Blade of Konoha

Chapter 35 in progress, food + Advantages: 1. The author's characteristics are that he added a bold and excellent second-tier family setting that was not mentioned much in the original work, and set the protagonist as a family genius, which is more fresh than the poorly written Senju Uchiha 2. After all, she is a female author, and her descriptions of many aspects of daily life and emotions are more delicate than most male authors 3. The fighting scenes are also well written and very visual 4. The protagonist of the Inuzuka family, extra points for super unpopular themes (personal preference) 5. Dogs, a lot of dogs (personal preference) Disadvantages: 1. Extremely seedy 2. Although the author's writing style is not bad... But he has a very strange taste and strong taste. To be honest, I abandoned the last book because of this. Although this book looks better now, it still appears quite often... 3. Succeed or fail, if the family's secret skills are really so bad, there is no reason to still be a second-tier family... But this is also a no-brainer. If the small family is written according to the original work, there is really no way to survive In short, there are less and less Naruto stories to read these days, please read and cherish it

Ink stains, and the depiction of male and female characters is very unbalanced. The author thinks too femininely, and there are not many chapters that are written from a male perspective. It feels like the concubines of the Republic of China are controlling the entire country.

In fact, the writing is okay, but I was disgusted by Lin's story. She arranged a marriage for someone out of nowhere. Who is disgusting? Because I have people like this around me and I know how disgusting this kind of thing can be. Don't you feel it when you look at it, but this is very difficult for the person involved.

Is it okay to call a pig's foot a real dog?

Writing about Naruto is so bad, it's purely based on the popularity of Sabaya's name, and the whole story is nonsense, like a book written by AI.

Female authors and female readers, the people in the comments section are either female or gay.

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The first three chapters of Real nb are really messy

I just read the previous chapters and saw that the idea of ​​returning my husband's body was a bit exaggerated. Life and death is a big deal, even civilians cannot refuse to give. A ninja died fighting for the village. If the top management of Konoha refuses to give the body, this is already shaking the foundation. The jounin is already the backbone elite of a ninja village, let alone a ninja clan or a clan leader. Wasn't the creation of Konoha a union of ninja clans from the beginning? This can be considered a small shareholder. Looking at the living conditions of the protagonist, mother and son, it seems that they have committed some heinous crime of treason and refused to collect the body. Is it necessary to set it up like this?

That's awesome. You treat the protagonist like a dog at the beginning. Are you afraid that the readers will be too immersed in the story or that they won't be too immersed in the story? As for funny humor, I can only say that novels and comics are expressed in different ways.

I would like to sincerely give you a suggestion, don't give out knives casually. The first few books are really good, but they are all books that are discarded after giving out knives.

Many people are attracted by the title of the book, but after reading the introduction, they are not interested. To be honest, if you write directly about Taijutsu and Yujiro Fanma, you may be much better than you, the so-called man and dog with teeth and teeth. Nowadays, many people like to watch muscular guys 💪🏻 Pushing and smashing everything, you are really too girly when you write about a handsome little girl.

Without Nohara Rin, I would be a god. I don't know how to describe it. I feel that Rin's level is too low and not worthy of this novel 🙂 I don't know what everyone thinks. Personal opinions are welcome to discuss.

I have a premonition that it will end when I am underage. The rhythm of the ending is bad. I want to quit.

Stop writing about your little theater, and quickly develop the protagonist's environment and the protagonist's main plot. Also, you added Konoha Saba, so you could just turn the main character Norma into Saba. Although the circle of hot dog people is small, the memes are widely spread. It can still attract readers.

I have only watched Bug Princess. Although the plot is inexplicable after the end of World War II, it is still very interesting. I look forward to watching more.

This is how Chongji made me give up This is how it happened again

'Bird, why can it fly? ' 'Because they must fly into the sky! ' 'Threats from outside the sky come from the stars and rivers, and only free birds can escape from certain destruction' 'My dear, do you still dream? ' 'Dream about those people you killed, those people who died because of you' 'But I can't do it anymore! ' Obito looked at his beloved, but there was no one beside him 'In the future, I will become the Ten-Tails Jinchuuriki and let everyone in the ninja world euthanize. They will spend their lives in dreams, and then, I will recover all the chakra' 'Obito, are you... Crazy? ' 'My beloved, do you have a better choice? ' 'How could anyone do that kind of thing! ' 'If it were you, that would be fine! ' 'Everyone will help you, pamper you and trust you' 'Is it because you are a good person that you can do it, or because you can do it, that's why you are a good person' 'What you can do, you say others can't do it' 'How arrogant! Dear man! ' 'Obito, do you want to die! ? ' 'If you want to do it, just do it! Anyway, whatever you do is right.' The long black-haired Obito still had his back to him, and the white-short-haired lover showed Obito the basic tooth-tooth gesture 'I have found what I want to do, and I am willing to fight for it for the rest of my life.' 'If you don't do it, I will leave. ' (My dear, I have always liked you, but I feel that I have always been living in your shadow) (Whether it is Rin, Kakashi, Minato... Sometimes I even wonder if you are too awesome to take away my story) 'But, I am righteous! ' My beloved watched Obito's figure spin and disappear, the teeth gradually taking shape in his hand 'My beloved, you have always been my best friend'

In just 45 chapters, five heroines, stallions?

The subject matter is stitch monsters and beast control in the world of Naruto, but the content has too many bugs. Not to mention other things, I wrote more than 60 chapters from the year when the protagonist was 5 to 6 years old, of which the plot at school accounted for 10 chapters. Most of them are about the protagonist sleeping in class every day, and then being called by the teacher to stand behind him or go to the door or outside the window. Anyway, it is endless punishment. I don't understand why I am writing this? You already have avatars, why not let them go to class, and you can sleep well at home if you want, and practice better if you want to. The most important thing is that his golden finger is still a native golden finger in the ninja world. The talent of being able to communicate with animals comes from the Inuzuka clan. It was passed down from the son of the son of Sage of Six Paths. How high can the upper limit of this thing be?

It feels like the heroine is your comfort zone

Actually it's not that much. The early plot of Naruto is slightly better because there is a big editor arranging the plot and setting up the character for him. In the middle and later stages, the editor was responsible for other projects. Kishimoto himself is not very smart, so he started copying the plot of Legend of the Divine Weapon and Fengyun, but he couldn't understand the plot, and his various plots, characters, etc., All started to stretch his legs. I think Danzo just wants to take the blame. Specially created at a later stage. In order to make up for the bugs in the three generations of characters. There are too many bugs in the three generations of characters. In the early stage, I thought he was a good person, but in the later stage, I felt that he couldn't be any darker. And the previous plot setting of Shippuden was that he was the strongest Hokage. The more he drew later, the more his combat power collapsed. As a result, he almost became the most profitable. So don't talk too much about whether Naruto's plot is reasonable or not, because the case itself is stitched together. He himself may not have even figured out why others write stories in this way, so he sewed other people's mature stories into his story. But there was no good editor to arrange it for him. That's why Naruto's problems, conflicts and regrets are so big. But his pictures are really good. Hand of God.

After reading so many Naruto novels and playing Naruto games for several years, the writing of this book is really good. Good luck to the author.

No? Are there so many heroines in the supporting cast just to enrich the plot?

If anyone is still following me, let me know how old the protagonist is.

Does anyone know about Tiantian Zhuan written by the author? What is the name specifically?

A rare masterpiece among Naruto fanfics, the more interesting it becomes later on

Very well written😍

It's not that I don't understand. Isn't it possible to be holy by writing about the protagonist? Just give it to Kakashi and it's over. Do you need so many twists and turns? A big boss can help you?

Are you still writing the book on Black Ninja Techniques?