Under One Person: Taoist Priest Descends the Mountain

The heroine Xia He? Are broken-shoe heroines popular now?

So again, in the world of Qi training, you can't practice Qi? I really don't understand what the author means by writing this? Waste materials, or play with contrast? If nothing else, he seemed disgusted with Du LaHou. In the past life, the social beast, the reincarnation is still an ordinary person who cannot cultivate Qi, and is sold into misery?

It's on the shelves, but I still haven't practiced Qi. I don't understand what it means to write about a fanfic where the main character can't practice Qi. There's no explanation as to why the protagonist can't feel Qi but can still practice physical fitness. How can your body be so strong if you can't absorb Qi energy? I started writing as soon as I hit my brain, and the content is sloppy.

The daily writing style is pretty good, and it's high enough to be high-quality, but the fighting feels a bit flat, with no back-and-forth exchanges. In addition, the short stories in the first few chapters are a bit unpalatable. I personally feel that writing novels is when the author leans on his own personal side. You have to tell your own story so that readers can see clearly the author's perspective.

Taoist An, the heroine, is quite embarrassing.

How can you practice life skills if you can't practice qi? Aren't you just ordinary people?

The character's personality does not match the original work. .

The writing style is also good, the male protagonist is not likeable, he is just like the silly boy Guo Jing

When I saw the Taoist priest coming down the mountain, I thought there would be a monkey-based technique and Shi Ling cuckolding the master, but in the end there was nothing and he was just an ordinary idiot-style fan 😅

Men are possessive of their partners, but Xia He's ability is charm. Can you endure your wife seducing others every day, even for fighting? But if there is no fighting, what are the highlights of Xia He's character? You can't just do it every time you appear. After you do it, there will be no role for the scene, right?

Why ask, isn't this a variant of the ancient waste stream?

It just doesn't look good, and there's no desire to continue reading. It's the kind of thing where you won't feel any problem if you skip dozens of chapters and read it again.

I suggest the author go to the Old Summer Palace and think about how to get the stolen beast back. Or go to the Memorial Hall for the Victims of the Nanjing Massacre and see if you can get back the millions of cultural relics that were looted by the Japanese. According to what you think, who were those people from the Tang Sect back then?

Can you please stop being so arrogant, Zhao Guizhen, this kind of person will die wherever he speaks. You have to kill secretly and hide it

Xia He is the heroine, which is actually quite good. Many people say that Xia He is broken, but in fact she is very dedicated and affectionate. In the original work, I like Zhang Lingyu who dares to fight against the master.

As long as he wears it early, Xia He will still be a virgin. I don't understand that, right?

The author of this novel may not like the Tang Sect very much. I have only read Chapter 232, which is about to solve the demon sword. I have not read the original demon sword chapter, but this fanfic is a plot ten years ago in the original work. The butterfly effect of the male protagonist should not be like this. The year before, Yang Lie was killed by Zhang Huaiyi. The next year, Tang Miaoxing took 20 or 30 Tang Sect masters to the northeast to find the demon sword, but they were caught up in Gao Lian's plan. The original novel Zhang Chunan and Quan Xingchuang During the Tang Sect, there were not so many characters. This directly made the Tang Sect become the next Trinity Sect. You must know that the Tang Sect will take revenge on the murderer later, but who is left in the Tang Sect? Zhang Wang or Xu Xin from the Tang Tomb. Suddenly, 90% of the personnel were reduced. The Tang Sect probably suffered the fate of the Yiqi Liu Natural Sect. You must know that after sixty or seventy years, there are still people taking revenge on the Tang Sect. Now that the Tang Sect has declined, where are the other enemies, including Quan Xing?

The male protagonist is too cheap, the plot is too bland, there aren't many people in common, and it's boring.

There is another way for the protagonist to obtain Qi Sense, which is to go to Tongtian Valley

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The latest original work Xia He may be related to the Tengshan School

The section about children is full of anecdotes. Yueyue doesn't speak, Little Swallow doesn't speak, and Duoduo doesn't speak. Why not add all those dozens of children and improve the word count?

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