The Whole World Comes to the World

Overall, this book is pretty good, with some enjoyable moments. The only part that made me feel a little bit toxic was when Tang Ziyun opened the pulse of the protagonist. The protagonist's sister got emotional for no reason, which made me feel numb. Even if the protagonist played poker with Tang Ziyun, it wouldn't be like this. . . There is also the value of force, which is really too low. If you say it is medium force, it is okay, but if it is high force, you are underestimating high force. It's really unqualified that the strongest level 7 monster can be directly killed by a nuclear bomb. The author can write that he first launched a nuclear bomb that hit the monster and only caused limited damage, and then fired more than a dozen nuclear bombs in succession to kill the monster. This force value is normal. Then the strength of martial arts training is too low. Only the 10th level martial artist has 1 ton of strength, and only the 5th level martial artist can surpass Tyson. Author, you are writing a novel, you don't need to consider the reality, it will only look good to the readers if you write it from a high point. A martial artist's strength is not high, but he must at least destroy a building over 50 meters in height with one blow. Only in this way can he be worthy of the title of Gao Wu.

This book is a little bit intellectual, and using technology to reach the world of immortality makes me drunk. Isn't this a slap in the author's own face? It means that the previous plot is useless. The plot that can be summarized in one sentence is so watery? Me, I build the Iron Man Nano Armor at the beginning and then travel to the world of immortality to cultivate immortality? You are so damn mentally retarded that you have the technology to cultivate hundreds of thousands of years of immortality? Directly hand-hammer Gundam tells those primitive people who is the big brother and the right way. Research their so-called immortal gene, directly create a serum and give it an injection to become an immortal In short, in the world of science and technology, those with low IQs will cultivate immortality, while those with Tony's IQ will send immortals to the operating table for research within ten years

The writing in the early stages was okay, and the pacing was okay. I hope there won't be a whole brainless villain who pretends to be a slap in the face later on.

Don't brag about Wu Zetian too much. Among all the emperors in the past, the advantages and disadvantages are too obvious. Although the politics is good, the military is 0 points. Now when I see someone bragging about Wu Zetian, I get upset.

This system is too ink-intensive and talks too much

I didn't want to post anything at first, but the good modern times suddenly went to ancient times. The more I watch, the more fascinated I become. It jumped too fast to say anything. The style of writing has also become traditional.

It feels pretty good, I've invested, keep going!

When the protagonist arrives at Xuanyin Sect, isn't he afraid that he failed to rescue his sister and was secretly killed?

Gao Wu, who wasted money on clothes, became rich by selling cloth and making clothes.

I want the protagonist to take my family away like this. Originally, the protagonist arranged for his sister to have a heart transplant, but then a woman came and took his sister away. It would be really good-looking if the protagonist directly wiped out that woman and her power.

Why not change the first chapter? ? How can you just call the system outright? Isn't this a proper way to dissuade readers?

Look at the introduction, how come the whole emperor was resurrected?

As long as you are happy with what you wrote.

. . . It feels like the plot that originally took at least one or two hundred chapters has started in more than 40 chapters, which is too fast. Considering that the protagonist is still a novice, will he become a tech stream in the future?

Is this like Lu Yao? Hurry up and update, we are ready for full booking.

The writing style is a bit too cool and doesn't fit into the plot. Everything else is fine.