacks. . .

It's such a pity for Green. After all, he was the first person who followed the protagonist. No one among them was sacrificed, only Green, especially the sentence "Wentworth, you liar, I didn't even get the hot pot for the second time!" I really burst into tears. I felt uncomfortable for several days because of this, and he was the first generation of the Camarilla. , The sunny and optimistic big brother, has been helping the protagonist, but in the end he didn't even see the protagonist succeed... That's it... 😭 Never has a book attracted me so much, the characters in it are all flesh and blood There are also a lot of pitfalls, I hope the author will write a second book, please🙏🙏

Initially, the introduction was okay, but a wave of senior Ham fans came up who didn't know Grindelwald, so they directly persuaded me to leave.

The writing is incomprehensible. There is no surname in the roll call at the opening ceremony, there is no surname in self-introduction, and it has not been exposed even in the Prophet newspaper several times! Are you kidding me? None of your friends will ask you what your last name is.

Do you think your book title matches Hufflepuff? I'm really convinced

Why do I feel like the protagonist is such a loser?

After all, he is the descendant of the big boss, so he can't determine whether the protagonist is a squib?

I just asked when the protagonist would read history books and other books to learn about the past. Personally, I prefer the kind of protagonist who has no plans and knows the plot well.

You must be of high quality. After all, you are the third generation Dark Lord, so don't just fight in England. Your great-uncle is about to conquer the world, so there is no reason for us to be worse than him, right?

The little wizard relies on the admission notice to judge whether he is a squib?

I couldn't stand it when I saw Grindelwald. The protagonist is really good-tempered and never gets angry no matter what. I want to create an original book later, so I don't want to use the original plot? Voldemort doesn't care anymore? The beginning was pretty good, and I really expected the protagonist, a descendant of Grindelwald, to meet Grindelwald, but this is the result? What is the courage to remain elegant under pressure? I vomited. I was so embarrassed. I don't know how to write the rest. Anyway, I slipped away. But the first part is really good. I can only say that the author should work hard. I hope the next book will be better.

It's hard to see a HP fanfiction that attracts me so much! The author asks you to update carefully and keep it up. Don't cheat! [A poor child who can no longer find any books to read] May I ask when the second update will evolve into the third update?

I think the setting of this book is quite interesting, but I feel that the author's attempts to write some big scenes (fighting parts, etc.) Are often a bit anticlimactic. ………… There are spoilers below: For example, when attacking the Ministry of Magic (brother, you called a bunch of people, and then over there If my mother-in-law wants to fight, shouldn't I plan it from the beginning and then fight? Then I finally start the fight and call a timeout in the middle of the fight. I feel really stupid.) And when I want to kill Voldemort. Yes, you want to take revenge. Ask who wants to kill someone with you, okay. It feels like the hard-fought climax is coming! What then? Voldemort is not at home! ! ! ! I am really speechless. I understand that some scenes cannot be written due to limited pen power, but I can't suddenly cut off the passionate part in the middle of writing, right? ! To be honest, I quite liked the result of this setting... I am really speechless.

The author's writing is good. I've enjoyed reading it so far. I hope it won't collapse later and can be slower. Don't be a eunuch.

To be honest, it's pretty cool in HP's novels.

Book it all, watch it, and go to bed. Completed in one go

I just don't understand. The author is not a great author. Why should you avoid those cool spots?

At least the previous pits have been filled. Has Uesugi Bamboo been resurrected? The Purifier hasn't appeared yet?

Why are the surnames not pronounced during the sorting process? I thought there would be a wave of fun points, but I can only say that there are a lot of drawbacks.

I originally came here for Sister Ka, but when I got there, I started teasing her and instigating NPCs. I just put up with it, but after reading about two hundred chapters, there was almost no progress in the emotional line, and there were almost no battle scenes. I skipped through the next two hundred chapters, and ended up hastily ending with a lot of holes left unfilled.

The biggest flaw of this novel is that Greene died, which was plot-killing and forced to die.