The Rabbit on Whitebeard's Ship

Directly linked to the dream to cover the sky, the entire phantom beast species Demon Emperor Xue Yueqing fruit, it is estimated that this fruit will not be shown in the One Piece World drama

Don't write about Wano for a long time, I personally don't like rigid samurai

Ho ho ho, I think of the cat on Whitebeard's boat

😁 Let's take the form of an animal type bunny fruit phantom beast type golden retriever roar.

I don't like Wano Country because he represents Japan and describes the Japanese people as too beautiful to stand.

Writing fan fiction and asking you to write it like this is just 🐮Bi Klass, you deserve it and you can't even eat the steamed buns.

This plot is really unlikable. It takes so long to foreshadow it. If it doesn't show its effect later, it will be a waste.

When I saw that the third film had the supporting role of the useless Yu Tian and had a plot, I had no desire to watch it.

It seems that the protagonist doesn't have Goldfinger and hasn't watched One Piece yet.

The poison is gone, you guys can't stand it

Many people complained about the slow progress of the plot. Because it is my first time to write a novel, I am not sure about anything, which also causes the progress of the plot to be a bit slow. I'm very sorry about this. Let me tell you this, the plot of Whitebeard begins around Chapter 75. I hope you can forgive me.

The protagonist's personality, including some of the supporting characters, are too boring. The main protagonist is a beautiful fur tribe, and the reactions of people who see him are too bland. The protagonist's unusual appearance adds too little to the interest of the story, and is even worse than the ordinary protagonists in some pirate novels. I suggest the author work on the interaction between the main and supporting characters. The race setting of the protagonist is still very good.

It's not that a hot-blooded battle series was written by you into a farming novel. It's nb. You are really an idiot.

What is this? If I hadn't seen Wano Country, I would have doubted whether this was a fan of Pirates

The Whitebeard Pirates have almost become a zoo😅

At least the author's sentences are quite fluent, but the plot is really not good. I can't say it is poisonous, but the impression is really average.

I skipped through Chapter 3 and became a retainer for a fool? How cool Yutian's appearance is, how useless he ends up being

After looking at the table of contents, there are more than 80 chapters about Wano. It's too boring for me.

You rabbit🐰... Will you go into heat regularly?

Tell the truth. The protagonist is a rabbit with a beautiful appearance and two good brothers. This is very interesting. But the plot is a bit unsatisfactory. I was dancing the whole time. Indifference towards different appearances. There is also a passer-by personality. It all makes people feel boring and lacks the sense of excitement.

This is a pirate, why can it be so boring?

If I wasn't more passionate, this book would be gone and it would be just like a running account.

It was really boring up front, and I was very discouraged from quitting. The water tanker and refugees mentioned at the beginning are fine if you put them in the normal world, but this is the world of pirates. Is there anyone who can cut off the sea with a single blow, or can there be anyone who just goes out to sea and chops up sea kings to eat for a year?

I don't know why, I don't have a pointer and I don't have navigation skills. In the new world, a small broken ship can be brought there with just one sentence. I can bear it, but why do you write down so much detail about a meal? Is this your daily writing? 😰😰😰😰😰

Shouldn't pirates be passionate? The writing is so boring, I feel like there is no ups and downs at all

It slipped away, there were too many typos, the key was that the pronunciation was different, I couldn't ignore it, the characterization was a bit rigid, and so was the plot. It reads too stiffly

It's a pity. I wish I knew the plot 🤫 It's so bland that I don't want to watch it.

The title of the book is deceptive. It is obviously a fur tribe, but I really thought it was a rabbit.

This Kensuke is really interesting.

It feels like watching an anime, with great pictures and characters, but it's too slow, so it's only suitable for watching slowly.