Ninja World: Insect Princess Beginning in Konoha

What I wrote before is quite good. I started to develop Zerg technology and my teammates were considered to be online in IQ. Then I suddenly started to feed 💩 after more than 170 pictures. I am still washing out the comments below in order to wake up my teammates. I ended up reading more than a dozen pictures in a row and still feeding 💩. What a waste of time. Decisively abandon the pit, in order to avoid future generations looking at the waste of money and time, leave a message here

I stayed up late to finish reading it. The dozens of chapters leading up to the ending are still great, but the ending has a lot of problems. Be warned in advance that what you say may not be pleasant to your ears. I have also read the author's defense, and I have nothing to say about the theme and setting. My personal opinion is that there is insufficient preparation for the character's transformation, and at the end, the story setting is forced on the character's mouth, and the character's arc is not shown. Moreover, the ending with a big pattern at the end is very weak to be reasonable. Specifically, one is that Chong Ji's behavior violates human common sense and lacks sufficient foreshadowing and explanation. And when readers read the chapters with the climax of the conflict at the end, they all remember the setting that the dead can be resurrected. We say that a normal person can recover from a broken finger, so is it normal for a person to cut someone he cares about and remain indifferent? The character expression of Chong Ji before her death almost turned 180°, and the emotional baggage she owed cannot be made up by letting the character talk about her mental journey and throw away the settings. At least give some foreshadowing, and highlight the conflicting concerns (the ninja world has become a big cage) in the process of revealing the suspense in the middle. In this way, when the insect princess talks about her inner journey, there will be an immediate recall. It will be unexpected and reasonable to foreshadow a few more layers of basic climactic part of the cage theory. It can also intersperse several memories in the middle to deepen the image of the growth part before World War II, and give clues to the conflicting ideas instead of being the Riddler. After all, if you don't deepen your impression after reading the text until the end, why don't readers read the author's outline... The second is the ending with a huge pattern. Readers are emotional creatures, right? To directly restart the world and not talk about the issue of the Ship of Theseus, this actually denies the meaning of the existence of the previous story of more than a million words, right? If a large number of knives are fired slowly and slowly, and then given to a desperate foreign enemy, the tone of the story must be brought to the end first, and then restarted for relief, then it will still be convincing, but then one must try to retain the traces of the character's existence, or recall a few scenes after the restart, so that the reboot can be said to be without regrets. Insect Princess's motive for restarting the world? It's too inhuman, too divorced from the description of humanity before the Third World War, and it's seriously unconvincing. The reboot process was too rushed, and Tsunade's character arc was not established. The character suddenly realized... Where was the opportunity? What about the transformation process? What about ambivalence in transition? The author's defense is clear, but in the final analysis, readers are not tapeworms in the author's belly, nor reasoning robots. Readers are emotional creatures. Let's talk about this pattern. We usually say that the environment is composed of individuals. How can the characters work hard to change the environment and realize their ideals by impressing people? This is called people-oriented, and people can conquer nature, right? Insect Girl's violent restart of the world to solve conflicts is generally called deus ex machina. In terms of the format, I was too lazy to answer the test paper, so I simply burned the test paper and made a new one myself.

After Tsunade came to power, especially the recent plot is really hard to explain Readers basically stand on the side of the protagonist when reading books, especially readers of fan fiction. I don't know whether the author knew it at the beginning or not. Anyway, he is on the side of the protagonist, so the book seems to show that the reader and the author are on the same side. Then there is the current situation. A strong enemy (Tsunade) is forcibly arranged for the protagonist, who is also from the same force. Although many people know this, there should be many people who are interested in internal fighting, especially the protagonist who holds the Encyclopedia. The internal fighting caused by the situation is very disgusting, and the recent plot is a bit like Yue Fei (I have thought about it for a long time and it feels similar to this), it is not very comfortable to watch I think the main differences are these two aspects.

This is the best Naruto novel I've ever read on Qidian, bar none. Whether the plot is reasonable or the characters are likable, this book has it all. It's pretty good on a daily basis too. Another point is that there is no male protagonist, and there is no romance with boys.

This is a full-time author. None of the donkeys in the production team have this speed😳

It is reasonable and smooth, with not many poisonous points, but the first twenty or so chapters are bland and stable without much story fluctuation and interest. The single protagonist's visual interaction with the supporting characters is not high and there is not much emotional emotion (it takes away the reader's patience and is suitable for scanning); fortunately, there are small conflicts and emotional bonds in the subsequent chapters, and the protagonist also shows an interesting underbelly. The plot is also compact and fluctuating, which greatly increases the readability. Overall, it is relatively slow to heat up, which is very good.

It's a good new book, but the details and descriptions of the protagonist are a bit uninteresting. Occasionally, I was a little confused and a little confused, but overall it's still very good. The work is novel and unique. It's not very similar to other Naruto books, but it's probably because of this difference that this work stands out! In addition, the plot about Naruto can also be adjusted appropriately and changed. After all, the protagonist is a time traveler and knows the future, so it is okay to change some regrets in Naruto. As long as it does not affect the main line, there will be no problem. Finally, I hope the author will update it soon! I am still very optimistic about you, and I hope you can write it into a good book, and you can also read more articles about male and female protagonists to learn the detailed description and characterization of the protagonists, but you must also have a sense of proportion. Don't blindly believe my words and change the outline and some themes later, thereby ruining the entire work. Thank you!

There are about 800 chapters so far, and I have read half of it The pace in the early stage is quite slow, but it is better to be steady, and the girls can handle it quite well, and it is a little sweet but not greasy. The first micro-groove is that after becoming a disciple of Mito, he suddenly changed from being incompetent in everything to being able to do everything. The swordsmanship learned in the clan before was developed step by step with no special bonuses, but when he arrived in Mito, he was taught sealing and medical treatment. As a result, he learned to be proficient in various shield techniques, knowing all kinds of skills, omniscient and omnipotent. But fortunately, the pace is slow enough to allow for mistakes and can be blocked. The second micro-groove is that the various characters are written with more and more deviations, sensory personalities, etc. Although they are sacrifices to promote the development of their own stories, the price is the reduction of the taste of Naruto. Fan fiction is about immersion and ready-made settings. Just like the Three Kingdoms, what Lu Bu wanted to see was the British dominance, and what Zhuge Liang wanted to see was to make a decision and then act, with a plan in mind, but the result turned out to be weak chickens, which is not what it is. But fortunately, the offset in the front is not too big (such as the cute Mito, the big brother White Fang and the little puppy), and the integration of the plot in the back is not too... Particularly big. The extent is probably that the author collapsed, but the fact is that it has not collapsed, and it can be repeated again, and it may not necessarily collapse The third point, this is a bit problematic, the mid-term writing is recommended for famous names. It's not that you can't write, but generally writing this kind of writing is about history and change, especially this kind of fundamental change from the bottom of society. This is a test of literary skills, and the opponent is strong. Some books even describe this thing in its entirety, how to advance step by step, and how to fight wits and strategies. So I came to see it with expectation and found out, that's it, it fell down as soon as I pushed it. The reason is understandable. The land is only that big, the body shape of the daimyo is rigid enough, and the writing power is insufficient (I want to write, I have to construct a lot, but I try my best to express it, which is a little more normal), etc., So when stacked together, the upper limit of the revolutionary elements of this book is just that big. The perfect score is 80, but the opponent's perfect score is 120. It's a weak fight against a strong one. You should hold back a little longer, make more mistakes, or play from the back. The first move that comes with one push is really almost meaningless. Conclusion: Because it opens slowly at the beginning, it is relatively difficult to enter if you want to watch it quickly and enjoy it. And the offset has a certain impact on those who watch doujins In the daimyo stage, it also has a certain impact on those who watch fandom and watch hard. The test The truth has been tested, The first grade is hard to say, and the second grade has nothing wrong with it. After all, the number of words is here, and those that are less than a million can't expand on any details, and they are gone in one volume. Compared with the mirrored fan fiction, it has an advantage (I forgot the name, I pushed it from that one, too) (I just watched half of it), the advantage is that the other side is more broken than this one In addition, the author still has some foundation and ideas. After further accumulation, he should be able to create a book that is famous for being out of the circle in a small channel like Zonghua. The basic foundation is already there, and it is just a matter of polishing.

Snake Ji, it's okay

Meiji in normal state

Aburame Miji

I'm on a male channel, right? Female protagonist?

Taking the StarCraft Zerg route, all the soldiers are available, and the protagonist transforms into the Queen of Blades. Go directly to Leviathan.

What the hell is written at the end, it's just disgusting. It's not unreasonable for grades to get worse. I read online articles just for comfort, not for you to turn the so-called love and passion in my heart into a pile of stuff in my head.

The story opens up from a great angle, and it is as good as the original work. It perfectly solves the problem of my monthly ticket direction this month. The main character, Chong Ji, is neither big nor small, her character design is very delicious, and her occasional domineering behavior is even more crazy to win praise. As for the shortcomings, there are probably two points at the moment. One point is that the three generations are too marginalized and their skills are a bit poor for the setting; the second point is that the strength of the three princesses is a bit beyond the standard, each of them is not inferior to the level of the Sannin. The whole style of Konoha is a bit wrong, which makes people worry about whether the villains are enough... To put it bluntly, I am worried about the collapse or failure in the future. Based on the current progress alone, there is a faint feeling that Konoha is not artificial enough. Even if the demigods are strengthened, it is difficult to say how long they can be used. Once Mr. Madara is gone, there is really no useful villain in this era. Nagato obviously doesn't want to leave the novice village, and the style of several gangsters from the Otsutsuki clan is too sloppy... The villain is too weak, and I have no choice. I don't know how the author plans to deal with this problem, whether to suppress the protagonist, strengthen the villain, or open a new map... This determines whether this book ends as the best Naruto fanfic, or it is an anticlimactic and refreshing novel. (emmm, to be honest, no matter which one of the above I choose, the old bookworm will be quite disappointed. Only different things can stimulate the appetite of the old bookworm. (↑A picky fake fan with just two monthly passes. Jpg

Let's just say that the writing failed. In the end, the battle in the Kingdom of Whirlpool with predictable results has made people no longer interested in watching it. In addition, the character of the protagonist is actually not likable. After traveling to this world for so long, he still has not integrated into this society (this problem is common in fan fiction). He has always been an outsider's God's perspective, and It has a sense of nobility that says, "I am a time traveler who does not have the same experience as the natives." "Do you think I traveled through this world to feel its blood? No, I am just here to help the poor." This kind of dimensionality reduction attack is too conspicuous, and it has nothing to do with the collapse of combat power in the later period. I don't agree with Sandai being described as an indecisive coward, because at this time he is not the senile old man in the original work, and there is no need or reason to tolerate and give in. He is in his prime at this time and is the strongest. If he replaces it with a resolute and decisive character, it can actually be better contrasted with the original work. This contrast can more emotionally resonate with readers. (Recent chapters have discussed whether the rescue of the country of whirlpool is really because of the anger, and I will return the third generation) Moving forward to Uchiha Madara, the battle with Madara is one of the most exciting parts of the battle in this book. It is enjoyable to watch, although it cannot withstand scrutiny. It's funny to say it. Let's not talk about the possibility of a nuclear explosion. With such severe nuclear radiation, no one except civilians died. Of course, in order to justify his theory, the author spent several chapters specifically buffing the chakra attribute to combat nuclear radiation.                                                                                                In the later stage, the ability of the protagonist group has collapsed to the point that people can't understand the skills. I can understand the words you describe the skills, but I really can't picture it in my mind] Then I pretended to be aloof while watching the drama of several "clowns" from the Hokage troupe.        ，…         quan？ Throughout the whole book, except for the hero Uchiha Madara, there is no man who can stand up to the word hero, which seems really wrong. I followed the protagonist all the way, and the comments he gave ranged from the fact that this book is worth ordering to the fact that it is tasteless and it is a pity to discard it. It's a pity to feed the birds

In fact, the writing collapsed in the later period. In fact, it was okay until I went to the land of fire extinguishing. After that, I really let myself go. You can see how bad the writing in this part is if you look at how much the monthly ticket ranking has dropped.

Well, if the main character were male, I think the results would be better than they are now. Why read novels? In order to experience a life that I cannot live through. Some people can take on the role of the female protagonist, while others cannot. This is inevitable.

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Uchiha Chiri

Hinata Hitomi

How can I put it, the more I look at it, the more unpleasant it becomes. Whether it is controlled by insect eggs or killing all men, women, old and children, my outlook on life is distorted. I can't stand it anymore. I have a disgusting feeling like eating a good meal and suddenly eating shit.

I read 300 chapters in one go and made some comments. Let me talk about the advantages of the article first First of all, the author's writing style is good, which is why I can read it in one breath. Secondly, the plot is also good, at least until chapter 300, it seems quite enjoyable. My personal dissatisfaction with the article mainly comes from the modern science that the author continues to introduce. The golden finger that the author set for the protagonist at the beginning can be summarized as the will of the insect swarm. Simply put, the protagonist can control the insects with his mind. Because of this ability, the protagonist can inherit all the insects in the Aburame family, and he will naturally become the leader of the clan. Seeing this, my expectation for this article is that the protagonist uses his abilities to cultivate various bugs with different functions, or seizes some blood inheritance limits, and continues to grow in strength; or he uses the mutation speed of the bugs to engage in physical evolution. But later on, maybe because he felt that living things have limits after all, the author introduced a lot of modern science and related ninjutsu, such as gene sequencing, suffocating barriers, and finally this nuclear explosion. I feel that doing this is introducing a new cheat, and one of the characteristics of technological cheats is that it is difficult to restrict their users. If you use these scientific principles, why haven't others figured it out before? And if you figure it out, it will be easy to hand it over to your subordinates. It's a bit too powerful. The other is a bit "super travel", just like building a modern political system in ancient times. I feel that fan fiction is very dependent on the original work. If you don't like the original work, no one will come to watch it. I come here just to watch the ninjutsu fights and the original characters. If I want to watch science, why not science fiction? I feel that the introduction of this new system has destroyed the original atmosphere. Another thing, from a personal point of view, I feel that the author's description of technical terms is very confusing. This is just my subjective feeling. I do not know whether the author has received relevant scientific training, and whether the relevant scientific knowledge written in the article can ensure complete accuracy. When I see this kind of scientific terminology explanation in an article, I will instinctively think about it, and if it is inconsistent with my knowledge, it will be difficult to read the following article, which is a great damage to the reading experience.

It feels like an extraordinary world, and the author has to explain it clearly from a scientific perspective. It's not that it's not right, but the problem is that I read online articles without thinking. Isn't it enough to be happy? If I have the time to sort out the logic, wouldn't it be nice to write a few paragraphs and post her?

It's really a bit disrespectful of you to write a Naruto fanfic.

I saw that the author in the comment area was curious about why he had lost his subscription, and I felt itchy for a while. Since the Land of Fire, the author has entered the stage of keyboard politics, talking about how it is good to do this, why it is not good to do the original way, what is the best, and looking down on the original thing. Author, you have to remember that you are mainly an author, a recorder, a creator god, not a commentator or speaker or politician. What you have to do is to interpret a world. Maybe the world in your mind is not big, only the circle around the protagonist, but recording it and letting people follow your perspective to watch everything you see is enough. In fact, anything can be done directly, and there is no need to explain why you are doing it. The reader will not understand the reason for a while, and there is no need for any special explanation. This can slightly increase the sunk cost of the reader and allow the reader to get the joy of decryption. Unless you are a Riddler, the clues will not be complete. Even if you want to reduce the difficulty for the reader, please do not write an instruction manual. Even if you are an author, even if you are a game planner, "Are you teaching me how to do something?" Everyone will have this mentality, unless that person knows nothing about the current matter and needs someone to guide, but it only needs initial guidance, because most people hate it most when someone is around to tell them what to do. For example, in games, there is only a tutorial at the beginning, and the tutorial only has basic operations. It all depends on the player to play well. There are a thousand Hamlets for a thousand people. When reading a novel, what you think about the content depends entirely on what the reader thinks and has nothing to do with the author. If you can't help but want to explain and explain and are afraid that readers will not understand, you can put your thoughts in the comment area of ​​the chapter or even go to the group. This can not only vent your desire for expression, but also let a small number of readers who can't think clearly understand the author's thoughts. It can also make the content of the novel refreshing and give readers who read quietly a comfortable reading experience. You can even shout in the Zhangshuo comment area group, "Everyone here is rubbish. My goal in writing is this and that." This will inspire a bunch of bored readers who are tired of reading to start a verbal battle, which may even increase the popularity. It is better than writing it in a novel and making some readers who persist in reading it get bored and abandon the book. Don't worry that writing in the Zhangshuo comment area group will affect your grades, because for example, I concentrate on reading novels. I will read them when I can't understand them or when I see exciting and interesting parts. It won't affect subsequent viewing, as long as there are no spoilers. Other fandom authors, eunuch authors, etc. Are noisy and scolding on Weibo, but their novels are still followed by a lot of people. Those novels that have been out of print for several years are still begging the authors to update them. Isn't it because their novels are well written? However, there are not many authors with such pure novel content. Looking at all novels, excluding the elements of hype, the purer and cleaner the novel will be, the more popular it will be, whether in person or online. This is also a problem that exists in online novels nowadays. They are all about the word count. How much does it cost for a word count? Is there much reward after writing it? How many people will write a subscription? If there are too many people who have subscribed to it, won't they be like the great author who publishes physical comics and adapted anime and TV series? Why don't you worry about losing your subscription if there is too much water? Will dropping the subscription cause me to lose motivation and lead to eunuchs? Will the eunuch lose his character and no one will read the new book? Is it because no one reads the new book? Is it because there are no old readers for the newcomers? If there are no old readers, will there be no subscription? If you don't subscribe, do you still have the motivation to write novels and become an author? Don't talk about the original contract. Who cares about this? What's the point of caring if you don't become a big boss. There is no point in trying to make money and mess around, unless you are like me and just want to live. -------------- In addition, to be honest, I don't know why the author is so confident in sustainable development, and is keen to repeatedly say that the Otsutsuki Sacred Tree is not as sustainable as the Zerg, and what a sense of superiority that lasts for thousands of years. Just mention it once to clarify your point of view. After going back and forth several times, I couldn't help but jump out and refute it. Let me explain my point of view first. It is a simple comparison of three stages: the early, middle and late stages. I will not discuss any technical value. After all, not everyone in Otsutsuki is fighting idiots like Kaguya. For the convenience of calculation, all resources are the same as energy, and they are restored to absorb the wandering energy of the universe such as solar energy. The sacred tree takes the example of completely absorbing the entire planet, and Kaguya's kind that was interrupted halfway does not count. Maybe there will be losses in the absorption of the sacred trees, but the main aspect is to plunder them all and continue to develop. External conditions, environmental energy will not be restored or will be restored. Environmental energy will be restored: (recovery +500) Take a single planet as an example (current energy 5000) In the early stage, the sacred tree plunders all the energy at once, enters the burst period, and begins to wait for the environmental energy to recover, except for the sacred tree All other creatures cannot use energy (Sacred tree energy 5000) (Environmental energy 0) (Biological energy 0) Insect Girl absorbs the upper limit of energy that can be used in a small area of the environment, enters the incubation period, waits for the environmental energy to recover and continues to absorb, All creatures can still obtain energy (Insect Girl energy 100) (Environmental energy 3900) (Biological energy 1000) Early conclusion, based on the comparison of usable energy, the divine tree crushes victory Mid-term, The sacred tree always has energy to still obtain energy for the early stage. Waiting for the environmental energy to recover, some creatures can obtain energy (Sacred tree energy 5000) (Environmental energy 500) (Biological energy 0) Insect Girl expands the absorption range and enters Entering the development stage, the internal energy circulates, waiting for the environmental energy to recover and continue to be absorbed. All living things can still obtain energy (Insect Girl Energy 1000) (Environmental Energy 3500) (Biological Energy 1000) Interim Conclusion , based on the comparison of usable energy, the gap between Chongji and the Divine Tree has become smaller, and the Divine Tree has a crushing victory In the later stage, The Divine Tree always has energy to obtain energy for the early stage, and can be planted again to absorb environmental energy, and creatures can obtain energy (Sacred Tree Energy 500 0) (Environmental Energy 4000) (Biological Energy 1000) The insect's absorption range reaches the limit and enters the cycle period. The internal energy circulates and waits for the environmental energy to recover and continue to absorb. All living creatures can still obtain energy (Insect Queen energy 5000) (Environmental energy 4000) (Biological energy 1000) Later conclusion, Insect Queen equals the sacred tree, the two sides have reached a balance, and then there will be a cycle of the early, middle and late stages, and the energy level continues to rise until it exceeds the limit of the planet. External energy will not be restored: Later, Sacred Tree Energy 5000 Environmental Energy 0 Biological Energy 0 Insect Girl Energy 3900 Environmental Energy 200 Biological Energy 900 [At least 200 Environmental Energy is required to achieve the energy cycle, except If it is not Chong Ji who possesses all the energy, or Chong Ji is the carrier of energy circulation, then Chong Ji energy is 5000 (temporarily spending 1000 as biological energy) Environmental energy 0 Biological energy 0 (1000) Conclusion, the energy on both sides is equal, no creature survives in the sacred tree, and everyone in Chong Ji survives. Once the war begins, in order to ensure that she is undefeated, Chong Ji needs to absorb everyone's energy to fight against the sacred tree. To sum up, if everything is plundered, everyone will die, and then slowly develop again, and then it will be completely empty again in the big cycle stage. Continuous development, everyone will live and work in peace and contentment, but if the sacred tree suddenly starts a war, Chongji may not be able to recover all the energy in time. (Creatures such as Tsunade that can cause damage to the sacred tree are classified as insect energy, because they do not need to be absorbed by the insect during war. Those that cannot cause damage to the sacred tree are classified as biological energy. They cannot play a role in war and need to be absorbed by the insect.) The reason why sustainable development is good is that it is people-oriented. If people want to live, the number of people alive will increase. The total energy of the environment is limited. Perhaps it can be restored through solar energy and the like. Recovery, but that is very slow. Resources need to evolve and transform before they can be used by people, and people use them with losses. In the short term, losses cannot be re-evolved into natural resources, which will cause resource deficits and the number of people will decrease. Only when losses and evolution reach a balance will they enter a comprehensive stable state. That is also the beginning of rigidity, unless external resources enter, such as developing other planets or improving the absorption efficiency of wandering energy in the universe. It doesn't make sense to say so much, so let's leave it at that. This is my humble opinion, corrections are welcome, no trolls are welcome.

After watching it again, I still can't stand Tsunade's Rebellion. The first part is exciting, but the second part is a mess. 😰

The first 200 or so chapters of this book are all very well written. The pacing of the plot and the characterization are very good, and it is a pleasure to watch. Then as the plot progressed to the middle, it started to become more and more boring, with endless sermons, science settings, and battles going back and forth from several perspectives. I never told you the complete story every time. The previous chapter was fought over there for a while, and the next chapter was fought here, and then the next chapter was played in a different place. It cycled back and forth two or three times, with a large setting description interspersed in the middle. Well, it is finally over. There was no break for two chapters, so I moved on to another place. Just like this, I wrote hundreds of chapters and more than a million words. It's so watery that even looking at the specific depictions of anti-human biological warfare, I don't even feel sick to my stomach. Finally, World War II is over, World War III is over, and it's time to wrap things up. The author suddenly suffered from a literary illness and gave everyone a makeover in the last 20%. Friends who have been friends for decades suddenly turned against each other. Billions of lives, the survival and development of civilization, the inertia of more than ten years in power, the original plan, oh, it was just to play, but to fight. It is also packaged with various lofty concepts. Some readers left comments for him, saying that it was strange no matter how they read it, and the author explained seriously that it was all reasonable. Break out of the mess you set up and look at the entire plot. Is this really reasonable? Then there can only be one. I suddenly fell ill and fell into my own logic, unable to extricate myself. What did the author actually experience in the process from 2022 to 2003? The writing style changed a lot in the first, middle and later periods. The plot arrangement and rhythm are even more different. If you don't find someone to write for you, it can only be because of some major changes in real life.

Let's have more sweet daily life. The previous article is quite good, but I didn't subscribe to the 800 chapters just to see the self-pleasure and the darkness of human nature at the end. There are no shameless, greasy and crooked chapters. What's the difference between your restarting the ending and the meteorite killing the protagonist? Tmd I want to read Lily Post and then the unknown biotechnology and finally lead the children to make the whole family happy ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

You mean the three little ones are gone?