One Piece: the Belated System

I've seen too many fans who went to Shuangyue Village to become apprentices at the beginning, and I lost interest after just looking at the catalog 😓

If you use the third person pronoun, you won't be so angry.

To be honest, after reading a few of them, I thought they were okay. It's just that sometimes the name is called A Yong, and sometimes it's called Monkey D Yong. It's a little bit poisonous. All in all, the writing is okay.

I want to ask the heroine a question. Is there a female protagonist?

It's too messy, sometimes it's A Yong, sometimes Monkey D Yong, sometimes I What you wrote is too messy, just use the third person.

Personally, I think that if I want to write about pirates, I should use the pirates' own power system! Forget it if you have similar animation systems like Demon Slayer and Ajin! Make a Mao Xiuxian! Isn't it against the law? The system also conflicts! If you come to see One Piece, you just like the Pirates system! What are you doing?

I just asked a question about this rubbish stuff. Are the 20 fucking cards open or not? Where the hell did they go?

The first person to persuade people to quit. More than 400 chapters cannot be published. This is to generate electricity for love.

I'd rather you change the author's account, revise it, and post it in the third person.

"One Piece: Becoming the King of the World from the Age of Rocks" If you are short on books, you can read this book. It is a very interesting and novel pirate fanfic. This book stretches the timeline to before Rocks attacks the Valley of the Gods. The protagonist Li Yuan has his own domineering body-tempering secret "Sword God Body Tempering Art". Rise up in the Rocks Pirates, become a cadre, and plunder the property of the Celestial Dragons in the Valley of Gods. After the Battle of the Valley of the Gods, participate in the New World Hegemony and occupy Wano Country. Become the world's greatest swordsman and dominate the new world with Whitebeard and others. The protagonist has four children, Stephens-Gane, Wei Zhuang, Esdeath, and Chi Tong, all of whom are great swordsmen and compete with Hawkeye and Red Hair...

First person. It's really uncomfortable. I haven't seen this in a long time.

The system manipulates the protagonist to do things, which is a bit indifferent.

Why don't you just write that the protagonist has Dante's abilities?