The Side Path Begins with the Refugees

The plot of this book is ingenious, and the mystery of reincarnation at the beginning is quite good; but the logical connection is a bit confusing, and it feels uncomfortable to read; the details are not handled properly, and some plots are slightly abrupt; the power system is imperfect, and the shaping is not concrete, leaving people with no concept of the realm; the writing style is acceptable, but some of the terms are inappropriate and repeated many times, making the experience poor; the insertion of world view display is a bit stiff, and it is used directly without narration, which is a waste of effort. This brief review will be stopped for now, and other aspects will be discussed when there is time.

Fencing post Fight once per chapter until the eunuch or the end.

No wonder not many people read it. What you write is all nonsense, and the logic is not fluent and messy. Moreover, you put yourself in danger as soon as you traveled through time. It would be better if you escaped from danger. Look, you have just stepped out of the wolf's den and entered the tiger's den. How can you make people feel like this? I can't stand it anymore, and there are only so many foundation building in that world. I really can't stand it anymore and I just persuaded me to quit. The foundation building is like cabbage running all over the floor. The two Taoists are in that kind of state. It doesn't make sense, and the author doesn't even think about it! !

Longtaolou My name is useless, Readers, please give me a starting point name Maybe I will adopt it Thank you

Among the 5 books, 4 are by eunuchs and 1 is currently being written. I really don't dare to read them 😐

I come here from Qianqiang to be famous, and save my claws in advance. If the book becomes popular, I will be a veteran.

In the signing process, investment is welcome

His heart is gone. . . It's a bit like another book I read. The protagonist is also a heretic and has no heart.

Hope to be selected as a supporting actor

It's a bit short. There will definitely be a wave of new books. You are short and weak. Let's eat something to make up for it.

Awesome Chasing books I hope I won't be a eunuch

Hahaha! It made me laugh! Humph~laughing like a pig.