The Grandson of Lu Jin Under One Person

Author, if you want the heroine to be cured, then I suggest you let Chen Duo and the protagonist learn Barron's Liuku.

The meaning of life is discovery, just like you discovered this flower and I discovered you

If the author doesn't want to write fan fiction, he can write original work. It's really disgusting to have a time traveler who doesn't understand anything go around making up mysteries and confusing things that everyone knows.

Zhang Lingyu was defeated with one slap, and Lu Jin called him an expert

It's normal that no one is watching it. It dug a lot of holes in the beginning and I couldn't understand it after watching it for a long time. It was very foggy. From my personal perspective, it wasn't very comfortable to watch. I'm not used to reading novels these days. I read fan fiction to make up for what I haven't seen in the original novel, or what I want to see. I believe most readers of fan fiction are like this. The author's writing is a little more niche. Those who like it will like it, and those who don't like it should not leave negative comments. (Personal opinion, not a negative comment)

I write blindly, I just write whatever comes to my mind, but I still don't understand it. It's pretending to be suspenseful and profound, and there's no sense of immersion at all. The local characters are not as good as the time-travel characters.

The third level of rebirth and the Golden Light Curse probably cannot be practiced together. They are both about the cultivation of life and the maintenance of state. It was said during the competition between Zhang Zhiwei and the young Lu Jin that the two reached the same goal through different paths. They are completely different paths.

It's a bit pretentious and creates a lot of suspense, which makes me feel uncomfortable watching

The writing is too thin, and the character descriptions are superficial. It can be seen that the author wants to write a good story, but there are too many foreshadowings, too big and too complicated, and the writing is unstoppable. The whole story is floating and lacks effective description. Whether it is characters or events, there are all kinds of insinuations and no beginning or end. There is always one missing link, either there is a beginning but no end or there is a tail but no end. It is recommended that you write more straightforward things before you improve your writing skills, such as the most basic protagonist's combat power and life. Now there are hundreds of chapters. The protagonist has no characteristics at all and no memory points. He can do some golden light spells and physical skills in fighting scenes. It doesn't feel out of place to change the protagonist's name to Zhang Chulan. The description should be more detailed. It cannot always be "a bowl of beef noodles, delicious. The protagonist finished eating it in the past." Use multiple aspects and angles to exaggerate one thing. How fragrant the beef noodle soup is, how tender the meat is, how chewy the noodles are, and then say how delicious it is. Only then can you convince people.

I don't know what I'm writing from beginning to end.

Remember. . Remember. . It's so embarrassing for you to write so many memories. It was a mess and I had no sense of integration. I said goodbye.

Awesome, the male protagonist gets beaten in the beginning, which is worthy of being a daily guide

I endured to read Chapter 101, but couldn't get into it. This kind of reader knows that the protagonist is confused too much. I added a lot of original plots. I have written so many things that have nothing to do with the plot that I can't understand at all. What I want to see is Luo Tian Dajiao, I want to see the interaction with Zhang Lingyu, I want to see Sister Bao'er, I want to see Yao Bilian, I want to see Mr. Wang, I want to see Lao Zhang alone, but what I want to see has not appeared yet, and it has slipped away.

This one has no beginning and no end: they were being chased from the beginning, and there was no explanation of the reason or result. They just knew that both parties were fine. What they did later was the same for no reason. They were all digging a hole. The problem was that the hole was dug inexplicably.

The plot description is a mess.

Although I sympathize with Chen Duo, I feel that Chen Duo is really not suitable to be a heroine. It would be better to have a younger sister than a heroine.

I haven't read the content yet. Are you serious about the author's introduction? The protagonist is Lu Jin's great-grandson, the master's disciple? So the Heavenly Master is twice as short as Lu Jin for no reason. Alas, I don't have enough knowledge🙂

What the hell, look at it, the main text is full of water, what is it written?

Space skills are a bug in all novels. If it costs you so much, then this innate awakening is of no use! ! !

It's not interesting. This crappy book is just meant to disgust you.

I wrote 60 chapters of a memory, and my elder brother can't be so cool!

After watching it for a long time, I didn't know if the protagonist traveled through time. I didn't introduce the background or anything. This game is a bit nonsense.

Thank you all for taking the plunge!

If you want to write about the skills of the Lu family It is better to set the heroine as Linglong from the beginning. The protagonist and Lu Jin are not related by blood The original comic said clearly that the reverse birth of the Trinity Sect and the third level will not be passed on to his descendants Lu Lin is because I really can't find anyone to learn from, this is an exception The exception is just to leave a root, one is enough The protagonist will not have a chance as a relative There is also the Tongtianlu, one meaning It was given to Lingyu because he did not want to lose it Lu Jin did not regard these two skills as belonging to the Lu family at all Whether they are from the Lu family or not has nothing to do with learning them They are from the Lu family. That is not a very special situation. The third level of reverse life has not been passed down yet Especially since Lu Lin is still here. Just one will do The Lu family has one exception and it is impossible to have another one. Then the third level of reverse life is not called the Trinity Sect, it should be called the Lu family And Tongtianlu, if you don't show your talent for talismans, why should I give it to you? The Lu family doesn't play with talismans, so where can I show my talent?

If I had known better, I would have read the comments first. I wasted a lot of time.

I haven't subscribed since I started remembering 🙂

I read Chapter 20 and didn't understand it.

To be honest, the author said that your book was really a failure. But I have also read a lot of one-person fan fiction, and there are very few where Chen Duo is the heroine. Also, which timeline are you writing about? I've been reading it for a while. Even though I'm said to be immune to all kinds of poisons, I still have a bit of a problem.

The author hasn't read the original work, right? You all know about Zhang Huaiyi's battle with the alien world, but you actually said that Liao Zhong didn't know about it. It's funny. He deserves the bad book.

I don't know what I'm writing about in the whole book, it's a mess and there are all kinds of stitches.