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Real water! I came across this book by chance. The first half is very exciting. I went to see the Great Man of the Northern Song Dynasty while waiting for the update. Just like this book, the beginning is exciting, but later on... It's so hard to jump to the finale after 400 chapters. There are other books with the same treatment: Can I Improve Proficiency and Sword Soldiers? I won't update these books at all. I'll take a look at them after the finale. I hope this isn't like this, I really can't stand it anymore!

To be honest, I seriously doubt that if the writer changed, where did Cao Ying go in these chapters? It was only after everyone's appeal that Yi Niang showed up. The loyal duo before they became successful.

I just want to live and live well. Yang Xuanru thought But the world is like a forest where the jungle prevails, but it is covered with a layer of rules. More greedy than the forest and more arrogant than the forest. I have no choice. I can only be crueler than him, more cruel than him. I just want the world to be less bad. I can only hope that people will not live like dogs. I can only rebel No, it is to rebel.

Jazz has a problem. You said that you have a treasure trove of knowledge like Suzaku, but industrialization cannot be realized. Can't you get some black powder and a powerful weapon? ? ? No, it can't be industrialized. I don't use any industrial things. I might as well use them as Shen An. Then you arrange for Suzaku to have a chicken feather 😤 just to answer Yang Gou's questions in class! ! ! I'm really convinced. Time-travel dramas have modern knowledge. As long as weapons of mass destruction are not necessary, then all kinds of sadism 😅 Sir, you don't use them at all.

You say he's cool. He looks okay. You say he's not cool. Chapter 1,000 in Northern Xinjiang is not finished yet. Can you update it soon? I saved a hundred or so for a month and finished reading it.

On the map of Chang'an City in the Tang Dynasty, Wannian County is to the east of Zhuque Street and Chang'an County is to the west.

This work is a classic, with a grand concept, magnificent events, fascinating plot, refined language, and meticulous characterization. It is the chief masterpiece in recent years, but it is too short and tortures people.

If the strength is not much checked, it should be divided into 5 levels (Lin Yayun)>=(Lin Feibao)>(Tu Shang, Yang family monk)>(Two assassins)>(Second child)>(Yang Xuan) Monks like Lin Yayun should be stronger than Lin Feibao or about the same. Lin Feibao's main energy and blood are strong and can kill Yang family monks instantly. Tu's strength has also improved, and he should have been at the level of an assassin before. If you take a closer look, they should be at home The big monk Inner-Lin Yayun Outer-Lin Feibao The monk Inner-Yang family monk, assassin Outer-Tu Shang Introduction Inner-old thief Outer-the second brother Salted fish Yang Xuan The outer family is more suitable for the battlefield, while the inner family may focus on bursts and assassins, and is not suitable for long-term combat. Sir doesn't want to write in detail, so we don't have to worry about it. When the real musket came out, we bought food and shit.

I haven't updated this book for a long time. It's a bit strange. I read The End of the Song Dynasty today and finally found the reason. This book is too gloomy and uncomfortable to read. There is no righteousness in the warehouse and the strangeness of the End of the Song Dynasty. Above.

How fast are your hands? You're ranked fourth even if you don't look at it

I think this book is really good. Really, this is the only genuine book.

How did the usurper who led military coups twice turn into a guessing Emperor Chongzhen? How did he succeed in the palace coup! Of course Chongzhen is not bad, it's just the current situation and his teammates. The Northern Xinjiang army that destroyed Liao and slaughtered Jin occupied the entire Yanyunguan Pass in Hebei Province. Why could it not catch up with the Southern Xinjiang chieftain army composed of a small area of ​​​​Jingchu after moving south! His Royal Highness Li Taizi, King of Qin, whose modern wisdom is comparable to that of Taizong Shimin, seems to have lost his halo after going south. He relies entirely on his opponent's clumsy operation, and pushing horizontally becomes a dream. How did the Southern Zhou Dynasty, which was comparable to the weak Song Dynasty and occupied a small part of the Huaihei, Guangxiang, Yunnan, Guizhou and Jiangnan, survive for more than a hundred years in front of the chieftains of the southern border who could pull hundreds of thousands of barbarian warriors into the pass. Anyway, I don't believe that the Northern Liao Dynasty across the northern border could save it. I don't believe any of the above, I just want to read a cool article that is not blind and reasonable. No need to go into too much detail. Sir, we are not exactly the Emperor Yongle who was in trouble in Fengtian when he went south to meet the fool Li Jinglong (Dou Zhong), nor is it the pig teammate Emperor Chongzhen in the late Ming Dynasty who was surrounded by war (Open the door and the king is coming) , let alone the overlord of Western Chu who was king when he advanced in Guanzhong (Shi Zhongtang was not worthy of being embattled on all sides), nor was Shi Zhongtang who rebelled against An Lushan and Shi Siming who held the elite northern border troops of the Tang Dynasty. After all, the Tang Central Army commanded by Guo Ziyi and Gao Xianzhi was not that bad, and they were all very strong field troops. Yang Xuanzhengshuo also held the elite iron cavalry of the Northern Territory of the Tang Dynasty. His 5,000 black armors destroyed the enemy's front. Mo Dao's army was shattered. The battle in Hulao destroyed the hundreds of thousands of Shidou coalition forces. What happened to the hundreds of thousands of troops! The novel is well written, but we can't write it like this? Can you please make it feel cool? Thousands of troops avoid white robes. Why is it so difficult to go south? It's not difficult to copy pirated versions of Jingkang with an army in hand. Please, make it feel cool. The concubine brother and sister should kneel down and lick her. After all, the old boy is not Xuanzong Longji. Finally, you still have Southern Zhou Dynasty and Xijiang Luoluo. I guess the old boy's last resort is the Xijiang Army?

Lucky numbers.

Just right

It is true that many people are talking about the issue of water. I think some of them are described in detail by the author and are not considered water. Some of them I also think are unnecessary or should be more streamlined.

Ranked first twice in one day

This should be the last volume, right?

When I read a book, I don't make personal attacks. If it's inappropriate, I can make comments, but don't insult others. If there are any shortcomings in my writing, please point them out!

Dear book lovers, I want to say a few words. First of all, I want to make it clear who I am not accusing? I'm just talking about it in a matter-of-fact way 👌A book is like his own child to the author, doesn't he love and cherish it? I have known Jazz for several years and started his writing career from the random title of the first book "The Warehouse"~~~ It can be said that the author of "Rebel" has devoted all his efforts, not to mention having to search for information thoroughly all night long, but also to repeatedly consider the rationality of the article, and to throw away the useless ones and re-conceive them. We all know that today's online article writers are under a lot of pressure. Those who keep saying that you should spend money to read books should be polite. The author is not a god. Of course, when he is talented and quick, he will run out of ideas. When you see that your blood is boiling, you praise it and it is smooth. When Watari explains the ins and outs of something, if you feel bored, just say that the author is wrong 😂 If the book is so long and you don't explain it clearly, then you should say that the author made it up. If you feel you don't like reading a certain chapter, just skip it. Why bother saying those ugly words to hurt the author😔 One more thing: Even though the author is ill, he still ensures that we can read three chapters a day so that we can still have books to read. It is really not easy to be satisfied! Thank you all for liking the author's books, and thank you for your kind criticism of the author. No one is perfect, so please be tolerant to others. 👍(Sir, please don't blame me for exposing your situation without permission. Sorry)

I feel that the author's description of the cavalry battlefield is very rough In the cold weapon era, cavalry was a big killer, and the combat effectiveness of horses and non-horses was completely different. The author used spearmen to fight cavalry. It was a small scale, with no more than thousands of equal troops. Even if there was a formation, it could not withstand a group charge of light cavalry. After all, the impact of the horse was not something you could withstand just standing there with a gun raised. A single horse could kill a piece of people if they rushed in and hit them. Small-scale team battles do not rely on terrain or strategies, and it is a hard fight on the plains. Unless the force is against the sky, the camp can be destroyed by just collision. Basically, light cavalry must have archery skill points. If you are fighting in the plains or flying a kite, they can wipe you out. The situation of the battle is not clear. Pure cavalry teams generally will not charge hard, or else they will suppress the key points. After all, they can solve the problem by shooting, and no one will risk their lives. The quality of cavalry is more than five times that of infantry. The range of the bow is longer than that of the crossbow, one is a projectile and the other is a flat shot Although the opponent is a horse thief and not a regular army, they can afford the horses, so they will not be without a bow In the final analysis, the spear formation and the shield formation do not restrain the cavalry, but the casualties of the charge are too high, and it is not worth exchanging the cavalry for infantry Historical texts are still very detailed, using pure infantry against cavalry, unless they are heavily armored and have a strong commander.

I was tidying up the study room before New Year's Day, and a child dug out a sign to play with - (Warehouse Waist Card). A few years have passed, and Jazz has already published his fourth book. I have been reading books intermittently for two years during the epidemic, but I haven't paid much attention to them. I'm really sorry. Jazz's books are always so interesting. I hope more people will support and subscribe, and I hope they will get better and better!

I have read online novels for many years, but have never written a book review. But the plot of this novel about the so-called Shegu people is really hard to describe. Briefly say a few words based on your own feelings about reading the book, and discuss it with Sir. I have read several previous books by Sir, starting with the Song Dynasty, followed by Warehouse and Tang Dynasty. The first 200 chapters of Warehouse are indeed very disappointing. Considering that this is a historical novel, it is understandable that the writing is not good at the beginning, but the later chapters are still very exciting. Judging from the ending, the open endings of Warehouse and Da Song are acceptable. The ending of Datang is not very satisfactory. A good open ending should leave readers with unfinished thoughts but also have fun thinking about it, such as the flying fox in the snow mountain. But the ending of Datang gives readers a sense of an abrupt end, exhaustion, and difficulty in continuing. Sir himself also thinks that the work of Datang is a bit regretful, and he plans to write an imaginary novel about the Tang Dynasty in his mind. Personally, I am very supportive of it. It was fine before, until the so-called Shegu people plot appeared, and there was a kind of discomfort like a lump in the throat. As the Shegu people are about to receive their lunch boxes, I would like to express my opinions and discuss them with Sir. I rarely read books. I usually wait until the book is finished or almost finished before reading. But I started reading this book around chapter 500-600. What I didn't expect was that by chapter 1250, I still didn't raise the flag to fight against rebellion. What I'm very worried about now is that after raising the flag, I will finish the book directly and have an open ending that fails again. I wish I was worrying too much. I personally think that this novel describes too many branches, and Jazz wants to cover everything, which is inconsistent with the rules of creation, because it will lead to a blurred main line, a slow pace, and may even lead to the main story being overshadowed. Among them, I am personally most dissatisfied with the so-called line of the ancient people. I can understand that Jazz wants to add some difficulties and setbacks to the fight against rebellion. Through the setbacks, he will grow again. The morale of the people in Northern Xinjiang will reach its peak, and raising the flag to fight against rebellion will be successful. If this is the case, it would be better to make the plot of Bei Liao more fleshed out, the war process to be more tortuous, and Prime Minister Lin's rebellion to be of a slightly higher level. The current plot is simply kindergarten level. This kind of writing will be more concise and the main line will be clearer. In fictional novels, there have to be trade-offs. If you have Liao, you don't have to pay for it, right? Judging from the terms of Jazz Single Chapter, the Shegu people are Jurchens, and Asibao is Wanyan Aguda. Because Aguda historically defeated the Liao Kingdom, Asibao also defeated the Liao Kingdom in his rebellion. But I think that the environment of Asibao in Tui Ni is completely different from that of Aguda, and the circumstances faced by the two people are also completely different. Therefore, such a derivation is completely untenable and unbalanced. From a comparison point of view, there are five huge differences between Aguda and Asibao when they rebelled against the Liao Dynasty: First, before Aguda raised his army, through the efforts of three generations of his father and ancestors, he unified all the Jurchen tribes. This is the only way to go. The rise of the grassland nation must begin with the unification of all tribes of the nation. This is true for both Abaoji and Temujin. Because in the process of unification, huge improvements can be obtained in three aspects, prestige, experience in political struggle, and experience in military struggle. But Asibao did not have this process. Secondly, in 1113 and 1114 AD before Aguda launched his army, he succeeded Dubo Jilie and Jurchen Dubo and was canonized as Jiedu envoy by Emperor Tianzuo. This shows that Aguda was already a well-deserved leader of the Jurchens before he raised his army. It is completely different from the control that Asibao used to seize power before the formation. Third, it can be said that Agu started his army in the summer and autumn of 1114, or after the establishment of the Jin Kingdom in 1115. But no matter which time it was, Aguda, who was born in 1068 AD, was already in his 40s. For a tribal leader, this was a golden age, and his prestige could be said to be at its peak, so that Aguda could lead the Jurchens to defeat the Liao Kingdom. Asibao was younger than Yang Xuan, and without the blessing of Suzaku, it was impossible to succeed simply by relying on barbarism and fighting without fear of death. Fourthly, when Aguda raised his army, a group of the strongest clan groups in Jurchen history gathered around him, and a group of outstanding talents emerged. Whether it was his brother Wu Begbuy or Wanyan Zonghan and other nephews. This is something Asibao cannot have. Fifth, when A Gu raised his army, the Liao Kingdom was already in decay, and Emperor Tianzuo was even more useless. In the novel, at least the two generations of kings of the Liao Kingdom were not stupid kings. After the eldest princess came to power, she easily put down Lin Ya's kindergarten rebellion (I can't complain about this anymore). Although Yang Xuan's army pressed down on the country, at least it was much stronger than Emperor Tian Zuo. Based on these 5 aspects, I think that no matter how talented and talented Asibao is, it is impossible for him to do such a thing. Asibao's prestige within the clan is not enough, and the legitimacy of seizing power before the battle is also problematic. Experience in political and military struggles cannot be innate. There is a think tank around, but there are not too decent talents. It is not that easy to integrate a tribe, and it is difficult to control people's hearts. I think the Shegu people's branch line is a waste of pen and ink, a reverse golden finger, and completely unnecessary. In addition, some friends said that if you don't like it, you don't have to watch it and just leave. This is wrong. This is different from the flyover busking before liberation. In that case, you would look at it first, then pay if you thought it was good, and then turn around and leave if you thought it was not good. The starting point is different. I pay first and watch later. I feel bad. Even if the eunuch is discontinued, the money will not be refunded. Can't readers make a few criticisms? This is based on my feelings. Some contents are from memory. Please criticize any mistakes or omissions. I hope that Jazz can perform to his previous level in the subsequent plots and give everyone a relatively perfect ending. I personally will support you as always.

It's like the front part and the back part are replaced. It's watery and unfinished. It's a waste of money.

I feel relieved when I see that some people are still scolding me.

The repeated efforts of providing disaster relief, winning people's support, attacking local tyrants, and attacking Liao (and even going from city to city) are too sluggish. Just write about each plot once or twice. I'll say it over and over again. I regret subscribing.

Labor and capital are chasing after me one by one. What kind of nonsense is written? If you want to beg for trouble, Asibao is the protagonist. It's a waste of my monthly ticket, a waste of time, a waste of points. It's not worth reading. What kind of nonsense is written? I won't accept any refutation. I paid for it all, so I will loudly say that it's a piece of cake! Abandoned!

During the Three Kingdoms period, Zhuge Liang attacked Chencang. Tens of thousands of Shu troops attacked more than a thousand Wei troops and the defenders did not capture it for 20 days. If you look at ancient sieges, they were basically 5 to 10 times the number of troops and lives, or they were besieged and deprived of food. The protagonist has more catapults than others. Every time he writes a lot of foreshadowing, it turns out that the strategy is still filled with human lives. It really goes back to ancient times. If you attack a city, all your people will be dead in less than a day. How many days does it take a few thousand troops to capture a city? How about using that golden finger of yours? I'll accept it if you make a firecracker and listen to it. Every time I fight, I write a lot of stuff to prepare the ground. In the end, I only have one sentence to summarize and I can beat ten with one. I wrote a lot of nonsense, but why can't I withdraw money at all if I can play more and less? It's not difficult to make a Ming Dynasty-level cannon using artificial intelligence AI's fool-proof teaching. It's also possible to throw a home-made bomb from a trebuchet. It's just water, it all depends on the enemy's intelligence to win.

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If you have a supporting role, don't be schizophrenic again.

Damn it, it's still being updated. How much do you guys lick this book if it's not dead?