Hogwarts: I Became the Third-Generation Dark Lord

It felt outrageous that Grindelwald wasn't sorted into Slytherin. And it was not requested by the protagonist, but decided by the Sorting Hat. . . However, judging from the branch, pig's feet will probably be praised by the group. . . Don't understand. . .

The writing is okay, but the female protagonist has negative reviews. She has a green tea bitch type. For example, she encourages the male cannon fodder to cause trouble for the male protagonist, and then she gets the princess disease and feels that all the men in the world should let her go. The author's favorite type is really a bit outrageous. No matter what this woman did later, you wrote her so disgustingly before, what, is it the ultimate reversal? Is she plotting against you because you attracted her attention? ... If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, you can do it without cp. The heroine can be considered extremely toxic, but the writing is passable, but it's outrageous. I want to continue watching but I'm afraid of seeing the hero licking the dog. I think the heroine is just a little girl, "She's just a child, why bother with her?"… This is probably what the hero is thinking.

After reading a few chapters, there are quite a lot of flaws. In the branching part, the surname is not given in order to hide the identity. This seems unreasonable. It is quite uncomfortable to read that the surname is given but the protagonist does not. I haven't finished reading the rest yet, why don't you introduce yourself to the supporting character whom you met on the train? Even if I can't figure out the relationship between Dumbledore and the protagonist, the first-generation Demon Lord, the protagonist hasn't read the Seven Parts in detail, so it's quite uncomfortable to watch. After all, he grew up watching the Harry Potter series, so it's very awkward to watch. The author looks at the homepage and is an old man who has been in the palace several times. It is best to review it yourself before writing to see if it makes sense based on ordinary people's thinking. Most people who read this book are Harry Potter fans. A little personal advice to the author⊂[┐'_'┌]⊃

After reading this novel, I always felt something was wrong. In the eyes of Westerners, bloodline is still relatively important. Grindelwald is definitely a surname that can be on par with the Twenty-Eight Holy Families. The protagonist introduces himself only by his first name and not his surname, which seems disrespectful in the eyes of Westerners.

It's not that I don't like Hufflepuff, but the logic must be smooth. If it is a protagonist who follows the route of the second-generation White King, Shiguan is suitable. You are a protagonist of the third-generation Black King and the Crypto Party route. Does the author really think Hufflepuff is suitable...

If wizards start a war with humans, except for the Imperius Curse and hypnosis, which can cause some trouble to humans in the early stages of the war, the wizarding world will probably be beaten by humans. The three most damaging Unforgivable Curses are all single-target attacks. . .

It's such a pity for Green. After all, he was the first person who followed the protagonist. No one among them was sacrificed, only Green, especially the sentence "Wentworth, you liar, I didn't even get the hot pot for the second time!" I really burst into tears. I felt uncomfortable for several days because of this, and he was the first generation of the Camarilla. , The sunny and optimistic big brother, has been helping the protagonist, but in the end he didn't even see the protagonist succeed... That's it... 😭 Never has a book attracted me so much, the characters in it are all flesh and blood There are also a lot of pitfalls, I hope the author will write a second book, please🙏🙏

Initially, the introduction was okay, but a wave of senior Ham fans came up who didn't know Grindelwald, so they directly persuaded me to leave.

The writing is incomprehensible. There is no surname in the roll call at the opening ceremony, there is no surname in self-introduction, and it has not been exposed even in the Prophet newspaper several times! Are you kidding me? None of your friends will ask you what your last name is.

I didn't understand it at first. Isn't it called by the last name when sorting? Isn't it allowed to call everyone by their full name when they are being sorted? Or should there be an explanation later...