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The author also has too much science popularization. I wish I had it all in one chapter. Can't I shorten it with more concise words? Some even cover a whole chapter. The protagonist drinks rice wine with his grandfather and starts to popularize the history of rice wine and the history of Lidu Town. The protagonist goes to college and goes to Shanghai to start. It starts by introducing the street scenery and customs. Every time a location appears, a page of text will be used to introduce it. When buying clothes, it will start to introduce the reason, time, and way of the rise of the brand. This is another chapter of popular science. I read novels to read the story, not to see your private goods. Does the author feel that he has researched so much information in order to write a good article? If he does not write out these information, he has wasted his energy. You can know it after you research it. Just mention it briefly. Why waste so much text?

The feeling of the big sister next door. . .

Feels like the sister next door and the little sister

I don't know how the author knew that most people like the drama of elite rebirth. Most of the people who read the novel are not ordinary people! Ordinary people can only have a sense of substitution when they are reborn. After all, those elite and successful people are only a minority!

Short hair, dull look, sharp temperament?

The fireworks in the world are the most soothing to mortal hearts. As I get older, I prefer novels with a flavor of fireworks. The same goes for writing it yourself. I hope the stories in the book can resonate with everyone.

To be honest, the career line is really awesome, with a lot of logic and practical room for operation. The author himself definitely has a real career, otherwise he would not be able to write it. Unlike many other urban novels, many plots are YY. The emotional lines are also good and relatively real. Although it is not a single heroine, there is no Long Aotian, in a word! Looks good 🔥! !

The pig's trotter family has a big business and no background. Will someone pick peaches?

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The main line is pushed too slowly. A store has not been opened for more than 30 chapters, and there are too many ineffective and boring plots interspersed in the middle. Except for the low word count, it has no effect at all. There are also writers whose parents are short-lived. The protagonist's parents deny the protagonist in various ways, which completely hinders the protagonist. Does the author think this kind of plot is very comfortable and enjoyable for readers to watch? I feel very depressed. The most critical thing is that the plot is too slow, and there are too many unimportant side plots.