Tiangang Disha Ruyi Book

The first item in the Wishful Book should be Tiangang Law Nine Breaths Convince Qi, which is useful to the protagonist! How to use magical powers without mana is like having a sports car worth hundreds of millions but it is a waste if it has no oil.

Hey, there is too much foreshadowing in the early stage, and there are guns but no ammunition, and some trivial things are done in order to obtain spiritual energy.

My best regards to the author and fellow Taoists and seniors Yesterday, after reading this book and the comments from fellow Taoists and seniors, I couldn't sleep at night, and some of my thoughts came out quickly. I hope everyone who reads this will not laugh [smile] After reading this book, I found that the author is serious! There is no doubt about it. Some Taoist friends and seniors said that the author has not arranged a powerful magical power for the protagonist. I hope that all Taoist friends will do a little research on the magical power, knowledge, and medical skills that the protagonist now has; if you can combine it with Chinese Taoism and ancient Chinese literature, you will find that these two magical powers are not simple. Knowing the land is not a simple navigation. Taoism has mountains and rivers as blessed places and uses the terrain to make the Five Elements and Bagua, which also includes infrastructure, spiritual cultivation, terrain context, etc.; Medical skills are even more complicated! Understand yourself and its medicinal value, I won't say anything else (let me tell you, I won't let you come! After all, the medical skills of our ancestors are too abnormal! As a junior who knows nothing, I can only kneel down and worship). These two magical powers are well prepared for finding the blessed land of elixirs, alchemy and golden fingers! This is "wealth" (law; couple; wealth; land. The author should have arranged wealth first)! Furthermore, Taoists have a saying that Taoism follows nature and haste leads to waste. If the state of mind is not enough to give too powerful supernatural powers, then there can only be one result: this book will collapse.         ，[][][]         Speaking of which, I really admire the author for how he wrote the main character's family background perfectly!       As a concubine, the protagonist does not have as many hardships as in other books (according to modern terms, the protagonist's mother is a shameless mistress, a coquettish thing who ruined my family with her beauty. Even after she died, my husband will never forget you, and then I have to raise a son for you, ha! You are naughty every day, you hurt others outside and you have to wipe your butt, and finally give you a house and give you pocket money every month. I think people nowadays can't do this). The aunt of the protagonist in the author's novel is really a model of ancient Chinese women! She arranged the protagonist's enlightenment and life very well! As for the inheritance of family property by biological sons, it is also appropriate under the background of the times (in ancient times, the direct descendants were established first and then the elders and virtuous people were established. This is according to the law). As for the protagonist giving the invention to the family so that the family can take advantage, I think this is understandable. In ancient times, people from the same clan would join together to keep warm! After all, not all people are single husbands. Only when your family is strong can you have the capital to do something. (Unlike the protagonists written by the author in some novels, who were reborn in the ancient imperial palace and felt like they were reborn in time and again, they said in front of the officials, "I will depreciate myself as a citizen today and will never have anything to do with you again." Haha! You may have some misunderstanding of "filial piety" and "disrespect" in ancient times! It's good for such a person to be alive, and he also wants to make a fortune, train soldiers and compete for supremacy. I can only haha) The character design of the protagonist is also very good! It's a bit like "Knowing the Book and Driving the Gift"! "Zhi" does not mean that knowing means knowledge, nor does it mean that knowing some principles means knowing; "book" does not mean knowing how to read books for many years; I don't know how to say "da", but there is a saying that "one who hears the Tao has a priority, and he who masters it is a teacher"; "ritual" I really don't dare to say, the biggest thing in China is "sacrifice and Rong" ("sacrifice" means sacrifice, which is also "etiquette"! I really don't understand this at all, now you can understand etiquette if you don't offend others!). This is what I mean when I say that the protagonist has a point. After all, the inheritance of our ancestors is really difficult to understand! What's more, I am still an unlearned person who has not graduated from junior high school. The author really puts his heart into writing the book, just take it slow! After all, good books are hard to find! I just hope that the author will not collapse. [Hands together][Hands together][Hands together] The above is just what I, a person who has not graduated from junior high school, thought about. If it makes the author and the senior reader uncomfortable, please let me know. I will delete it and apologize.

I was really convinced. I was attracted by that long review, and I barely managed to endure it until more than fifty chapters. At the beginning, the protagonist traveled through time, and handled the worldly affairs very well. I was about to become a disciple, but gave it all up in order to make money. What are you worried about? , You can't make money while studying? Also, if the author doesn't know how to write about fighting, then don't write it. The fighting is just like a turn-based online game. You hit it, I hit it. The other side is about to run, but the other side is watching and running. It's typical of driving high and moving low, and the protagonist becomes more and more like a retard later on. If you are slow to warm up, you will be slow to warm up. I can chase you, but can you please stop poisoning me?

If you can't use cheats, why would you write cheats? I originally came here for the golden finger. After almost 10 chapters, I didn't see the golden finger. Then I flipped through the table of contents and gave up decisively.

Nowadays, writing novels doesn't need to be based on logic? Martial arts requires calmness Taoism requires state of mind and charm to coexist Buddhism requires concentration and cessation to be in conflict The basics of metaphysics are to understand human nature and drive, and then master the micro-manipulation of muscle and sensory changes After the innate realm, you must follow Only by dancing with love can one navigate the realm of heaven and man This is a necessary prelude for mortals to enter the extraordinary. Most of the people writing novels are now students. They have never passed the love test, and there is no way to talk about wisdom in writing novels It is getting harder and harder to find novels with new ideas

Although the protagonist has no father, there are dads everywhere. No matter how promiscuous the protagonist is, everyone likes the protagonist. Although the golden finger of the protagonist has not been opened, once you eat the plant with mutated spiritual energy, you will know that it can make people improve their martial arts and make them healthy. Other people are fools. Animals and insects don't know how to mutate spiritual energy, and they don't know how to eat spiritual energy plants. Without the protagonist, the world would not turn around...

Also write a powerful spell, don't keep tempting people by writing a powerful spell that is slow to upgrade. It's so annoying that I want to run away too.

Drive high and go low, you can read about chapter 20. I just said you should study hard and then you dropped out of school to invent tofu and perfume. Why did you drop out of school when you didn't do it yourself? Later, when you explored the remote village, you showed your stupidity and coward to the fullest. The protagonist's guard died early if he didn't open it too much.

It's too detailed. The process of doing each thing is completely written out. Some things can be omitted but there is no need to write them completely. It's too tiring to read. Just write down a few small things. Otherwise, the chapter will be over without saying anything.

After more than 20 chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. It was too slow and the progress was too slow. I would ask a visitor to write a chapter about a small matter, write a chapter while chatting with the visitor, and so on. There are countless other chapters like this.

You can still see the front part, it's quite interesting and full of life. It's just that dropping out of school is a bit toxic. Why can't you do other things while studying? Even if you have to find the power of doom, you can study abroad. Then it started to become boring to enter the land of Youli. So many people in the Tsing Yi Army were trapped, and this place became more and more serious. It was reported to the court n times, but no one took care of it. As a result, the protagonist came, and a group of people came out of nowhere, and they were all experts from various forces. Originally it was just a small naughty problem. The plot I thought was that the protagonist went in and teamed up with the trapped Tsing Yi soldiers to destroy the cult and then push them to the evil tree god. The protagonist gets some benefits, the city lord is saved, the secluded land disappears directly, and the controlled old women in the city die because the god died and their power dissipated without any sustenance, and then everyone is happy. In the end, I had to write it in such a big way. Why do so many people come to a place that is obviously not taken seriously? Then a super villain from this world appeared for this plot, and those experts watched him leave behind, can you believe this? They also introduced the villain of the Pupil Realm, and then the leader's father solved the incident inexplicably. Wasn't he dead for many years? There are too many characters and too many events, which do not match the causes of the previous events. Reading many such books, the first problem the protagonist encounters is always related to the royal family's succession. Either the prince wants to overthrow the emperor with the help of evil gods, or a certain prince wants to become emperor and commit evil acts. Even small things that are not visible at first can be written down later as a small conspiracy before the rebellion. Why is the protagonist so capable? It's obviously a small evil incident, but he has to rely on you to make it so big. I have just finished watching the plot of the Land of Desolation. The above paragraph is just a guess of the general plot. This is probably the trick. Also, in the land of solitude, the protagonist is really in charge of the whole process. Many times, he can directly absorb the power of disaster to solve some problems. For example, when rescuing the besieged Tsing Yi Army, he still has so many words to say during the fight. The battle with the cultists is a turn-based battle. The whole process is like, you hit me and I hit you, and next round you say something and I say something, and then we fight each other and say something. It's quite funny. I was so anxious when I watched it. It's really outrageous that you can still give us popular science in such an emergency. Those who were doing the most damage in front were dying and getting injured. You can still watch them teleport away. Even if you don't want to show your differences in front of so many people and don't just go up and suck them, you can just interfere with them, but then you won't be able to activate the skills. After that, many chapters were set up for us. I skipped chapters and went directly to the finale of the incident, and then ended up going home to save my eldest brother. Then because of this plot, I couldn't stand it any longer. I was really starved of reading. The previous part of this book was okay, but now I can't get enough of it. Should I continue reading? Because of this shortcoming, I didn't have the patience to read it, so I wanted to skip chapters. The middle part of the film was full of blurry lines, and I didn't know what I was reading. When I read books, I prefer to read them word by word. I can better understand the complete plot. Even if sometimes I just skip a few words because some books have too many gorgeous words and descriptions and I am impatient. I won't want to skip large sections or chapter by chapter like I do now. Difficult to do

The fighting was so poorly written! ! Stop and go, turn-based game? Watching the other person recite the incantation makes him drunk!

Controlling comments is too serious. A 500,000-word novel has less than 100 comments. Also look at a hammer?

The author really shouldn't have written like this, since he has acquired medical skills. Just don't have some common sense. Traditional Chinese medicine is also a science. Even if you don't have the ability to regulate the meridians with the five elements of traditional Chinese medicine or know the herbs. You can't even do it worse than a doctor of traditional Chinese medicine. The mythical skills are awesome. It's really dramatic to take photos like this. I came here because of the title of your book. The author's writing style and values ​​​​are very good. It's just that the depth of the work didn't meet expectations. Most of the people who persisted here are old bookworms, and those who read the interesting articles ran away long ago. One hundred and eight skills are a burden. No one expects authors to write brilliantly. But the early ones must run through the main line and have depth to leave a deep impression on people. This is a good time to attract fans! What a pity. What I have said is not criticism, but encouragement. I hope the author can work harder!

The more I read, the more speechless I became. It is the most useless protagonist I have ever seen. The author is also awesome. He dared to write about such evil points. It seems that he felt that the results of this book were too good.

The label is actually fast-paced 😅. Is it wrong?

Maybe the writing style is good, but the problem is that these dozens of chapters are not attractive at all to read! Some people say that it can be slow and attractive, but your story is long, protracted, and unattractive to read, which means the story is not strong.

It's obvious that the front and back are not written by the same author.

Too wordy! After picking it up a few times and reading a little bit, I couldn't stand it anymore! How can I get through such a boring chapter and watch interesting content?